Weird Sequence: Immortality Begins from Chinese Martial Arts

. After reading the first few chapters, my cerebellum almost shrank. Is this a modern government? Let's at least have some common sense. When something like this happens, it's the first time. Eliminate foreign enemies. This can be seen from the Wenchuan earthquake. The state agencies are like a small gangster organization.

The book is okay, but there is too much water in some places. Give me a detailed introduction to what an administrative secretary does.

Isn't this official statement too far? It has no effect at all. You have to spend money to buy the elixir yourself. You don't get any benefits or benefits. You are attacked by social workers, but the official said that it has no effect at all. So why do you join the official? If you join a company, you feel like it will give you a membership gift package😅

I feel that the protagonist is not worthy of being a young master. The three elders and the two elders understand luck and feng shui, know the opportunities to advance and retreat, and know the way of gain and loss. Now the fifth master is also a master of luck and feng shui. When the fifth master is gone, he will not be able to control the protagonist. The cultural level is too low. This level is not about academic qualifications, but management ability. He has a thorough understanding of the world and human feelings, and has learned a lot. The protagonist is suitable to be a warrior, thug, and protector, but he is not suitable to be a manager.

No, I don't understand what the author is thinking. After joining a government department, you have to pay for the weapons and equipment to perform tasks by yourself, and you have to buy rockets by yourself. It's really funny, isn't it?

The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. What is going on with this protagonist? It's like facing a ghost fiercely, with clear logic, seeking survival in death, bleeding oneself without hesitation, and then being submissive when entering the real world. This sister and that brother, not to mention leadership qualities, should be a little bit self-motivated. This protagonist is willing to be the younger brother. When he first joined the investigation bureau, others could directly open a hole in him to take blood without his consent. He didn't react at all, he was bloodless, like a coward. When he was arrested for the first time at the police station, he was told everything after a brief questioning. The law of the dark forest is to directly hand over his life to others without knowing the external situation. Also, the old man who taught him boxing before realized that the protagonist might have killed someone, so he immediately took advantage of the situation. It would be better to treat this extraordinary person as inappropriate. He is just an ultimate wage earner who has been at the bottom for thousands of years. The more I look at him, the more frustrated he becomes. He is extremely toxic in the early stage and the feeling of separation is too strong.

I saw more than 20 photos and felt that the country was written in a rubbish manner. The strongest force is that individuals can provoke it. The welfare system is rubbish too. You have to understand that this is a life-threatening job, and you must at least have prototype weapons and basic training. People are risking their lives. If you want to join the officialdom, don't you just want professional training so that you can live longer?

How can I put it, the system is good, but the government is too lax. After joining, you don't get any purchase rights. The protagonist immediately feels a sense of belonging. He directly goes to work hard for two workers who have known each other for no more than 7 days. It's a pity that the subject matter is poor.

Stopping at chapter 34, I'm not happy if I don't vomit. The author is definitely a walking 500,000 person. He writes about the country as being darker than American imperialism and lacks the capital to be humane.

It will definitely become popular if it is written down. Unfortunately, the beginning is a little hasty and the writing is a bit presumptuous in the middle, but the overall context is acceptable. I think the "big shot" aspect that many people are criticizing is pretty good, but it would be boring if it were written as a simple piece of writing. It's just that many details are not described in depth, leaving people a little unfinished. I can see that the current continuation is getting better and better. It would be better if the protagonist is written more intelligently. Don't get 404.

I was really speechless. A person affiliated with a national organization was threatened by others, and others also wanted to kill you. Then there was a fight, and a teammate came and boasted a few words, and let the person on the other side leave. I'm really speechless. If this were to happen, the government would have sent it a long time ago.

If you don't write about promotion, what's the use of writing about it? How many people will be poisoned from the cemetery? Where is the protagonist trying his best to help grab something? The big shot wants it.

The protagonist joins the national department, and the police chief has to warn him when he checks his identity. However, Cat and Dog come to kill the protagonist. Several ribs are broken. Teammates come to support and say: Why don't you get out? Are you looking down on me? Then the cat and the dog left like this, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, I almost died laughing.

Joining the system does not include food, accommodation, equipment, information, or promotion channels. You only get a monthly salary of 10,000 yuan. You were almost beaten to death by a private organization but no one helped you. You want revenge and want 500,000 yuan. Why join? This is what you get when you work hard

The core of the current controversy is that the social system has not been set up well, and it is revealed that the plot is just for the sake of the plot. In ancient times, cannon fodder was trained to use weapons like this and was given a good meal before going to the battlefield. The pig's feet are earned by one's own efforts. It sounds like a mercenary at best, but it sounds like a prisoner trying to reduce his sentence (Suicide Squad, right!)

Goodbye Chapter 7. It started with a gymnasium of 15,000 yuan a month. To be honest, including personal training, I have never seen such an expensive one. Then in Chapter 7, I went to a martial arts training course of 30,000 yuan a month. I didn't even check the quality of the other person and just paid with a credit card. Author, you are so rich! For things like Level 8, you can search a lot on the Internet. There is no shortage of various certifications and reputations, and they will teach you every move without spending a penny. You spend 30,000 yuan to learn from him in a month. What can you learn? If you are reduced to teaching in the gym, what skills can you have? It takes a month to learn how to stand up, but it is impossible to practice. And you can learn all of these by searching on the Internet. Chunchun is a big grievance. At first, I didn't understand why he spent 15,000 yuan to learn swordsmanship. What can he teach you? There is no place for fighting in modern swordsmanship. Isn't it just a routine?

The biggest feature of this type of book is that no matter how awesome your settings are, the official organization will appear in the book to be a coward who can step on anyone who gets involved.

The first few chapters were okay, but in chapter 20, it started to get really nasty. I couldn't stand it, so I read the comments, and there were a lot of people scolding me... The author seems to have confused ordinary social gangsters with some real gangsters and chaotic areas in the novel. A foul-mouthed middle school kid can pull out a gun. In the internal area, the protagonist fights with others to death, and the official has no sense of existence...

The wages in this official organization are so low, and the salary is not enough. Are the people who join using their love to generate electricity?

There are many typos, and the official writing is not good enough. Since it is the third game that can prove that the stability maintainers are still the majority, is it inevitable that they will get good resources in the third game? Why do I have to buy this and that myself? Then there is the Chinese zodiac sign. The black glove on top will not let you know below.

After reading a few chapters and reading the comments, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist must be ruthless and can give himself two blows. As a result, a colleague made a pass at the protagonist without saying a word during the first meeting, and then attacked him from behind during the second meeting. The protagonist has no temper at all and gives people money. It's interesting to write about the Third Bureau of Investigation. For such a large national organization, there is no onboarding training. There is no one to guide you. You still have to go to an external martial arts studio to find a teacher to learn boxing? What does the army do for food? Even if you say it's a start-up and don't have a good airs, then you have to draw blood and test it. Obviously there are research institutions, but it's more like they haven't researched anything. It can't be said that it's poisonous, but it's just that if you go to eat at KFC, you have to ask Wallace to deliver the food. The reason is that Wallace doesn't have a toilet...

The official is not like the official of my flower-growing family, it is like the official of foreign countries. I feel that the author has some misunderstanding of the official. Since you have decided to join the officialdom, then don't join the official. Since joining the official will mean being chased for such a weak reason, killing high-ranking people is like killing chickens. When you are chased, you can't beat a section chief. What you wrote is so confusing It seems that in the constitution, your teammates are all traitors, all are evil, and there are no good people. You kill high-level officials for the daughter of your master. Have you ever thought about your parents? You have said that you have parents. I feel that the plot is not handled well. I still like the overall portrayal and world setting, but the plot is really unacceptable.

Are there any violations?

6 Oh, it was just when the climax was coming that you just forced to change the map? The author of this book has changed! After a good fight with the White Lotus Sect, I directly changed the map to the fairy world 😰 and the previous character creation was directly cut in half by 666

The subject matter is good, but the novel has a lot of problems. The whole text is full of pretending to slap people in the face, brainless villains, beautiful colleagues, and rich woman nymphos. The protagonist has no IQ and no emotional intelligence. It would be okay if he was more invincible and cool. He is constantly trying to kill others, which affects his sanity.

Why is there a sudden fanatic Night Sharpening Knife suddenly removed from the shelves? I was watching it yesterday

The story doesn't drag on, it's creative, the characters are vivid, and the writing is good. I'm just afraid of getting a 404 one day.

Plagiarism? Isn't that book's score pretty good? Why should I plagiarize?

(Suddenly, there is a madman sharpening his knife at night. Haven't you changed it yet?

I've seen other people say that the rectification won't come out within a few months. Once the rectification has been completed, it's better to just start a new one.