Baldur's Gate 3: A Pandaren's Adventure

The little girl who looks like an adult but is actually an underage chicken farmer, the disciples of Selun who were bewitched and brainwashed by Shar, the vampire spawn who was raised as livestock, the honey elect with a nuclear bomb buried in his body, the druid who was forced by a she-bear, the son of Baal who was tortured to the point of amnesia, the brave Taff who was beaten to amnesia by the son of Baal, the Shandrall whose soul was torn in half, and the tiefling barbarian who was dug out and transformed by the big devil. The composition of this group of people is very complex.

What you wrote at the beginning is quite discouraging, so I briefly read it. 1. The player's perspective is too serious, with no sense of crisis or urgency at all. What is the situation at this moment? As the protagonist who has played the game, isn't he afraid? Is the little devil powerful? What should I do if I can't defeat it? What should I do if the devil kills the illithid and I can't escape? The most important thing is this is a battlefield, will I die? It will be fine if the game is not triggered, but for the protagonist at this time, it is the real world, and no one can say what will happen in the next second. 2. The problem of character supermodel. At this time, the chicken girl is a cruel and ruthless mature warrior who is loyal to the race and the queen and fanatical. Shadow Heart is a believer who has been trained by Shar Priest for many years. One of the trainings she has received is to torture others. Your character description doesn't bring it up at all, and there is a strong Japanese light novel unfolding. After Yingxin was rescued, he touched the panda fur, and the protagonist shouted in his heart: Don't think I am a real panda. Considering the character's background, do you think this is okay? 3. The protagonist's body shape is not reflected in the battle. I hope the author will work harder and refine it more carefully.

Instead of reading your novel, why don't I play it myself... I thought I could write some special plots about Pandaren, but it turns out it looks like a modded game, with almost a one-to-one copy of the text. Even if the protagonist knows what's going on, the reaction is exactly the same as the protagonist in a normal game. It's really boring to watch.

What's the difference between this and playing it again myself? I can memorize the plot. I thought it was a novel about the orthodox Faerun continent that explains in detail the world view of Faerun and the geographical details of Baldur's Gate. I didn't expect it to be a retelling of the plot of the game.

Do you want to start the game with all players at level one? Isn't this a big question in writing? The game process should not take more than half a year. It takes half a year for you to bring a team of first-level rookies to a level where they can kill the Three Gods of Death and face the mastermind? Moreover, Karak is Zariel's favorite warrior, and Will is also a Blade of the Frontier. After signing the contract, he directly watched the Dragon Witch Cult. The two chosen gods of Shadow Heart have been trained since childhood. Are these people only at the first level?

After following it for a week, your biggest problem is that you can't read the plot, and you can't see the expectations for the follow-up, and you are completely following the plot.

I read the latest chapter and I was really speechless. The plot in the game is fixed, so the Mage Tower must be given to Roland. You have written the plot yourself, and you still have to give the Mage Tower to Roland. I can't figure it out.

After thinking about it for so long, I finally felt that something was wrong. The protagonist was too tool-like, and any decision was the optimal solution. His mental activity is at the level of a slap in the face (only emotions, no thinking), his spirit is firm, he is not hesitant, his movements are smooth, and he is full of "special forces" style. There is also a template for the protagonist. It is best not to come out of thin air. You can say that this is a MOD designed by yourself. Don't be too fussy about the specific settings. The reason why I say this is because most of what you write here is a retelling of the plot.

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There is an idea for the Baldur's Gate 3 fanfic. The protagonist travels through this world and first opens a game company. , Making games for sale, let's start with the Baldur's Gate 12 series 🙂