Douluo Dalu: The Blind Soul Douluo

There is a lot of room for improvement in writing and plot control

What kind of person is Qian Xunji? To be honest, I have read a lot of Douluo books and fanfics. I always feel that everyone thinks of Qian Xunji's character as sinister, unscrupulous, and a scumbag. I also think Qianxunji deserves to be killed and is a scumbag, but I think Qianxunji's character shouldn't be like this. First of all, as the leader of a large force, no one can order him around, and he is highly talented. He must be arrogant and dignified. And as a leader, he must also have skills, he is ruthless, but not insidious; the proof is that the people around him are basically titled Douluo, and it is enough to use his power to suppress others, which can also highlight Qian Xunji's possessiveness. The martial spirit is a god-level martial spirit seraph, which can also influence people. Then it's Bibi Dong's business. First of all, because of Yu Xiaogang, Bibi Dong has to withdraw from Wuhun Hall. What's the concept? Moreover, Qian Xunji also tried to stop her. In the end, I personally feel that part of the reason was that she became a Chamber Douluo out of anger. Then Bibi Dong was imprisoned for a month, and then came out to wait for the birth of a child. After that, there was no mention of Qian Xunji continuing to possess Bibi Dong. I personally feel that Qian Xunji is possessive of Bibi Dong, not love, and partly uses her as a fertility machine. So, Qian Xunji is a conceited, arrogant, cruel and possessive person. Take this book as an example: Qianxunji will think that a blind man is not worthy of Bibi Dong, who he wants to use as a fertility machine, and will directly reject and transfer the protagonist. He is not likely to enter a secret room from the beginning, and will even stop using Bibi Dong because she has lost her virginity, and wants to kill the protagonist.

I think this book is a poisonous book. It was okay in the early stage, but in the middle stage, the protagonist is even more Tang San than Tang San. He has double standards, is a white-eyed wolf, is ungrateful, forced A Yin to be exposed, etc., And even let Yu Xiaogang teach his own child for several years. You are also awesome.

Bibi Dong

Author, I advise you not to make this book so short

I got the jelly grass, but the protagonist didn't get the title until he was in his forties. He had several women, but his relationship was not going well at all. The author always likes to mess around with things. For example, Bo Saixi was pregnant, and the protagonist didn't know it. After more than ten years of leaving, A Yin was pregnant and faced Qian Xun's emergency. Then the plot was similar to Tang Hao's, A Rou also died, and Bibi Dong's plot was also terrible. In short, the author just didn't want to make readers happy, all kinds of disgusting people.

What is it written? No matter what martial soul the protagonist absorbs, it is an Asura skill, and his sister's is a modified version of the devil. It is better to write a self-created soul skill than this. It always arranges various coincidences for the protagonist. Everything can be encountered. If you want to find a soul beast, you will come by yourself. If you find a treasure, someone will come. If you find a good thing in a bad guy randomly, if you find danger without the protagonist, the whole group will be destroyed., Sense of timeline. It feels ridiculously confusing. Tang Xiao is about 15 years older than Tang Hao but is actually the same age. Ning Fengzhi started dating Ning Rongrong's mother. Bibi Dong was only 13 years old. There is also a disgusting plot about Tang Hao not getting to know Xiao Wu's mother A Rou before A Yin. Do you still want to sacrifice? The upgrade is also ridiculously fast. Even the upgrade process is omitted. After a few chapters, you will upgrade to a few levels. I can't bear it anymore.

Wuhundian: "We are here, and they will build schools and hospitals for you, and give you subsidies. This is not because of their conscience, nor because they have become good people, but because we are here."

The protagonist's martial soul is innately full of soul power, so he can reach Douluo no matter what. If the Wuhun Palace knows about it, it won't be short of that little money. Building a sentient head soul bone to solve the problem of congenital blindness is a sure-fire business. And the protagonist doesn't want to reveal that he can sense the outside world. Just talk about martial arts and innate talents. What's wrong with directly entering the martial arts hall and relying on the big tree?

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