Tales of Strange Things in the Incense-Burning Realm

Regarding the writing characteristics of the author of Poujie: 1. There are too many settings and the text is empty. (Hydrology) 2 There are too many structures and the protagonist is unable to upgrade. (Can only dig holes) 3 The worldview deviates from common sense and is self-contradictory. (Weird can kill people, but people can't kill Weird. No one can press Newton's coffin board.) 4 Create your own realm and don't know what it means. (If you kill ghosts, you have to kill ghosts. If you insist on killing gods, isn't it in vain that gods are so easy to kill and become demons and gods?) 5 Good gods, devils and monsters insist on getting some Mary Sues. (Either the adopted son is causing trouble or the sister is not her biological child.) 6 The routine is blunt. (It is puzzling that the protagonist has to take revenge by destroying the whole family, and the author has to go begging with a bowl.)

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} [Content]: 🍮The male protagonist was taken away by his ancestor, and his soul was placed in an incense burner. He traveled to an era of spiritual recovery and placed it on the incense table to receive incense offerings. The male protagonist discovers that the incense burner can refine other people's memories and obsessions. By collecting the power of incense and wishing, you can fulfill other people's wishes, strengthen your spiritual consciousness, and learn other people's techniques. [Book Title]: Burning Incense Zhiyi [Author]: Bronze Abyss [Label]: Resurrection of Spiritual Energy [Status]: 50,000 words in serialization [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: Point 1: The author's setting of incense burner cultivation is very novel, and the construction of the world background is also very complete. Point 2: Regarding the conspiracy to seize the body, and the memory of the ancestor of the Chen family, we see a darker background, showing human nature and reality. Point 3: The male protagonist, as an incense burner, opens his eyes to see all kinds of people in the temple, lends a helping hand at the right time, and witnesses the desire, kindness, and humanity in the world. [Pictures]: Pictures and text have nothing to do with it

The story is good, but it's too convoluted and complicated. It would be nice if it could be simplified.

The content of the story is really good

Why do I always feel that many sentences don't make sense? And the introduction is already an old Taoist priest. Why do I need to add a short sentence?

It looks good. I like the feeling of slow puzzle solving, like a physical book. Good luck to the author.

The writing is messy. That's how it started. He traveled through the past and became a tool spirit that could read the memory of the incense burner instead of his thoughts at that moment, which was extraordinary. Later, there was a new one where you could borrow incense ash to become a third perspective, and it gradually became this one where you could look around everywhere, which completely tore up the foundation. There is no one else. Even if you watch, you can still hear what is being said and what is being thought. This makes me even more speechless.

Then there is the fact that the power system is completely unclear. There are some reasonings that I don't understand

Overall it's pretty good. Group portrait description is okay. But the plot advances too slowly, the protagonist can be cautious, but the supporting characters have too many subtle psychological descriptions and are too complicated.

The writing is foggy, messy, and mysterious.