Pokémon Modifier

Even if the author likes Xiaozhi, there is no need to imitate Xiaozhi. After all, Xiaozhi went back to pick up Bi Diao in the end. It was obviously written by the author to ask the Tibetan Chinchilla if he wanted to go back to the ecological park with him, but he didn't ask until the end. He obviously recalled the Tibetan Chinchilla saving him many times in his memory. Even if the Tibetan Chinchilla liked life in the wild and didn't want to go to the ecological park, you should ask anyway, right? This is obviously written by the author himself. I have to ask, but it makes you feel the regret that I didn't feel with Xiaozhi, right?

First of all, I really like this book and I am very grateful to the author. It's a very healing plot. The author's understanding and feeling of the Pokémon world are completely consistent with my thoughts when I was a child. Go on adventures, meet new elves, meet unexpected encounters that have been planned, and make new friends. But can you make some suggestions? Is it possible to add some description of the environment or something like that? For example, the Gengar chapter I am reading now. If there is a mirror-like sea surface to the sunset on the sea, a deep ocean and so on. I might feel better. Also, you can see the author's love for Pokémon through this book. But maybe there is something wrong with us, so we are not very good at writing a protagonist who loves life. For example, smile at strange elves, talk actively with strangers, etc. And I feel like the time and news in the book should also exist somewhat independently of the protagonist. For example, there is a drought in a certain place. Also, can you add something scientific? Some things I think should exist in another world. For example, the essence of the sleepless characteristic is some kind of enzyme in Guai Li's body. My science is not bad. If you need it, please send me a private message. I hope I can give you some help. In fact, I also hope that the author can add something closer to our lives. For example, there is an epidemic or something like that. I think viruses should exist in another world. If it feels bad, we can also add some local customs and special food. The presentation of a certain region might be better if it has more aspects. Finally, thank you very much for bringing me this book.

Author, your novel is just because of the name. If you change it to a better name, the results will be more than that. This is the world of Pokémon in my heart, just like Populus euphratica!

I feel that since this article is based on daily life, the daily content can be written in more detail. I saved forty or fifty chapters before reading it, and my feeling is that compared to daily life, it is a bit more inclined to narrate for the sake of narration. One thing is written in only one or two chapters. I can't feel the emotions of the characters and the love-hate disputes after reading it. And there are many things that can be written about, and the author has just mentioned them all. For example, when watching a movie made by Rose Ledo, you can write that Hu Yang is going to go to the movie, and then gather the elves together to ask who wants to see it. In the end, everyone wants to go, even Rose Ledo wants to go and see how the film is going. In the end, because there are too many people, Hu Yang even needs to book two shows to watch it. And the movie of Rose Redo, the movie that Rose Redo spent so much effort on, you ended it with just one sentence? ! I can't be more specific. Forget it, I will write a fan creation later. I hope the author will correct it! Don't make your daily writing short, otherwise I don't think you can write about 2.5 Million. I feel like you may not be able to write about 2 million.

I didn't expect it to end so soon. At first I thought Hu Yang had traveled through time. I didn't expect that he would reincarnate endlessly for the sake of Pokémon without hesitation. I was also confused, but luckily I found the right direction in the end. It would be a pity that Xiaozhi and the others couldn't go on together. In fact, if the author didn't write Hu Yang If I were to live forever, I would feel better. When I read more than 70% of the book, I felt a little sad 😭. Fortunately, it didn't end in the end. It is one of the more heart-warming Pokémon novels I have read. It can be compared with this book, but the book is too short, which is the only regret. Finally, I hope Populus euphratica will not be reincarnated again.

Reading through the whole story, I can see that the author has copied the plot of the original work in many places, and rarely has any innovations of his own, which gave me the feeling of following a process. Take the latest updates of 579, 580, and 581 as an example. The plot is exactly the same as that of Hoopa's Theatrical Version of Nimbus' Super Demon, without even a single change. To be honest, I'm a little disappointed, because at best it's like revisiting a classic, but at worst it's just copying it.

Reading it every day can make your heart full of holes come back to life a little bit. At least you can still imagine beautiful things.

Originally, it was just a matter of updating the crotch pull, but now the plot has gone so far that I don't know where to go. I've been crazy about setting up plots, and I don't know what to say.

This is a good book, not one of those vulgar plug-in dark Liulong Aotian junk shell-breaking dream novels

I voted for two monthly votes only to find out that I got double monthly votes again haha

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking Pokémon fanfic. It's really good.

Feng Da's writing is great, please continue to work hard.

The viewing experience is much more surprising than expected. It is not the kind of PM's mindless golden finger novel, but the emotions of the elves and trainers are very good. But what I'm worried about now is the frequency of PMs being collected. If PMs are collected just for tactics, it will definitely lead to the PMs who appeared before being left out. This is also the reason why I don't like the kind of PMs that collect a lot of PMs at once. I hope that every pm received can have feelings and enough opportunities. If the author takes an emotional route, please be sure to grasp the degree. Keep it up, hope you can keep writing! To make a complaint, if I hadn't clicked in to take a look at it because I haven't read much recently, otherwise I would have really missed it. Is the author really not considering changing his name?

Bah

The writing is very good. I hope the author can write a longer novel. I will try to vote for the author in the future.

Thoughts after reading dozens of chapters: The writing is really good. Although the writing style is a bit rusty, the atmosphere is quite strong. It is this unfamiliarity of the author that makes me feel as if I am reading a memoir when reading the article, whether it is from the time when I first came to this world or when I conquered the elves. Of course, this is just a personal subjective point of view and does not affect the reading.

Come on! This is my favorite elf fanfic I have ever seen. I hope the author can maintain this level and style until the end!

Jiangjiang is here, bringing army hot pot, Bobo chicken, dried tofu with egg, fried tofu and steamed bun soup, and snail and lion rice noodles to watch the big book and make a call while eating.

Great book, thank you to the author 😁😁😁

It's really beautiful. Full subscription support😁

Let me ask the author how many of the 556 chapters in this book have been completed?

Just make do with a picture that doesn't flash (when posting pictures, find something interesting, don't always post those from the game)

Why I like this novel To me, Pokémon are neither fighting tools nor pets. They are friends who can communicate with each other and accompany each other. In this fantasy world, the young "I" and the equally young Pokémon met, traveled together, took risks together, and grew up together. I have no hesitation in believing that Pokémon and I can remain partners who can trust and rely on each other until the end of one of our lives. The bottom line is that I am afraid of being alone, and I have doubts about the relationship between people, but in the fantasy world of Pokémon, I don't have to hide my weakness, and my feelings can be communicated to each other. I'm going to start crying when I don't have any fluff to stick on.

After seeing the battle between Groudon and Kyogre, the writing was really enlightening. It is obvious that the Ancient Moon Bird can hang up and fight the two mythical beasts, but in the end he went to find the rock pillar. These are not problems. The problem is that before departure, he deliberately wrote that the protagonist planned to fish for one more day. This can be explained, but later he wrote that the original returning fish was destroyed by Liuli City. The protagonist's life The ecological garden was also destroyed. It's okay to read them separately, but taken together, it seems that the protagonist's fishing led to all these disasters. Later, the protagonist also showed anger, which gave people the feeling that the protagonist's fishing caused the disaster and then complained about Kyogre. This paragraph is really difficult to describe, and the book was directly pulled down because of these pictures.

The main plot of Fengyuan persuaded me to quit. I tried my best to capture the three pillar gods, but the effect was basically useless. It was obvious that I could defeat the two gods of Fengyuan to prevent the disaster, but I went through a lot of tricks just to show off.

This book has been on the recommendation list recently. There must be a lot of friends who have just come in. I would like to say that you are welcome, and don't be affected by the title. It is not a mindless and cool article, but more of a daily type (it is troublesome to change the name and you need to re-send the contract). Basically, everyone who comes in after reading it thinks it is good. Just give it a try after clicking in. This author is also an experienced author, and his writing style is pretty good. The last book is one of the few I have re-ordered here, and it is really great. You are innocent, if you think there is any problem after reading this, feel free to trouble me (Hey, according to the author, I have been promoted to junior high school V today, I am good at it, I understand 😏)

I was initially put off by the title of the book two or three times, but I finally clicked on it because I had no book to read at work today. I didn't expect it to be such a heartwarming and interesting story. The elf is well-shaped and it totally clicked for me. It's great! (This is my personal favorite Pokémon novel in Qidian. Com)

I really like this kind of story about traveling, living and fighting with Pokémon. The relationship with Pokémon and the warm daily life deeply make me feel the beauty of this world. To me, Pokémon are partners and family. I am still reluctant to leave it after it is finished. I wish the author better results in the next book.

In fact, after reading this book for so many days, I have already realized the tenderness in my bones from the author's words. The kind of tenderness is that after experiencing pain, you don't resent it, but help others to overcome pain and find happiness. Ancient Moon Bird is great, Gengar is great, Charizard is great, Du Zhi is great, Bogaman is great, Populus euphratica is great, because they are all as simple as a child. This simplicity is not stupidity, but pure kindness and gentleness. When Populus euphratica met Guo Ranweng, he was really serious about competing with it, instead of perfunctory deception. , This won Guo Ranweng's heart, and also won our hearts. Gu Yuebird was a little stupid because of the modifier, but it still loved Populus euphratica more than itself, and Populus euphratica did not regard it as a fool or a tool, but as a family member. This is Populus euphratica. It is precisely because of his tenderness and love that he won our hearts. Every stroke in the author's words is full of pure love and tenderness, which only people with a gentle heart can reveal. I think that although the author has suffered a lot, he still treats the world gently. He must be a lovely, strong and brave person. Finally, I wish the author a happy birthday and eternal happiness! I wish "Pokémon Modifier" will never stop updating, and I wish Hu Yang and his babies to be together forever!

Don't read chapters 308-320. This is a purely intellectual plot set up to make the protagonist a legend. The protagonist did not understand the urgency of the plot, and only salted fish and butterfly wings caused the death of a large number of people who were fine in the original work (although they were all resurrected by the Phoenix King). The people in the book are not from God's perspective and can only see the protagonist as the "savior" and therefore worship him. But a reader like me who knows the beginning and the end will only find it disgusting. Most second-rate creators make the mistake of forcibly reducing their intelligence for the sake of the plot. It doesn't matter if they see too much. I will continue to read it, but later on when people read these twelve chapters, they really need to think about whether to read it or not. The plot before chapter 308 of this book can still be read. I highly recommend it if you like daily life. The battles are a mess. Just focus on one numerical value and be weird. I will continue to read after chapter 320.