I Am a Demon Cultivator Practicing Crazily in the Zombie World

The writing is good. I feel that the writing is decisive and decisive. Compared with other books of the same type, there is a concept in it. It is very good. I have followed it!

I'm going to talk about a classic topic again. Things you take in other worlds have to be taken away. Why does it have merit? Can't you digest the mere zombie world? Even if it cannot be digested, it means that it is something that the world was born to produce. If you took it away, but it was not played by the world organization, is it a meritorious thing? Of course, the author's setting is correct. Normally, shouldn't there be a wave of autumn wind, just catch hundreds or even thousands of zombies and run away?

The battle plot is too viciously written. The protagonist is a typical villain who talks a lot and always pretends to be awesome during the fight plot. He seems to be so awesome, but in the end he is always beaten to death by the supporting character. Time and again, time and time again, can't we just kill it instantly?

The plot is too toxic. The author looked at the first chapter and it was too confusing. After the protagonist travels through time, it is best to change him to an ordinary person, without any surprises or troubles. In this way, the plot must be promoted by the protagonist. Do not arrange accidents, and more people will watch.

Ever since Tomato published this kind of book, it has been as bad as an assembly line, and the key points are getting worse and worse.

I can't stand it, it's too confusing, I can't understand it at all Hazy (=_=)

Merit is a failure, who invented this thing? The way of heaven? It's not about saving the world. Even if everyone dies, the next batch of new humans will always evolve. The most ridiculous thing is that this thing can be used in multiple worlds.

The writing is not good, brother. You are a demonic monk, but you can be chased and beaten by a mere foundation-building monk with hundreds of thousands of souls. Isn't it embarrassing?

The writing is not bad, and compared to the same group of people who traveled through the zombie world to cultivate demons, it is superior. But there is only one problem, that is, it feels messy, the sentences are not smooth, the paragraphs are not clear, and the character dialogue is abrupt. It is recommended that the author take his time, consciously read it several times after each writing (or let the robot read it and listen to it), and polish it carefully. The future is promising ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Guys, vote. The current ending of the heroine As for the current two endings of the heroine, one is to take the wizard route, or the spiritual path, and develop separately. The other is that the protagonist stays with her for decades, grows old together, and then leaves. I prefer the second type, the first type, there are no practitioners or the kind of feeling in this book that has gone through a period of life, comprehended a series of experiences, and achieved enlightenment. Where are the brothers?

The story is okay, but the writing is terrible, and the order of sentences in each paragraph is terrible. There are also a bunch of sick sentences that I really can't stand 😓

After reading the introduction, I want to complain. In those worlds, if you do this, will there be any merit? It's fine if I don't kill you. All avenues are equal. Why do you think humans are superior? Since it's a zombie world, maybe this heaven is dominated by zombies. Will killing zombies interrupt the evolution of the world? Tell me whether you have merit or not, and whether you have suffered from heavenly calamity!

What kind of merit does a devil want? Is he a devil or a virgin bitch?

The author cannot write a book, and the article must be written on paper, not just a recitation of what was said orally. Various small errors continue. The words are wrongly written, the logic is wrong, the words are used incorrectly and are omitted... It is suspected that they were talking in their sleep while sleeping and were recorded using the voice function. I didn't check it even after I woke up, I divided it into sections and sent it directly. The biggest problem: the author's presence in the book is too strong. The plot in your book does not rely on its own extension and development, but relies on the promotion of the author's consciousness. The consciousness is sharp, so the plot is choking. Whether a book is written for others to read or for your own enjoyment, the author should think carefully about it.

Starting from Chapter 13, it feels like it was written by a different person, and the style has changed drastically, which is inexplicable!

Collected. I hope the protagonist is a real demon cultivator, not a benevolent virgin bitch demon show covered in merit and golden light.

I have too much monologue in my heart, and it's a little wet

This subject has also begun to spread.

Can the protagonist of the Demonic Way refer to the Secret Realm😄😄

The writing is OK, but there are a lot of typos. And I'm a little confused by the writing in the main world 🙂

It's exactly what I thought. Didn't the author do some research before writing the book? There are more than a dozen books with the same theme as yours from Qidian. They are all dressed in the skin of demonic monks and doing merciless things. Some people may read it with expectations in the first few dozen chapters. How many people will read it after a hundred books?

The writing is very messy, and I feel like the previous text and the following text don't make sense.

There is a logical inconsistency in writing this. Killing people will have karma, killing demons will not, and saving people will have merits. It is useful when overcoming tribulations. Then these merits should be humane merits, but demons are also members of humanity.

The writing is so poor, there are many bad sentences and typos. Segment too short

As for other things, it's easy to say that the combat power is just spoken, and there are often different descriptions before and after, which is the most annoying. If you want to make a mistake, you should think clearly before writing. Don't change a little bit later if you think you have improved too quickly. It will be annoying if you change too much ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

Update, one chapter a day is too little, the donkeys in the production team are much more diligent than you.

I've finished chasing it now because I like the demonic protagonist and I think it's still worth watching. There are some mistakes that the author may not realize when he reads them. You can open the robot and listen to them yourself before posting. Also, it is recommended to ask more questions when writing. It can be said that the part written so far has nothing to do with the title. Readers who are interested in practicing magic in the last days will only find the content more and more confusing. .

The heritage of many different civilizations is very vast. Even if the level of the world of cultivating immortals is very high, don't underestimate it in the middle and low levels. Even if the level of the wizarding world is not as good as yours, you may be killed by others who cross the realm.

I'm curious how you guys read on. The previous text doesn't match the rest of the story. I can't understand the progression of the plot at all. It's too abstract 😂

The first few chapters were okay, but then someone else wrote it, and the writing was really bad. .