I Am Gwen's Spider-Man Mentor

Highlight 1: The characters are well developed. Gwen Spider is the same as Spider-Man. Although she is a virgin, she is by no means stupid. Most American comic novels portray Spider-Man as a young, stupid and virginal character, proving that they have never read Spider-Man comics. Highlight 2: This is by no means a brainless story. The protagonist's own thinking and the game with the White House and various intelligence agencies are very interesting, and you can clearly feel that everyone in this game does not want to lose, so everyone does their best to use the resources in their hands to achieve their own goals. Point 3: Both the protagonist and Gwen have attachment and fear for each other in their hearts. However, as a time traveler, the protagonist only fears the distance between ordinary people and superheroes. However, Gwen has different values ​​​​from the protagonist [never kill] and a sense of strangeness that she has no understanding of the protagonist. This leads to the fact that if someone chooses to escape from this emotional vortex in the future, it will only be Gwen. In other words, it is very likely that there will be a phase of chasing husbands in the crematorium that everyone loves to see. Disadvantage 1: The protagonist is too weak. The author seems to be creating a purely intelligent mastermind type protagonist, but the problem is that this is an American comic, and what most readers want to see is a protagonist with fighting capabilities. Of course, this does not mean that purely intelligent characters are not good. Both Batman and the Punisher are good examples of mortal superheroes. Their most powerful qualities are their intelligence and intelligence capabilities. They are proficient in psychology, reasoning, various fighting, and weapon usage techniques. More importantly, they have equipment that can amplify these abilities. Disadvantage 2: The author's only mistake in shaping the protagonist is that he wanted to create a messy time traveler who has experienced the darkness of society and given up the light in his heart, but ignored the most primitive and basic motivation of time travellers in American comics - survival. American comics, this is an American comic. As a time traveler, you can't tell whether this world is a comic or a movie. How dare you mess up? Not afraid of death? It's definitely impossible. After all, the protagonist's series of actions later are all to climb to a higher place to protect Gwen and himself. How can he not be afraid of death? Then the question is, fear of death is the instinct of all human beings. After knowing all the disasters in the American comic world that are beyond human imagination, how can the protagonist dare to act badly? At first, I thought that the protagonist found Stark because he wanted to use Stark's research equipment to do his own research and make his own small equipment. However, when I wrote about Gwen joining the research laboratory later, no equipment of the protagonist's own appeared. Even, even, he won't even carry a gun with him! Brother, this is an American comic, an American comic that is a thousand times more dangerous than Mexico and the Golden Triangle in real life. A superhero or a super weirdo may pop up on the street at any time. Even if you are not afraid of them attacking you, aren't you afraid of the damage caused by the aftermath of their attack? Disadvantage 3: The author's understanding of the world seems insufficient, or he deliberately ignores some places. In the process of the protagonist's pursuit of power, the author reveals a very important point in his description of social public opinion and the confrontation between the Intelligence Agency and the White House. [Power is more important than superpowers] Is this really the case? We must know that power comes from the people, and the power represented by official positions lies in the power given to them by the people in society. The most basic principle behind the emergence of this power is that the power of the collective is greater than the power of the individual. In other words, the importance of power will only appear when collective power can affect individuals. But what about the superhero world? When the individual's ability far exceeds that of the collective, is the power of the collective so important? The answer is undoubtedly no. The author is recommended to take a look at the Hong Kong comic Hai Hu. The world of Hai Hu is about what happens when individual abilities far exceed collective abilities. The authoritative individual will be worried because his power is not as good as that of the super individual, and the super individual will be angry because of the short-sightedness of the authoritative individual. Unless there is a lubricant between the two, there will be no possibility of compatibility. Otherwise, why do authoritative individuals in American comics, such as the President, General Ross, and Congressman UN, all pursue superpowers? Because they understand that power comes from other individuals, and superpowers and power come from themselves. Finally, the simplest way to put it is that the protagonist can of course become a behind-the-scenes mastermind type character who can strategize to help Gwen Spider eliminate all social difficulties. But what if this difficulty is greater than society itself? What about Thanos, the Celestials, or even other superheroes and super villains? When social resources such as the military and police are useless, what can a protagonist who is powerless and powerful do? Throw a mushroom bomb? What does Gwen think? What if the incoming enemy can't even use mushroom bombs? Are you standing aside and OMO? So my suggestion is that if the author wants to write a protagonist with high intelligence and the mastermind behind the scenes, no problem. But it is better to write the protagonist as a Batman, who uses the social resources in his hands to enhance his power, and uses his own power to solve the threat when the social resources are helpless against the threat. After all, only by possessing wisdom, strength and power can an individual survive in the super world.

The protagonist has some brains, but not much... There have been so many intrigues and intrigues. In the final analysis, not pursuing strength is the biggest stupidity in this American comic world. But so far, after reading more than 30 comics, I found that the protagonist has no such ideas at all... Whether it is a hot talk or psychological consultation, it needs to be clear that if you want to convince a powerful person, the best way is to convince him first! Naruto understands this, but the protagonist, who is a genius, does not understand?

Saw Chapter 27. I'm really lucky to have read this book, and it's a great read. I don't read many online novels, I prefer reading literary works. Therefore, when I read online books when I'm bored, I feel really uncomfortable when I see books in which the protagonist's personality has not changed, the character creation is very pale, and the storyline is monotonous. I think getting stronger, upgrading, and having revenge will not make a good story. Spiritual growth, personality change, collision of ideas, and the conflicts and contradictions that occur in these processes will tell a good story. Woohoo, the author should update it quickly. Why is it only 170,000 words? Hurry up and write it. By the way, I would like to ask the author what books he usually reads and what books he recommends.

Too late, I can imagine every chapter before it is released, but in that kind of movie, every second of the character's performance is written down in detail... Oh, I can feel the tension of being so detailed. Each plot seems to have been read a lot, with very few actual character dialogues, and psychological description activities taking up most of it. I had a hunch in the first paragraph of the first chapter when you started it! I guess, I guess, the author may feel that the audience does not understand Chaoying's heart when watching a Chaoying movie. Just a few lines are too dry and the expression is not perfect. Write a novel for us to read with the understanding of a film critic. As readers, we can figure it out. If your dialogue is exciting enough, we can figure it out and write more chapter reviews to make your novel seem to have more chapter reviews. But you don't give us a chance, there are too many psychological activities. I think it only took ten minutes to make a movie of the content before it was put on the shelves. If you look at it professionally, it would probably be less than ten minutes. Is it necessary to explain this or that? Wouldn't it be nice to describe it in such a way that it depends on your specific actions and the characters automatically make up your mind? Of course, the reason why I write a book review is because I feel that your book may be saved. With a faint hope, let me write a book review and finally open it up. After all, it's rare that I can picture the content of each chapter of yours, but it's just one advantage. It's not much, but it's worth mentioning to the author.

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The writing is really good, and there are few Marvel works that you can read with your mind. People who like to read mentally retarded novels may not be used to this work. There is no Facebook-like intelligence reduction operation. There is no weak underlying logic that just shouting and killing can solve all problems. There are just invisible confrontations again and again, from the battlefield of public opinion to political games. It feels like there will even be an economic war in the later stage, and I am very much looking forward to the macro war when the Chitauri invade. Full order and follow-up reading, looking forward to the author's follow-up writing.

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Has the protagonist always been an ordinary person? No offense, but in the Marvel world, you, an ordinary person, cannot play with your brain. The protagonist of Deathstroke in American comics is already very strong, and the spiritual mentor is not weak either. You, an ordinary person, are the protagonist. . . To put it bluntly, if you are unlucky enough to be affected by a villain, you may die. . . . I have relatively little knowledge, but of the characters I know, Iron Man is a human, but he has a suit, and Hawkeye is also a high-level agent, not to mention Natasha. Most of the other ordinary people I know are either powerful or powerful. You, an ordinary person, are playing tricks on your brain? Why? Just because you are the protagonist?

I just read Chapter 5 and I'm not happy about it. Why can the protagonist accuse Gwen? Gwen will be criticized by the protagonist if she does good things with her superpowers. So can the protagonist be shot directly if she works in Stark Industries to develop military weapons? Gwen is also asked to reflect on the reasons for the appearance of criminals. Isn't it the protagonist's own reflection? The protagonist is a teacher in school. Shouldn't the protagonist bear some responsibility for bullying? Because of the disparity between rich and poor, robbers appear. Should the protagonist bear some responsibility if he works for the military-industrial complex? Because there are problems with the political system, criminals continue to appear. The protagonist sees it so clearly. Why doesn't the protagonist go into politics to correct the social system? Why doesn't the protagonist accuse Stark of developing weapons? Why not blame the President of the United States? Why are you blaming Gwen here? Do good people deserve to be robbed and pointed at?

The author's initial character design for the protagonist should be calm, calm, wise, strategic, and skilled. As a result, the plot of Gwen's first healing was awesome in the first half, but turned into a light comedy in the second half. The atmosphere change was too stiff and the protagonist's character was fragmented. There is no golden finger to climb up. The focus at that time should be healing. It was the first time I saw a girl with her back at a loss. It was so strange. It felt like the protagonist had no priority. In the following plot, the protagonist is fully exposed. He is arrogant, blind, stupid, willful and stubborn. I have been slapped in the face many times and I still don't have a long memory. Especially in the latest chapter, it was clear that he had suffered a loss just before because of his arrogance, and he looked down on Kingpin. This time, he was very arrogant and felt that his entire shield was invincible. As a result, he was immediately disabled by SHIELD's jammer. The protagonist doesn't have a backup plan and wants to be reckless. No, how can the protagonist be so reckless? Can he use his amateur IPSC training to hold a pistol and fight against the automatic firearms of professional special forces? If Gwen hadn't come to save his life, he would have suffered again. The frequency with which the protagonist gets slapped in the face after being confident and pretentious is comparable to the frequency with which the villain in early novels was slapped in the face by the protagonist. It is very, very difficult to hold back. The author also complained about the cancellation of the follow-up order. It will definitely be released. I want to save my breath and see the protagonist proud and proud. Who wants to get up at 7 o'clock in the morning and squeeze into the subway to watch the protagonist eat and play.

The author has worked hard to write relevant intellectual and political battles, and Gwen has indeed been written as a flesh-and-blood, non-stereotype character. But here's the problem, this is the world of Marvel (American comics? Catwoman is not from Marvel, right). Until after the subscription, the protagonist has always been an ordinary person without extraordinary powers. All the methods are basically political methods. Is it possible that you could write it down in a book and the protagonist will be a political hero in the end? Politics man? After encountering a big incident, go and argue with a bunch of politicians? Going to give a speech to a public reporter? And then start a business war? I don't know that official literature has been banned for hundreds of years. The audience taste of American comic-themed online novels and the core of the novel are not politicians' nonsense. Writing these will only become more and more brain-consuming and fail to retain people. No chance to see you again. . .

The main problem is that the updates are too slow. The protagonist's lack of superpowers is actually a trivial matter. The narrative rhythm can be well written and the characters are well created. It is not a mindless novel. At least the heroine Gwen of this book is not a mindless and characterless figure in other Spider-Man novels. She is just an accessory to the protagonist.

The emotions are written really delicately, and it's the rare character creation I've been looking for. But suppressing strength is really a flaw! I have always wanted to emphasize how smart the protagonist is, but also emphasize how ordinary and neither above nor below. The Iron Man next door is about to create the Iron Legion, and the concept of a star-simulating device has also been proposed, but the result is still the same as a small prop. So frustrating! I finally helped Stark solve some of the reasons for his poisoning, and emphasized on the star-simulator, which was almost completed. But you told me that you gave me a portable Mark 5 that was neither good nor bad... You are capable of developing new materials and new suits, but in the end, you still need charity from others. What a strong sense of fragmentation. Gwen's writing is great. I saw the only one in Qingming who wrote about Gwen carefully and vividly. The others are just weird, they are all background versions. The protagonist also has a strong sense of fragmentation and unstable character. It does not describe the improvement of combat power or the changes in the psychological journey. It is not correct, and it is not that it is not described, but it is mixed together in a chaotic state. Mentioned the need to develop artificial intelligence for drones, mentioned the cold nuclear reactor production line, and an inexplicable pet drone. He also emphasized that it was not very intelligent and was just a pure toy, and then disappeared and retired. Crazy! The journey in my heart is the same. I have always emphasized that I am an ordinary person, but as a result, I can shoot fiercely with a small pistol. No matter where I practice it, I am surrounded by special forces and fight fiercely. I just want to add personality and combat power to the protagonist, and try my best to suppress the combat power. We are not afraid, this is the Marvel world, your fighting power is overwhelming, the protagonist is better than a weak hero like Black Widow, but in the end, we still try our best to emphasize ordinary people. It has a strong bitterness, but the performance is under control. As I read it, I felt like I was about to burst. The only and really great Gwen is the highlight of this book. It can be seen that the author puts all his energy on Gwen. It is worth reading for Gwen, but the others are... I can't stand it! What is this, this is gold inlaid ah ah ah ah ah

I would like to remind the author that the name Gwen is considered a nickname Gwen. The official full name is Gwendolyn, which can be translated as Gwendolyn/Gwendolyn. Her full name is Gwendolyn Maxine "Gwen" Stacy

No, this Madonna is too serious. If she wants to kill you, you won't kill them, but you will save them. If it were a Spider-Man unit drama, these would be no problem. But this is an American comic, a collection of multiple heroes, with various evil anti-heroes. These anti-heroes have killed thousands of people, so you don't kill them like Batman, lock them up, wait for them to escape from prison each time, then kill again, and then lock them up again. There are even alien invasions, and there are aliens who look like humans, so why don't you kill them? If so, then I can say that this Spider-Man deserves to die. He does not conform to the values ​​and interests of most humans and is a bit anti-human. The lives of those murderers are lives, but the lives of those who are killed are not.

This is the first time I've seen someone in the American comic world who doesn't pursue power, but pursues power alone. This is a comic who killed half the people in the universe with a snap of his fingers.

，😞，，，， At first, I thought that the perspective of the male protagonist plus the words of the black young man who was subdued by Gwen would be the starting point for becoming Gwen's mentor. I would provide guidance, correct absolute justice and absolute kindness, retain justice and kindness while removing innocence and recklessness, and add the necessary decisiveness and ruthlessness (I don't know if ruthlessness is the right word). Of course, we still change slowly one by one. But after Gwen was injured, to put it simply, the male protagonist felt distressed. He reflected on his thoughts after time travel and decided to help Gwen. During the treatment, the relationship between the two soared. . . This is American love. 😵😵 Perhaps it's because the male protagonist did not have a super-powerful golden finger from time travel. To young readers, I feel that he should be a cautious, steady, calm, deliberate and relatively restrained person, so that he can grow up well and achieve today's achievements. So when it comes to treating Gwen, it's time to quickly clean up the front and back, not a youth romantic comedy. 😓😓

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Boring, uninteresting, a bunch of didactic reflection. Some people think that the Multi-Tower God Cult is awesome and has great attack power! Look down on individual excellence. The problem is, even with the mysterious technologies in the Three-Body Problem, the beings who use them are super powerful. It can only be said that using super technology has the lowest individual ability value, and it also has the best ability value. Even if it is low, it is still high level for many life forms with average technology.

In the world of American comics, it is not interesting to pursue the improvement of personal strength, but still engages in intrigues in the political field, working hard for a position as a spokesperson for a Tony company. Is it interesting?

The Gwen spider is the most awkward I have ever seen. I strongly recommend the author to write female novels. With this level of description, it is absolutely impossible to scorn the modern female writers, and they must be top writers.

In this world of superheroes versus supervillains, it can be said that individual power is definitely greater than institutional power. How can you, an ordinary person, rely on yourself to defend yourself? Pistol? Not to mention Magneto, even Sandman can ignore it. The power of the system? He's already a supervillain, and he's either fake or outright ignored. Hire other superheroes as bodyguards? It can be solved by finding someone to contain it, not to mention assassination, hypnosis, teleportation, and poisoning. There will always be a time when you are alone. For a protagonist who has no ability to defend himself and is still causing trouble, it is most unreasonable for him to live peacefully all the time. Even Kingpin, the representative of the behind-the-scenes mafia character, still has strong combat power, and Mazefak is still a former agent. What does your protagonist have? Brain? There are a lot of heroes and villains with high IQs.

I fell in love with Gwen after watching Spider-Verse for the first time. I went home and watched Parallel Universe again to find a specific character description to describe Spider-Gwen, but unfortunately it was still very hazy. I wanted to find novels and read other people's descriptions to make my image of Gwen more concrete, but unfortunately, most of the character descriptions and writing styles in the novels I found were not flattering or different. After watching the movie the second time, I told my friends that Gwen is a bit like Lin Xingjie in Invading the Human World, but when I think about it carefully, both of them are independent people, and their attractive points are also different. Spider-Gwen has the familiarity and talkativeness of the neighborhood hero Spider-Man. She likes to complain and talk to herself during battles. In life, due to the loss of her good friend Peter and her father's disapproval and misunderstanding of Spider-Man's career, no one can express her emotions. She closes her own world and seems a little lonely. She can only devote her emotions to the drum set and superhero career, but at the same time she also longs for someone to talk to. In his heart, there is what the author calls an almost pedantic (perhaps exaggerated) sense of justice and Spider-Man's persistence to constantly get up. Who wouldn't like Spider-Gwen, a cool genius who can play the drums, is good at complaining, is strong, independent, self-loving and sensitive at the same time, and is also full of energy and charm. Originally, it was just an accidental recommendation post that made me see this book. The public title put me down. I didn't expect the writing at the beginning to be unexpected. I was afraid that it was an illusion caused by the fan effect. The feedback from the recommendation to friends is indeed good. I believe that the author's writing style can write the characters and stories in the author's heart. I hope the author can persevere and finish her. I am really looking forward to the vivid characters (mainly Gwen and the male protagonists) and stories in this book.

I've seen Chapter 154 so far, so I'll post a short comment to mark it. This unique Marvel novel is different from other RPG-style Marvel novels. The protagonist is an operator. What makes him outstanding is that he has both excellent scientific research talents and a keen political sense. This allows the protagonist to recruit sponsors to increase combat power while calling a group of people to increase the enemy's strength on another track called politics. There is a lot of writing on Gwen Line, and it can be seen that she was written with great care. Although I personally feel that she sometimes adds chaos to the protagonist, it is undeniable that she is indispensable. The latest chapter, Chapter 154, also summarizes her significance to the protagonist very well.

What a pity, starting point is the best Spider-Man fanfic. I hope the author can update it again