Cultivation: Tracing Origins to Extract Alchemy Arts

Your talent has no limitations; you can just find what you're lacking and go back to its source. I've only used it once so far. I haven't seen any downsides.

Many novels about independent cultivators fail to capture the feeling of their wandering and hardship.

Withdrawals are only available once every two years, which takes too long and is pointless. Intentionally suppressing the main character's feelings is not satisfying at all.

Judging from the first chapter, according to the author's setting, basically one in ten thousand people has a top-grade spiritual root. Wouldn't that make Golden Core cultivators everywhere and Nascent Soul cultivators as worthless as dogs? They didn't even bother to think about the setting properly.

Well, the protagonist's personality isn't very likable... He's barely become an alchemist before he's eager to join a faction, and then he starts putting on airs with his relatives, acting like: "I'm an alchemist now, I'm already someone important." The thing is, these relatives haven't really done anything to the protagonist; they even lent him out their spirit pet before... Can a protagonist like this really succeed?

Your plot is completely unengaging.

If everyone cultivates, where will the resources come from?

There's no point in bowing and scraping to that uncle.

After all, she was one of my favorite authors, so I'll give her a vote.

Write 4,000 words a day, keep writing, and become a platinum-level author on Qidian as soon as possible!