Mortal: I Am Not That Quhun

I said why is it so unpopular that no one can speak out? It turns out that you have to give some coins to start speaking out. It was so outrageous from the beginning.

The preface does not match the postscript, and the writing has no logic.

Sometimes he is a boy, and sometimes he is Zhang Tie. Unify the subject. Every time a copy is completed, there is no result. The next copy is written with a single stroke at the beginning, and the author writes whatever he wants. There are also typos in wrong sentences. To be honest, the idea of ​​​​this book is quite good. As long as the combat effectiveness is not out of touch, there will be no problem. It is a pity.

Author, are there two protagonists in this book? Or is it Zhang Tie's personality? One is a young man and the other is a giant man? We are reading a book, not listening to someone talk about it. There is Zhang Tie in front of us. Generally speaking, reading a book is to experience it on behalf of the protagonist. I hope it can be changed later. The subject matter is not bad, but the writing style is a bit bland. Support it.

Yes, in the book I hate most, you are the first book that I can read the latest chapter in one breath. Come on, I wish you better and better as you write!

Congratulations on successfully completing the book! When will the next book be released?

The author should update it quickly, it's not enough!