The Wizard in Hogwarts Is Unscientific

One of my favorite Harry Potter fanfics. To be honest, I have seen other fanfic protagonists travel to the magical world, but they are accustomed to magic. They only focus on going to school, promoting the plot, and changing the world, but never want to study magic in depth, study magic in depth, and explore the principles behind magic. They just use a magic as a game skill. Seriously, what's the point of promoting a plot? If there are not 1,000 books, there are already 800. There is no need to work hard to change the world. If you change others, they may not be grateful to the protagonist. Even if the change is good, does it mean anything to the protagonist? The highlight of this book is the protagonist who is obsessed with magic, constantly learning magic, understanding magic, in-depth study of magic principles, and the process of becoming a god step by step. The author's in-depth analysis of the plot of the original work, the exploration of the details of the original work, and the reasonable settings that are in line with the spirit of the original work are all highlights.

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The protagonist has been emphasizing that he does not regard himself as a member of this world or a member of the wizards. Repeatedly stating how stupid and short-sighted other wizards are, how smart he is and not wanting to play with them, and repeating this point of view to every new elder he meets? ? Does the author think it's fashionable to write this way? I tolerated it in the past, but after more than 500 chapters, I was still repeating that I didn't take the people of this world seriously. I am from country x, so I don't care much about the presence of dementors in this world? ? Does the author think that this will increase the reader's sense of involvement? Not at all! ! Is the group of my family and lovers not as important as a group of strangers not mentioned in the whole article? The whole logic is so messed up that I can't stand it anymore.

After reading the first 100 chapters, the male protagonist's ambiguous attitude towards the female protagonist was obvious. I thought there was a clear emotional line. Is the author afraid of being scolded and did not dare to write? In this case, I'm afraid it's not like most HPs, who don't write love lines in the third grade, but suddenly have a confirmed relationship at the Goblet of Fire dance. I have seen this routine too many times. What stands out is that it is rigid and makes interpersonal relationships too cheap. Childhood sweethearts have grown up naturally. No problem at all. I don't understand why China Unicom is being criticized.

Author, can't you change the introduction of your work? To be honest, I read this book four or five times, and every time I saw that it was about blind dates for professors, I crossed it out...

On the one hand, the protagonist said that he wanted to be content and let Harry deal with Voldemort, but in the first year, he frantically interfered with the progress of the plot, and directly ruined the original plot. He was not afraid of playing himself to death, claiming to be an adult, looking down on other young wizards, treating everyone else as NPCs, repeatedly emphasizing that he was an adult, and his attitude towards Hermione, did he really want to make readers think that the protagonist was smelting copper? There are also some plots about the game with Dumbledore, which is simply inexplicable. When you first enter school, you have just started to learn the theory and jump directly to the origin of magic. It is as outrageous as an elementary school student writing a doctoral thesis, and the Dumbledore in the novel is also a stereotype. It is really too poisonous. And reading other comments, these problems are not solved in the later period, but the poisonous points are getting more and more. In short, run away

Two points, one is to write a fanfic, but if you don't participate in the plot, why write a fanfic? Second, the magical issues that the protagonist is thinking about are very funny. A young wizard who has just learned about the magical world wants to study magic issues in depth when he knows nothing about it, just like a primary school student who wants to write a doctoral thesis. Isn't it funny? If the protagonist was educated by a magic master like Grindelwald from an early age, it would be fine, and he would have a certain foundation, but this is not the case in the setting. In this case, it would be weird not to kill himself if he randomly studies the will of the mind or even black magic.

Withdrawn, personally don't like it. In 90% of Harry Potter fanfics, the heroine must be Hermione, and then she talks nice and works hard to learn magic, but the result is still the same. Personally I don't like writing that is too soft.

You can complain to the author or not. First of all, the protagonist is too lonely. He has no like-minded people. Hermione is just a tool used by the author to cover up that the protagonist is a lone wolf. The protagonist does everything alone. The great cause of becoming a god is just you. To be honest, this routine is outdated. The protagonist has a personal profile of a loudspeaker, and Voldemort's affairs are leaked to Hermione and Isa at any time. These tool people cannot play a role in promoting the plot at all, but there is no real supporting role to take over. If you continue to write like this, you may become a chopstick. The road will become straighter and narrower, and it will become more and more dull without ups and downs.

The writing is very good and the reading is smooth, but one thing is outrageous. From Hermione's perspective, the protagonist is just a schoolmate who studies together every day. Why does everyone, including Dumbledore, think Hermione is the protagonist's girlfriend? Moreover, when others say it in front of the protagonist, the protagonist simply acquiesces, and a greasy feeling comes over his face. Every time I read this scene, I feel like I am watching a youthful and beautiful idol drama and suddenly find out that the male protagonist is Zhang Han...

It is recommended to change the setting of the transfiguration principle. Wizards' transformation skills are all idealistic. To transform a needle, you still need to know the ingredients, so shouldn't biochemistry and physics be prerequisite subjects for transfiguration?

Only fools help Harry and the others. The protagonist and his family have no blood feud with Voldemort. At most, if Voldemort is resurrected and goes to live in another country, he will not be deliberately hunted down. If the Order of the Phoenix wins and comes back happy, but if it loses and the situation is stable, they can come back or simply live in a foreign country. If Voldemort wins, at best, someone else will rule the world. Voldemort is not a murderer. He will live the same life after he rules the world. There is no guarantee that wizards will live a better life.

Chapter 551 Hmm... Some words may not sound nice to say. Andy has a Chinese heart, so he doesn't care much about the casualties here. I'm not talking about my holy mother. I quite like the character of the protagonist who has no means to seek for things, but... The character is the character, the personality is the personality, don't drag it to the country, okay? Are people in the country so cold-blooded, or are they just trying to smear...? It may also be that the author's semantic expression is not clear, but when I saw this paragraph, I really wanted to complain. If you want to write about ruthlessness, write ruthless, and if you want to express cold-blooded, use cold-blooded. Not to mention the adjective "Heart of China", and it is still in a negative way, which feels like it is devaluing my own moral character.

About 10 chapters after it was released, I felt a strange sense of fragmentation. When I stopped and thought about it carefully, I realized that the author was eating the meal money brought by the HP world view, and while stepping on handfuls, the protagonist was holding the system and barking, saying that magic is so simple that no one should study and innovate well; on the other hand, he kept talking about the Eastern cultivation of immortality, and everything was related to cultivation of immortality. Is it because you are afraid that no one will read the book about cultivating immortality, so you deliberately cover it with a Western fantasy children's book?

The author has been saying that wizards are weaker than Muggles, but I don't think so: if wizards don't follow the rules and only need a few Imperius Curses to control high-level officials, then the mushroom bombs will fall above the Muggle army; as long as the transformation spell (and the potion that can transform other people), you can pretend that other people (especially important Muggle figures) are doing bad things, and you can directly destroy someone; as for the ability to read minds, wizards and Muggles Take the initiative in negotiations; the memory-modifying magic can directly modify the memories of some important Muggle figures, and the consequences can be imagined... There are still many magics available, and there are few wizards, but as long as wizards don't stupidly fight Muggles head-on, wizards are completely crushed by Muggles, so wizards look down on Muggles. This is completely understandable. I feel like the author said that the wizarding world is almost over. I don't understand it at all.

Why did the protagonist have to study emotions and magic boiling, the nature of magic, etc. When he was in grade 1 or 2? How is this different from middle school students studying string theory? No matter how genius you are, you have to learn the knowledge from junior high school to PhD. I feel that the protagonist is not interested in the knowledge in the middle. (If you are interested, you should not first look for upper-level knowledge, ancient magic, writing, etc.)

The protagonist is a time-traveler. He must have been an adult before he time-traveled, so he still talks so nonsense? How many normal adults seek death like this?

To be honest, the author could have allowed the protagonist to slowly become a couple with Hermione while reading, but he had to write it very obscenely from the beginning. What you write like this is disgusting and makes people unable to stand it.

The mirror is hidden in the secret room and cannot be discovered by Voldemort. It is left completely there for study with the portkey and does not need to be taken away at all. Taking a step back, the protagonist has easily killed the Dementors with the Patronus, which proves that he can kill all the Dementors if he is willing and takes a little time. Since he has taken away the mirror and has the ability, he can solve the future troubles. As a result, he left a bunch of dementors and ran away. After he ran away, he cried like a cat and pretended to be merciful. This plot clearly demonstrates the hypocrisy and irresponsibility of the protagonist. The problem is that what you wrote is not a dark text. This hypocritical and irresponsible character is inconsistent no matter how you read it. I don't know why the author did this. Could it be to advance the plot? That's too blunt, and it's even better to just do it daily.

Harley and Malfoy (hahaha)

You just finished second grade and went to the Ministry of Magic headquarters. What's the point of exploring the secret of death so early? You are only thirteen years old, and you are not dying of old age. Can't you be more stable? If you have a golden finger, you only need to work hard for a few years. When you graduate at the age of 18, you will basically be invincible. You can play hard, so why risk your life at the age of 13?

To be honest, it feels a bit alienating to discuss the Chinese magic world with Qiu Zhang and others and forcefully analyze Chinese mythology. In my opinion, the part in Harry that forcibly added China almost collapsed. The only highlight of this novel is actually the moderate jokes and fun, but in the end, you made the protagonist forcefully act as a matchmaker to bring together Qiu Zhang and Cedric. I was also drunk, which was a bit like giving a girl away. You can write about running into Cedric and Cho Chang on a date or something, but being a matchmaker is really a bit toxic. Let's talk about the plot again. The entire first grade plot has no climax or excitement at all. It is easy to make jokes and have fun, but it will be very boring if it stays like this after that. After all, most fan readers want to see the protagonist killing everyone, although there are some who like daily life.

It's too soft, as if he is deliberately avoiding Voldemort. He has to beat around the bush to calculate Kino. What's more, the reason is that it will disturb his study. What's wrong with confronting Voldemort? In the first grade, Deng is guarding him and he won't go. He can't keep avoiding it.

After reading Chapter 43, the most unacceptable thing is to date Hermione, who is 11 years old. Brother, how could you, an adult who traveled through time, attack an 11-year-old child? Especially the way it is written. He mentioned "dating" and "girlfriend" more than once. In the subjective thoughts of the protagonist, Hermione is viewed with that factor. There is a sense of lower body thinking in every word. Even if you wait a few more years, can't we get along as friends in the past few years?

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How to say it? Overall, it's okay, but one of the protagonist's (author's) opinions is too ridiculous. The protagonist often says that if the Muggle world continues to develop, it will surpass wizards, and wizards will become exhibitions or experimental subjects. This is actually incorrect. The most powerful thing about wizards is that they can control people's thoughts. Think about the consequences of someone teleporting and then controlling the president, military officers, scientists and economic personnel among Muggles. It's simply crushing!

I came here for the introduction of scientific magic, originally hoping to turn science into power, but with the emergence of the dot system, knowledge, power, memory, and physical enhancement are created out of nothing. I personally feel that the basic setting of this book has collapsed.

Highly recommended, bettors are in the opinion of the beholder, but this book suits my taste very well. It may be a new author, and it doesn't receive much attention, but I personally think it's already very good among Harry fans! Reason for recommendation: 1. The protagonist has his own story, which does not revolve around Harry. It overlaps with the original story, but does not completely follow the original story line, and the logic is basically reasonable. 2. The characterization of the protagonist. The protagonist is very consistent with the perception of a time traveler. He is afraid of trouble, does not like being arranged by Lao Deng, and hates playing house with kids like Ron, which is in line with the perception. 3. The research on magic is logically self-consistent and interesting, and the speed of ability improvement is okay. 4. The plot and location of the original work are well integrated, allowing fans to feel the joy of reading fan fiction. As for the shortcomings, I don't really want the protagonist to be with Hermione. It would be better if the trio of saviors were not broken up. Suggestions: 1. I hope the author will continue writing at his own pace! If the quality is guaranteed, this book will definitely have a place among Harry fandoms! 2. The previous content is very good. After more than 600,000 words, I may run out of manuscripts. The writing is a bit impatient and lacks some of the brainpower and imagination at the beginning of the book. It can be improved in the next stage. 3. In the subsequent plot, in addition to the original addresses of Godric's Hollow, Diagon Alley, Home and Neighbors, some new maps will be added to add a bit of freshness without affecting the plot of the book. Of course, it must be moderate. Opening too many maps will cause chaos. I hope that the author will write better and better, and I will vote for you all at once during the monthly ticket double period at the end of the month.

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