The First-Rank Dao Seed

The pace is too slow, and a handyman is still scheming. After spending so many chapters to get started, aren't you going to write it? It's so procrastinating that I don't even have the desire to read it.

After engaging in such a ridiculous competition, the result was only one name registered in the House of Commons. How could the few formal disciples who had appeared be worthy of it? What the hell 🙂

Immortal Toad 20,000 was discontinued as soon as it was released. The results of this book are not as good as Xian Chan. How long do I plan to write? .

There are too many plots and plots, and it is more like a historical novel. People who read this book regard it as a fairy tale, and it feels like it is not right.

Personally, I feel that the author writes too detailedly. It takes a long chapter to explain one thing, which is too slow.

Seeing this Lei Qingyue, if you want to see a movie without a female protagonist, you can take a detour.

It's already 360,000 words. Fairy Toad is also the 360,000-word eunuch. Let's see how long you can linger this time.

Another eunuch story, yo-yo

Someone commented that the author is someone's third trumpet, which suddenly made me realize. Indeed, most novice authors who have just entered the industry do not have such writing style and the ability to construct plots and depict conflicts. This book contains more than 200,000 words. The focus of conflicts and characterization are truly exquisite and fascinating. But success is also exquisite, failure is also exquisite. If you don't read the book with your heart down, you really won't find that this is a good book that is at least above the standard. Masters can write like this because readers themselves are more tolerant, more patient, and more able to accept the sophistication of a book. But if it is a new author, a casual author, or even a middle-level author who writes like this, he will lose a large number of impatient neutral readers in the early and mid-term.       ,,,,,,,,, This is also the reason why many authors of good books have been delayed or even eunuchs due to unsatisfactory grades.

Good guy, it's the same routine as the Immortal Toad, but it's even worse. You fall into a conspiracy right from the beginning.