2006: Reshape Your Life

This is a book worth reading twice.                                                                                                                                                                                                       being neither arrogant nor arrogant, nor being pretentious nor hypocritical, neither being a gentleman nor a villain, just being ourselves. Occasionally, I am lustful and look forward and backward, but I am always focused on it, just so that after rebirth, my thoughts will be clear and I will leave no regrets. Generally speaking, the character creation is more delicate and vivid. There is no pretense or mechanical application. Although there are many girls, they have distinct characteristics and clear priorities. There are many classic scenes, and everyone needs to experience them by themselves~ (I hope everyone can meet their own Chen Xiaowan or Liu Xiaosu or Shen Ningfei...) Because the plot has a lot of foreshadowing, some involve major events, and some involve social and humanities, the writing is not too smooth, but the plot progresses layer by layer, and the sense of satisfaction is overshadowed by waves. The overall narrative style is concise and reasonably detailed, but it does require a little bit of experience and knowledge reserves on the part of the reader, so readers who are used to reading popular and refreshing texts may not be used to it. (As the saying goes, foreplay is too long.) The process is now halfway through, and it is already half a sacred book in my mind. As long as the whale does not die suddenly... Next time I have time, I will write some song list reviews, corresponding to each heroine~

Alas, most of them are very interesting, but some plots are too poisonous 😅 1. The advance notice that there will be casualties and poisons makes me completely uninterested in watching the plot before the fight with the 0 family. 2. The protagonist made it clear that he wanted to accept two classmates, but he did not emphasize that his choice was not Peking University, resulting in three people choosing the wrong choice. This kind of youth pain literary plot is very inexplicable. 3. Li Xiang was sold by the trafficker without saying a word, and his phone was turned off. This was an outrageous development. People in 2 and 3 are almost sick of stupidity... There are also various kidnapping plots, especially the kidnapper is a standard lecherous villain. The author should know that this is the standard beginning of many Liu Bei's articles.

Every time you come to a key point, you have to be awkward. It's uncomfortable to read. I'm writing about urban rebirth. It's cool but not cool. The writing is not bad. The characterization is also pretty good. There's a reason why it's not popular.

The writing and plot are top-notch, but the later stages are too watery. Often after dozens of chapters, the plot doesn't move at all.

The descriptions of each heroine are very unique, and the portrayal is very individual. It just feels a little too small, as if all girls are heroines, but the content and writing are very good, please go to the author.

There is a reason why the author is not popular. Maybe you wrote very carefully, but you used it in the wrong direction. You love to show off your skills too much, polishing a story into something less than a story, and becoming more and more empty. Do you know why Zhou Koutiao's first book is so popular? It is because he has controlled the balance between realism and fantasy, making readers feel happy and close to reality at the same time. If you do not control this balance well, the writing style will become more and more impetuous, and everyone in the story will become less human and more like the exaggerated heroes and villains in idol dramas.

First of all, I must affirm that the author writes fluently and the words are relatively interesting. The brightest points: the main characters are very distinctive, Chen Wan's worries and dependence; Liu Su's girlish feelings; Chu Chu's lack of self-confidence; Shen Ningfei's independence and strength, self-protection and self-taught learning to mobilize public opinion for a better life; Qin Wanyu's appearance as a good girl is actually brave enough to express her own thoughts, Jin Feifei's depression and inner self-confidence caused by lack of care since childhood Currently, I have only seen the part where Jin Xiaoxiao died, so I will only comment on what I have seen 1: There are many plots of the hero saving the beauty (Wu forced Chen Wan, Shen Ningfei twice (in a restaurant, Li Li's birthday), Li Li's birthday)) 2: There are many times where it is clear that the character's background or experience is not simple (the two years after Chen Wan disappeared, the first-year experience between Li Li and the protagonist, who initially lost readers' appetite, and the fifth uncle's experience with a gun). The above two writing methods were written around the 10s. It's not bad, but readers are too familiar with this writing method. Frequent occurrences can easily affect the perception. 3: The author has repeatedly stated that plot development requires logic, but in fact it is already very illogical in 5. Real high school students simply don't have the time and energy to get into the Oiran Ranking 4: Lin Lingshan's family background has no chance of going to an ordinary high school in a northeastern prefecture-level city. Even if you go back to China to study, you will still go to an international school or a provincial key school 5: The level of Internet development in 2007 was not enough to support the takeout business. First, you need to pay for the takeout. But offline payments at that time were still very troublesome. Moreover, it was still a feature phone at the time, and the 3G network had only started piloting in 2008. So in 2006, ordering takeout could only be done via phone or computer, and the number of users was too small. 6: The Internet speed and hardware level at that time were not enough to support live broadcast. Young Lion Network changed to recording and broadcasting, selling paid videos, or free videos, which is more reasonable to earn advertising fees. 7: Deputy Director Wu was shot. He was also the deputy director of a prefecture-level city. He was shot for no reason. According to the actual situation, Dongshan City will face an anti-gang campaign organized by the province. It's impossible to pass it easily 8: Jiulong Group is the main boss in the early stage, but the author never explains what the main business of this group is, but instead portrays them as a gangster. What's the use of engaging in underworld and commercial competition? The underworld is nothing more than the black gloves of someone or some people in the court. To engage them, you need to first find out who is behind them, and then engage them through an exchange of interests. Otherwise, if you engage them yourself, you will offend the people behind them. 9: The author said that the purpose of writing Jin Feifei to death was to give the protagonist a sense of urgency. According to my actual experience. My uncle and aunt who were very good to me in junior high school suddenly passed away in a car accident. When I was a sophomore, a classmate with whom I was usually close suddenly had a heart attack and passed away. Last year, one of my elders who was less than 60 years old also passed away suddenly. These three things only give me a sense of uncertainty, not urgency. So I think writing Jin Feifei to death is a very failure, and it does not achieve the role of giving the protagonist a sense of urgency. If you want to give the protagonist a sense of urgency, you should increase the conflict with the Jiulong Group. In order to be able to fight against the Jiulong Group, the protagonist will naturally have the motivation to expand his career. As for why I gave such a low rating, the main reason is that the previous plots of heroes saving beauties made me feel like I was eating a meal that tasted good, but occasionally I ate something that didn't suit my taste. But seeing Jin Feifei's ending, it was like eating shit all of a sudden. All the bad experiences from the past come flooding back, and the emotions will be more intense.

Let me complain, I read the first few chapters and subscribed to the latest chapters on impulse. Now that I have spent money, I can only bite the bullet and continue reading. Does the author himself understand why this book did not perform well? Because the writing is too pretentious and literary. Harem story, brother, the writing is very good, but you wrote it like this, I am speechless, starting a harem and having pure love at the same time? What do you mean, let Susu and Wanyu choose for themselves, and let the heroine choose for herself after starting a harem? Normal people cannot accept being a mistress, a mistress, a fourth, a fifth, and a sixth. Are you sure you are writing a harem story? Want to send a girl away? Shouldn't the normal operation be to stalk her and not let go? If you don't delete my comment, I guess readers will have no desire to subscribe after seeing this comment. There is a reason for poor grades in books.

The female teacher's design was already very humble, and the secret of rebirth was shared, but now she has to catch up with her lifelong fiancée. I really can't stand the scene of catching up with my lifelong relationship in college. After all, if I am moved by my previous life, it will not be moved by me, and Wanwan's humble Wei Zhen impressed me, but the result is that now there is a new female character who is completely unfamiliar to me, and all the female characters that I had a good impression of in the early stage have been marginalized. I can only say that I can't stand it. I will watch it again when the plot arranged by the author to pursue the touching feelings of my previous life is over.

I was dumbfounded when I opened the character bar. Is the protagonist's waist made of iron?

First of all, let's make it clear that urban rebirth writing is a cool writing! It's not a brain-burning article! It's not a suspense story! Not even serious literature! It's a thoroughly enjoyable article! What is the purpose of Shuangwen? Cool! Cool! Still fucking cool! Then it is up to the author to consider how to enjoy it. Some authors write about the protagonist making money with his clever mind and then subjugating beautiful women to enjoy it. Some authors write about the protagonist as an urban soldier king who slaps rich second-generation officials and second-generation officials in the face to conquer beautiful women to enjoy it. Some authors write about male asuras falling in love and spreading dog food to each other to enjoy it There are many, and they have all been reborn. Everyone is here to make up for their regrets, to become famous, and to have beautiful women like clouds At present, it seems that the author of this book is the same, and he also comes to become famous and beautiful. So in my opinion, two parts are needed to achieve this goal: reduce the depressing plot and Increase the characteristics of the novel In my opinion, the author did not do a very good job in the first part We all know that the degree of depression in Shuang novels is generally very low. It does not mean that there are no depressing plots. The depressing plots should be for the sake of comfort, just like Xiao Yan was broken off for the sake of the pleasure of joining the Yunlan Sect, but as for the author, I think Many depressing plots designed by the author serve the characters and the plot, and are intended to promote the growth of the characters, such as Jin Xiaoxiao's death, but they do not solve the depression. In other words, this depression is just a depression for the readers, and there is nothing else to see In fact, depressing plots are not said to be only enjoyable. The solution can also be written very profoundly, but this kind of profoundness is easy to overturn. Everyone has read the novel. You still want to earn my tears, or the tears of separation and death. It will gain you an extra reader, but there is a high probability that you will lose another reader. This is not in line with our original intention and that of the author. In addition, there are actually many depressing emotions. Sections, these are all in the opinion of the beholder and there is no need to say more The second part is actually what attracts me the most about this book. In my own narrow understanding, the author is a bit like a "literary youth". He can write about romance and love in a gentle and meaningful way, and in writing about the emotions between people, he can write in a simple and sincere way. He is letting the dog out. The food and female character creation are really excellent in urban literature nowadays, but it is because of the depressing plot in the first part and the protagonist's occasional madness and cowardice that the book always wanders between fairy grass and poisonous weeds, which makes people want to stop. I think the author should try his best to give full play to his strengths and write about emotions. Good writing should continue, and try to avoid some depressing plots. There is no need to put rationality first, and even excellent writing can't cover up the thin storyline. In fact, I think this book should be more positioned as a daily novel, so that the characteristics of the author's excellent writing can be maximized, but Fangyuan has grown too fast. Now the author's writing is a bit awkward. Since Fangyuan became the chairman, the author still tried to find ways to write daily plots, so why did he get out of the university environment so early? The above are all my personal thoughts, and I don't want to express my displeasure. The author is very tired and hard-working staying up late every day to update. I don't have any money to reward, so I can only subscribe to support. If you feel uncomfortable after reading it, just turn around and forget about it. Don't take it to heart. This is my first time coming to Qidian. I really like this book.

A dozen female protagonists are still not bulldozers?

Damn it! Are the dozens of female protagonists and pig-footed JJs busy coming over?

Chen Wan

The early settings of this book are very clever, and the bridge between the female protagonists and the male protagonists is established in one go It can be regarded as one of the few excellent rebirth novels this year, and Teacher Pao is really to my liking 😰

A very good rebirth article, doesn't it look like a new author? There are just too many female protagonists. It seems that the author said that the female protagonist has more than a dozen. How many kidneys? Golden spring? If there are too many people, the water will be uneven.

After reading more than 50 pictures, I can only say that it makes sense that this book is not popular. The author's handling of some plots is either embarrassing or speechless, such as Ke Shao and Chen Wan. The author's writing style is good and the description of artistic conception is very good. However, the plot really makes people shake their heads. It feels that it is not the way of writing mainstream online literature at present, and it is a bit behind.

This is the only urban novel that I have been able to read and remember in the past two years. To be honest, I am very grateful to the author for bringing such a wonderful story, and I don't understand why this book is not popular.

Although I also like to read harem novels, I can't imagine that Shen Ningfei is so good to the male protagonist, and the male protagonist can be a scumbag. It's not that I haven't read stories about scumbag men, such as Chen Gou, but I can at least comfort myself about Chen Gou. This is where I am speechless!

I've read almost a hundred chapters, and I saw that you need to be a book friend to comment, so I just went to reward it a little bit, because after reading so many chapters, there are some things I really want to say. First of all, the first dozens of chapters of this novel are very well written. The specific dividing line is at the point where Fangyuan tells Chen Wan that he is reborn. This plot should be the first place where readers are screened for this book. To be honest, it is not impossible to tell others that you are reborn. Although 99% of rebirth novels will not do this, it is okay as long as it is reasonable. But the reason for the protagonist's self-exposure is really hard to watch. He obviously has a thousand ways to prevent Chen Wan from marrying that boss. Maybe Chen Wan may not trust him that much due to his identity or other reasons, but there are many reasons. As long as he really attacks his PC, first of all, Chen Wan will not marry him. Other things like moving him down have nothing to do with not blowing himself up. To this day, I still can't understand how I feel about saying that I am reborn to someone who is not a relative or an acquaintance. I hate that I didn't die quickly enough. The key is that they didn't say how close they were before they blew themselves up. Another thing is that there are too many female characters. In a small high school map, there can be six female protagonists in the character list. The amount of pen and ink in a book is limited. I don't know if the protagonist will read them all, but before the map is laid out, writing a bunch of women will really affect the perception. There are a few women in particular, and after writing a hundred chapters, I feel like there is no difference between them or not. It has nothing to do with the advancement of the main plot. I don't even know what the meaning of Lin Lingshan's existence is. The more characters you portray, the harder it is to spread your writing and ink, and the more difficult the characters are to write brilliantly. It doesn't matter if you all play supporting roles. The key point is that I feel that you want to write the whole story as the heroine. This is too stupid. There are also Chen Wan's two best friends, I won't talk about Li Li for now. Although there is no difference between them without her at present, the author's portrayal is okay. But why was the character Li Xiang designed, and why is it so difficult to write the name? 😎 I have met four or five Li Xiangs so far, all of whom are men. When a woman is given such a masculine name, I am always surprised every time I watch it. I won't comment on the characterizations of Li Muzi and Chu Chu. Generally speaking, they are okay, but I still say that there are too many characters in a small map. This is not the era of my personal school belle and the school belle's personal master. Readers would buy into it if it didn't always feature female protagonists. In a small high school map with seven or eight female protagonists on the character list, it would be too easy to break the story. Also, in terms of plot promotion, it seems that I am back in the second semester of my second year of high school, but I have written more than a hundred chapters and I am still not in my third year of high school? Putting aside these problems, it is not difficult to accept the setting that the male protagonist is in his thirties and still looks like a middle-aged boy. Generally speaking, this book can be given about 75 points, more for the writing style. I stayed up all night to catch up on this novel. Not only was it shocking at the beginning, it was also eye-catching. Especially when I saw the part where the male protagonist took the train to find his wife, I thought it was really well written. I stayed up all night to catch up to one hundred chapters, and I didn't know what to say. Now that I've seen the scene where Chen Wan crashes into a car, I really can't stand it anymore. I'll watch it again in a while to see if I can continue watching it. After all, I'm still looking forward to the interaction between the male protagonist and his wife from his previous life.

Liu Su

I just started reading it. The author described the heroine Shen Ningfei as a very casual girl. She was chased by another man within half a month of meeting her. How could such a broken shoe become the heroine?

Based on my experience of more than 18 years, I have read three-digit popular urban novels. This one should be considered quite good among rebirth novels. It can be seen that the author was influenced by the famous works of the past such as Shui Tu Lao Ren. It is a bit literary and youthful, but it is acceptable to ordinary readers. It is worth reading

There are many female protagonists, but they don't have the common problem of harem novels (facialization). It's hard to avoid being a little confused after seeing so many female protagonists in the latest chapter, but in view of the previous descriptions, I still feel that each female protagonist is unique.

Urban rebirth article = cool article? It doesn't make sense. I searched for a long time and couldn't find the definition or definition standard. The author has something on his mind. . . Even when my literary talents were at their best, it would be difficult to write words like those in the book, let alone update them daily. Thank you to the author for making me recall my middle school life. There are also some sentences that touched me deeply. Come on and write at your own pace. Children will love reading it.

The student party tried its best. Being close to high school makes it even more emotional. Apart from the necessary contingency of the novel, which makes it impossible to fully immerse yourself in it (of course, this is unavoidable. If everyone's life can be as exciting as the protagonist, then who will read the novel), overall it makes people feel like they really feel a past time. "I listen leisurely, and you speak leisurely." This is a good book worth reading slowly, and your grades will definitely be good.

Friendly reminder: Do not join the single female leader party in this book, and do not join the malicious imaginary party in a certain bar.

I really like the feeling that the author writes the book carefully. Many people say that the author is young, but it is this sense of reality that makes the story more vivid. For me, the highlight of the brainless novel is greater than anything else, but for online novels, fragmented narrative and serialization are in conflict. The narrative of fragments is more interesting, makes readers think better, and arouses people's interest in continuous reading. However, the serialization mode will fragment this feeling. It is okay to put the story fragments of tens of thousands of words in traditional novels and then change the perspective and timeline, but it does not apply to the starting point. Also, it can be seen that the author wants to write it as a group drama, so that each character can be rich and full, but I feel that after all, a main line is needed to connect the characters, otherwise it will be like a running account. There is also the portrayal of the male protagonist that I think is not good. In fact, the wife in his previous life is a good entry point to show the anxiety of the male protagonist being torn between his attachment to his old friend and his admiration for the current beauty. After concealing his feelings, he explodes in an incident, discovers his greed and harm to others, and then regains his life. Such a rhythm would be more appropriate. Of course, this is all because I am teaching the author how to write a book. I really like this work and that's why I felt inspired. The author's brushwork and spiritual white space allowed me to see the talent that literati can still reveal even when they write online articles. This is all my opinion, so it's okay to think my views are ridiculous.

It's well written, but there are really too many female characters

I finished ten chapters in 2006. When I saw the storyline of Anluo being forcibly watched, I had some thoughts that I couldn't help but feel unhappy about. One of the highlights of this book is that some parts are written to be more realistic, and then there are the underworld at the beginning, Jin Xiaoxiao's car accident, and Myanmar rescue. , Is authentic and can make people empathize, but it can also make people feel depressed and depressed, which leads to many plots at the beginning. The emotional experiences of the heroines will have the kind of hero saving the beauty. Not only is it tiring, but ordinary readers will also feel powerless to change. (But this is also because there are too many female protagonists, so it is understandable that we have to deal with it this way) Writing some realistic classic difficult scenes, I think this is also a great help (the last application that impressed me deeply was Xiaolong complaining about environmental girls in his book No. 13 Mink Street, which caused a great response), provided that there is nothing wrong with you (named Jin Xiaoxiao, basketball smashed in the face, Ninja, (it seems that many people hate it) Yan and Chen Xiaowan confessed that I didn't feel this way in my previous life. I think it's pretty good. It's understandable, but combined with Qin Wanyu's harem of more than a dozen people, it's understandable.) emmmm said a lot of things that I don't know what to say. I just want to say that if you like to write this kind of real life that is closer to life, or you can use more force (like what we humans are really great, backhand Recharge 1 million (I haven't read this book, I just thought of it based on the title), whether it is to attract attention and gain fame, or this book will naturally have a more fixed group), or be a little lighter, brush the edges, beat the drum, don't write a particularly profound feeling, let the protagonist appear early, people nowadays do not have so much patience, and there are some depressive situations in the heart (of course, it is acceptable to catch up with the latest ones now, Author, you will also like articles like yours, but they may be a bit niche) I suddenly thought of the Masked Stranger, the author of Beiyin Monkey King. He suppressed the book desperately, and then released it fiercely, suppressed it desperately, and released it fiercely. , The first part makes you grit your teeth, but the second part is very harsh (and short). Then the review of his book style is very poor, the reviews are very low, but if you continue to read it, you can still read it, and the score is not bad. The reason is that the first book did not do much. . . . Emmm, I just want to say that the details of this classic scene in reality can be less detailed in the new book. I will try it again after the readership has increased. Ĉ