Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Refining Corpses

I feel that this novel is indeed a bit messy, and the protagonist's life should be resolved as soon as possible. Don't live for only a few years. What is it like to be an immortal? And to be honest, I feel that the plug-in of yours is very rigid. I won't say that the protagonist is not necessarily very talented. You have the proficiency of the plug-in. Isn't it good to add a deduction ability or fusion to it? According to your title, the protagonist will rely on puppets to fight countless people in the future, but the quality should also be there. There is a deduction fusion and other abilities that the protagonist can follow up on his own skills. Kung Fu, Kung Fu is not created by human immortals, ancient human immortals, etc. If you are afraid of being invincible, you can go a little slower, but you can't live without it. To be honest, it doesn't make sense to see plug-ins that are very dependent. The protagonist can create even slower. It is a metaphor for the protagonist to be a mass-produced puppet zombie, creating a passive skill (for digitized readers, look at the protagonist), steel skin, and then the passive ant power will gradually become stronger, and the active skill will attack violently (the effect increases the damage ten times). Isn't this great? This way, there are many ways to play, and there are many upper limit potentials, anyway. Author, you can make things right no matter what you write in the future, any plot can be achieved, but it relies too rigidly on other people's skills and techniques. I feel that it is not fun to just focus on proficiency. There are too many people writing about this kind of proficiency now.

The iron corpse has such high intelligence, or is it a female corpse? What does the author want to do? Cultivation to immortality is not a romance. This setting is bad enough. It also asks whether to kill or not to kill. If killed, this female corpse will be the protagonist. If killed, the proficiency will be transferred.

It's so beautiful 😭. I've never read such a beautiful book in my life. 😭 Everyone, please come and take a look. My hypotension has been cured.

This writing feels like a dream, chaotic

It's short and weak, and I'm quite speechless. If you want to introduce the world view, you don't need to squeeze out toothpaste bit by bit, right?

It looks a bit tiring, and I feel like it could be polished a bit. The article is not too smooth to read, and it would be better if the narrative were clearer.

There is a problem with the construction of this world. Those cultivating sects are just doing nothing. Let you, an evil disciple, become the emperor. You want to eat it. There are so many pig seeds for you to occupy.

The biggest flaw of this book is that as the protagonist who cultivates immortality, he has low own strength and relies on conspiracy and conspiracy to leapfrog and kill people. There is nothing wrong with it. It is a cool point. But you can do it once, two, three, or four times, not five, six, seven, eight or nine times. In the new book stage, the protagonist has no strength at all when he practices Qi. , And every time I was forced to kill the enemy by leapfrogging, and each time it happened in a chain, so that every time I had to risk my life to kill the enemy in a dangerous way, even if I picked up money ten times, I would wonder if someone was fishing. You repeatedly write about practicing Qi and killing the enemy by leapfrogging, I really don't understand what's so cool about it. It is as simple as killing enemies by leapfrogging. What is the meaning of these so-called enemies that the author arranged to kill? There are no benefits! No benefit means no fun!

Abuse of the main article makes me feel depressed after reading it. I don't want to read it anymore. It's annoying.

The protagonist is so incompetent and still looks like a big cock that he is not worthy of carrying shoes for the supporting character Xu Yi. . . You are not an invincible plug-in. You have practiced one level of Qi and defeated a hundred miscellaneous soldiers. How dare you show your teeth to a country that has been around for 500 years? What do you think?

Not so good! Really, not down to earth, see the Bodhisattva heart in Chapter 4! Written by a novice in the workplace, the author must be very young! So naive

In fact, the author made a mistake in the beginning. He wanted to create a character who rose up in adversity, but his writing skills were not good enough, so he could only patch it together like patches. I suggest the author take a look at Gou Zai Shen Wei World. In fact, there is no need to be so fancy at the beginning.

Next time I publish a chapter, I'll give it a rough look. It's okay to have typos, but at least the sentences are smoother. You can still guess the typos. If the sentences are not fluent, it will be very troublesome to read. After thinking about the arrangement of sentences, the basic plot is confused, and the thoughts are interrupted. After reading the story, I can't figure out the plot of the story.

Overall, I think it looks pretty good. It was a bit chaotic at first, but then it gradually got better. Except for the fact that one level of Qi training can control seven or eight levels of Qi training, which is unreasonable.

There are a lot of typos and the plot is confusing. I say goodbye.

After seeing more than 80 pictures, I'm only practicing the second level of Qi. It's too slow. Also, the protagonist feels aggrieved along the way.

I'd like to give you some advice. Don't be so tight and let the pig's feet shine when appropriate. It's a bit annoying to keep pressing them like this.

Your word order is so messed up, it makes me so uncomfortable to read.

It makes my brain hurt to see it, what a mess

My writing is getting more and more messy, the paragraph divisions are a mess, my head hurts, goodbye

Ah, why do authors like to write about being cheated so much now?

There are too many typos, the plot is too confusing, the Qi training level keeps jumping up and down, and the main text keeps being abused...

Today's chapter is completely different from the previous one👎👎

The first thirty chapters of this book are a bit confusing, but it gets better and better later on. Don't be dissuaded by the front, keep reading, and you will find that this book is really good.

Just one sentence, go back and work hard

It's okay, I personally think it's okay

The plot is unconventional and looks good. It has many advantages but also just as many disadvantages! The most outrageous thing is that the combat power fluctuates up and down. One moment he talks about the seven or eight levels of Qi Refining of the Iron Corpse. One moment he talks about five or six. One moment he goes three or four. The protagonist's pseudonym is Liu Yan. Now he is called Liu Yan, and now he is called by his real name. The most important thing is that the real name is still being hunted. I feel like I wrote it drunk. Every day is a new beginning. Everything I wrote yesterday is completely overturned.

There is something there, but not much. The pressure at the beginning was too heavy, and the novel about cultivating immortals had a stream of consciousness, which resulted in the plot being too tight. No matter how much I wrote later, it couldn't be corrected. The ending of 1 million words should still be broken, but it would be difficult to write more.

I can only say that the author's latest pictures are pretty good and they have made great progress, keep up the good work💪

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