Tales of Strange Things in the Incense-Burning Realm

Regarding the writing characteristics of authors who flopped: 1. Too many settings, resulting in a hollow main text. (Hydrology) 2. Too much complexity hinders the protagonist's development. (It only creates plot holes.) 3. The worldview deviates from common sense and is self-contradictory.

#New Book Preview# [Content]: 🍮The male protagonist was possessed by an ancestor, and his soul was placed in an incense burner. He then traveled to an era of spiritual revival and was placed on an incense table to be worshipped. The male protagonist discovers that incense burners can refine the memories and obsessions of others.

The story is good, but it's too drawn out and verbose; it would be better if it were simplified.

The story is really good.

Why do I always feel that many sentences don't make sense? Also, why is there a small "little" in the introduction when the person is already an old Taoist priest?

It's great! I love the slow, deliberate puzzle-solving process; it feels like a physical book. Keep up the good work, author!

The writing is a complete mess. It starts like this. He transmigrates and becomes a spirit of an artifact, able to read the memories of those who burn incense, not just their fleeting thoughts—that's already excessive. Then comes something even more absurd: he can use incense ash to gain a third-person perspective, gradually evolving into someone who can also observe everything, completely…

Then there's the fact that the power system is completely unclear. Some of the reasoning isn't understood.

Overall, it's quite good. The ensemble cast is well-developed. However, the plot progresses too slowly. While the protagonist's caution is acceptable, there is too much and too much miscellaneous psychological description of the supporting characters.

The writing is vague, incoherent, and deliberately mysterious.