Lian Shen Family

It's a bit interesting, but it's too extreme. In such a cruel world of cultivation, why are you, the Li family, so awesome? You have had many near misses every time, and you have never lost in gambling until you have won everything.

Another sword practitioner. . . . . You can't write a novel now without a sword, right? I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

I can watch it, but it took too long to write about this war. The main character is chased around like a dog every day, and I don't know when he will end.

It's well written, but the main character is a bit tender, which doesn't feel right and seems out of place. Originally, this subject matter limited some readers, but then I still had the feeling to write about magic, and some readers were screened out.

Did the author sell the book after it was put on the shelves? How come the level dropped from 3.5 Stars to 1 star. The relationship between the characters and the storyline are messy. After it was put on the shelves, it drew heavily on the overseas story structure of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and lost the family-style story mode in the early stage.

Very rubbish, the sentences are not smooth, the communication is unclear who is talking to whom, the expression and narrative are very confusing

It's not suitable for me to read. It's too ruthless. My own brother can be killed without mercy. If you want to write about ruthless demons, don't write about family. When writing about family, don't write about demons. In the crisis-ridden world of immortality, family is the last refuge of tenderness. I don't see any family warmth here, only ruthlessness. Brothers, sisters, parents, and children all mercilessly use each other's corpses to refine corpses. I originally read novels to relax my mood, but reading your novels only increases my burden.

If Xiao Yu doesn't have a sound mind, it's best not to arrange for the male protagonist to have an affair with Xiao Yu, as it would be disgusting to think about it. There is a hint in a certain chapter.

Don't you think the protagonist is a boy who specializes in delivering treasures? When faced with opportunities, we are being hunted down, so why talk about cultivating demons? No luck at all.

The devil can be a little tender, but it cannot be loyal and frank. Just like the mortal cultivator Han Lao Mo is wary of everyone, but he will die quickly if he is loyal and frank.

It's not as good as the beginning, especially the plot after the foundation was injured. I basically read the table of contents.

Demonic ways are returned to the family and sacrifices are made. The sect is more bloody and has a higher death rate.

It's not a built-in one, but it's a local one.

Those who saw the zombie come in, now it fits the character of the corpse

There is a problem. Survive from desperate situations several times. There is also today's opportunity to meet a beautiful woman, and today's prison.

What have you done to achieve the golden elixir? Let's just play around with it from now on.

The writing is okay. Whether it is a sword or a knife or a spell or a charm, it is actually a kind of weapon or prop, which can serve you better and keep you alive.

The writing is okay, but too bland.

Nothing interesting, just like other novel modes

The plot structure is good, but it's a pity that the newbie's writing skills and storytelling skills are a little lacking.

Hurry up, I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time, it's so heartless

Why write about a family tradition if the writing is so ruthless?

The first chapter is suitable for changing channels, female channels, and the ones with heavy themes.

It would be nice if I made my sister the protagonist. I don't know if the author originally planned to write about the family cultivating immortals. If so, he should spend more time writing about his own clan members and less about outsiders.

It collapsed from the start! How to practice magic and your family will faint! ! !

The setting of this novel becomes more and more outrageous the more I read it.