Not a Trainer This Time

People really have double standards. If it were an online article about group portraits of people, I would say it's dead, no one will read it. But the Pokémon portraits are too cute. The cute side of Pokémon is well depicted, and many relaxing plots are written. But what this book lacks is a strong main line, because there are a lot of invisible bugs and minefields, which we just ignored because we wanted to see Pokémon. This is when you need to look forward. Many things may develop into major branches or sub-main plots, but just a quick glance. The front is really good, but the back looks messy and I can't tell the priorities. Once the mythical beasts are added, the fun brought by ordinary Pokémon will be greatly reduced, but... Daily novels are built on ordinary life, and ordinary Pokémon should be the focus. As one comment said, from the beginning, the motorcycle that traveled through time was a big failure. It seemed to speed up the plot, but it only overdrawn the life of the plot. It seems to bring a lot of plot climaxes, but it reduces the excitement of daily plots. There are gains and losses Pokémon themes aside, you need to strengthen your writing skills and plot creation skills. If you seize an advantage, write around this advantage. Stories without big branches are like roadside shrubs. You can admire them occasionally, but you will completely forget them as soon as you turn your head.

I have a feeling of being lost. How can I put it? This book is an absolute perfect score for daily life. Although there are some problems with combat, it is not the focus of the book. It is the author's writing style that makes me a little unable to bear it. The warmth is mixed with the secret knife, which is similar to the modifier. The ending is logically handled without any problems. The time logic is so A very difficult point to write is well arranged, but it just feels too logical, which makes people very sad. To be honest, I really don't dare to read the next book, which is still this kind of heartwarming and hidden-dagger route. The last few chapters made me feel too uncomfortable, just like the editor's book that I knew it was a good book but didn't dare to read it again.

What a cure! ! This is the first time I have seen this type of Pokémon fanfic. I have always read Pokémon battles before. Although this one is not ups and downs, the author's writing is beautiful and I feel like I have really seen that utopian world (wiping away tears). I hope that the author can accept a furry Pokémon named Xingxing in the future. She is my kitten. Since reality cannot take her to explore, then I hope she can live happily in the virtual world. Please! ! ! All my monthly votes have been cast! ! 😭😭😭

Going to Alola and being pulled into an illusion by an alpaca was so stiff that I even thought it was written by someone else. It felt like it was forcibly strengthening the so-called bond between the protagonist and the Pokémon. I wanted to copy a similar scene but couldn't achieve a smooth connection. For me personally, I can have emotional scenes, but it always feels inexplicable. They are together without any real feeling. They just get married just to have a heroine, which makes people feel very abrupt. As for the mythical beasts and the World Tree, there is no need to say more about this old-fashioned routine. You have to lose your mind to understand it. Only King Lei Guan handled it well, but the others really couldn't accept it. Just like starting a harem as a stallion, you have to be a beast man.

Thor: For the glory of the Northern God! Hahaha, the cloth should not be like this.

I have come across an author who asks for leave most frequently, and he also doesn't update much. I admire him.

Pokémon fans said that this book is very good, and as of now it is at the level of ambrosia. The elements of this book include farming and development but not for world domination, various fantastic dishes, and Pokémon Tie's daily life and a harmonious society under a utopian worldview. Because most of them are daily, there is nothing to go into details, but what I can say is that there are no poisonous points so far. The only thing that feels unreasonable is not about Goldfinger, but about the operation of society. For example, normally a new farmer should apply for an agricultural loan to reclaim wasteland and purchase seeds to build a storage warehouse. The protagonist, just like in the game, sells black truffles to obtain initial capital, and then develops the farm at a compound profit. If you are not exposed to agriculture, you really don't see any problem with this. Most people are used to this when playing farming games. Also, the farming stream is inseparable from trade. Put it on the travel stream, not to mention the hundreds of thousands of Pokémon training materials. Those economic systems are broken. The author will obviously record the details of the protagonist's transaction amount, so when does the protagonist have to pay taxes? Could it be that in the background, the alliance is so big that it doesn't rely on tax collection to operate? Maybe the author hasn't written about this issue yet. I'll see if the author adds it later. These are not poisonous points and are not a big problem. I wish the author can become a god with one book and become the founder of the trend of farming Pokémon.

My favorite and most palatable Pokémon novel! ! ! Direct ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ positive reviews, which perfectly inspired my yearning for the utopia of Pokémon. It would be great if there were cute elves such as Marilu, Baby Ding, Mimosa, Lily Root, Walking Grass, Mushroom, Flower Beibei, Flower Healing Ring, Kapok Ball, Sleeping Mushroom, etc. In my house 😆

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Please update more soon (∂ω∂)

Don't you feel ashamed that you have been relying on me to read other books to support you?🤔

The sauce suddenly bubbled up, and it came with chicken ham sausage, spicy cabbage instant noodles, French bread and Wangzi milk. People gathered around to read the great book and give the author a big CALL, ^_^

After writing the knife, I no longer have my monthly pass.

Although the painting is not very good, I tried my best, Naoki and his old story

Harvest Story is so suitable for Pokémon. If I travel to the Pokémon world, I will definitely play Pastoral Story instead of playing games everywhere.

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The protagonist's farm currently has Pokémon

If you really can't do it, don't write about battles. This novel is well written on a daily basis, but when it comes to battles, it's not that level. It's like a turn-based game. Especially against Watari, I can't see where he is at the championship level.

Mount Lamb

Playing Harvest Story in Pokémon World is very relaxing and warm. However, a taboo in farming writing is to overdo it. Slow-burning is the standard farming writing. Otherwise, once it takes off, farming will basically have no upward path and will become just a string of data. Just like farming games and business games, when the level is reached, it is time to give up. Also, I hope to create the feeling of a ranch game in the Pokémon world, instead of introducing many things that are not available in the Pokémon world, which always feel too inconsistent. The sense of immediate biological invasion. . . I don't know what other people think, at least I think weird Pokémon are not that interesting anymore. Normal Pokémon moves are enough, and there is really no need for the special effects of other games. Those stitch Pokémon skills in major anime and games always feel out of place, and what kind of fields are they so expensive? . . Finally, it's the Pokémon World. The ingredients should be bolder, but oil, vinegar, and salt are too ordinary. I remember seeing animations of delicacies made with Pikachu dots, and they tasted crispy and numb. Also, Pokémon have different tastes. The protagonist may find it delicious, but the Pokémon may not. Also, if you already use rocks, why add chili pepper and soy sauce? Isn't it true that magma is the main ingredient in Malatang? The various desserts are various gems. However, tree fruits are special and contain special energy. All Pokémon can find their favorite fruits, or they contain energy of various types. After all, rock-type fruits eat minerals for the rock-type energy in them, and some general-purpose tree fruits, such as restoring physical strength, etc., Can be considered to have energy that is common to all types.

When I see chat groups about mythical beasts, I find them boring. I don't know what you think. Anyway, I think that the mythical beasts can be contacted and can be friends, but so many mythical beasts can see me at once. Don't know how to say it. It doesn't have the same relaxing flavor as before 😅 If there are too many mythical beasts, you don't know how to balance the relationship, causing most ordinary Pokémon to disappear. Became boring🥱

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Brother, please, you don't have to write emotional scenes. If you can't write battle scenes, please hire a ghostwriter. Reading this book is like drawing cards. Leave requests, daily life, emotional scenes, and draw 4 battle scenes. My heart was broken when I read it.

Guluton

The subsequent stories are getting more and more bland, and it's not unattractive! When there are only a few Pokémon in the early stage, running a ranch is very warm and healing. I will look forward to updates. Later, there will be more and more Pokémon. I collect them purely for the desire to collect, and it is like losing the main story. . . .

What I want to read is this kind of heartwarming Pokémon text. Those who talk about reality in Pokémon, such as wealthy families, and the fact that only the children of wealthy families have three families. Coming from Pure 2 b.

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There will be a bottleneck period in farm writing for a long time, because the facilities and interpersonal relationships of the farm are just these. After writing 50-1 million words, it will fall into a deadlock of nothing to write and the main line is unclear. To break through this limitation, the author actually has multiple routes to enrich the plot (the center is all around the development of the farm and the realization of self-worth), such as: 1. Continuously enrich the animals and plants on the farm (unique, cherished, and rare in other areas) 2. Driven by the economy, go to other areas to investigate the economy Economic crops, animals, or new facilities, personnel 3. Take Pokémon on adventures appropriately, experience the joy of pretending, and get adventures or rare items 4. Participate in some competitions moderately, or be one of the organizers, to increase the intersection between the farm and society 5. Go to school, learn new knowledge, conduct research (such as breeders), and seek new development for yourself and the farm 6. Business development, open agricultural product sales, various novel stores, increase Increase income and realize self-worth 7. Become a gym leader or other position in the alliance, train yourself to take care of farm development 8. Fantasy development, how can a farm live in one place, let legendary Pokémon help you build your farm into a mobile blessed land, cave sky, floating city, play everywhere and collect rare treasures 9. Planting development, in-depth cultivation concepts, use golden fingers and professional knowledge to develop mutant animals and plants, hybridization, etc., 10. Terrain development, how can a farm only have only one place? On a piece of land, let legendary Pokémon help you create various terrains (similar to Monster Hunter's Guiding Land), plant various crops, and raise various animals 11. To develop your strength, register as a trainer, regularly go to the Trainers Association to accept tasks and play dungeons, and obtain rewards or plot development that are beneficial to the farm There are too many plot ideas that can be used, and the author does not need to stick to the farm. The farm is not a limitation, it is actually a platform, and everything can be integrated organically

If there are more than six Pokémon, the trainer's energy will be too scattered and unable to take care of every Pokémon, so a trainer can only carry 6 Pokémon at the same time. This setting is really the core of all Pokémon stories, especially daily stories, because this is the key to setting the world view of Pokémon and making fierce battles feel warm and accompanied. Although this book is a farm and requires a large number of Pokémon, I feel that there is a problem with the setting of having several Pokémon of each type at the beginning. Only one of each type of Pokémon is enough as the "head sheep" at the beginning. Naoki only needs to be close to the leader sheep. The affection can be transmitted to the entire group through the head sheep, and the management team is composed of Pokémon such as Biker and other deputy Pokémon, which can not only ensure the operation of the farm, but also ensure the relationship between the Pokémon. The mythical beasts can be used as customers of the farmhouse, or as entrusted tasks. After being connected through major events, he would come to visit from time to time and leave strengthening materials. There was no need to consider balance in the battle. The farm leader Pokémon had been strengthened so many times. The battle scenes were just filled with fancy words to create a sense of the picture. If nothing else, stay away from the mythical beasts. Point, it really doesn't match the style of the farm. Fortunately, Lei Guanwang usually doesn't cause trouble, but Pluto Dragon can't stay permanently. The things he does will be completely out of the scope of the farm. I gave up before because of the real incident of Pluto Dragon offline. Naoki's emotions were too hard to write.

Author, do you still remember me? You and I have not known each other since childhood. You played at your house and I played at mine.