The Junior Sister Club Is Frightened but Draws Its Sword

Although there are many typos in the text, and the writing is a little shy in some places, overall this book is still very good, recording Lu Yun's step-by-step growth, from Lu Yun, the junior sister of Wentianfeng, to Lu Yun, who dares to compete with heaven and opens the door to immortality, which is the way to survive for the entire world of immortality. Every step of the growth process is very exciting. The relationship between Lu Yun, her senior brother and her friends is not love but is better than love. The bonds of family and friendship can also be unforgettable. The character's rebellious spirit and his ability to control his own destiny are well written by the author.

I wish there were more female supporting characters, but there are four disciples in a peak but there is only one female disciple. The female supporting characters seem to only have vicious competition or admiration. The three-dimensionality of the characters is low, and I can't feel their personal charm. I hope that the female partners can meet at the top, and they can compete with each other, using wisdom, military strategy, and scheming, but why they are malicious and jealous, this very limits the development of this article. Carrying a sword can refer to people all over the world. Using a sword to make friends is not a matter of kindness or lust. But the next few chapters are pretty good, not as pretentious as the previous ones.

How can I put it this way, the character of the heroine is really attractive, not in terms of social fear, but in terms of her genius and strong swordsmanship, which makes her feel more orthodox about cultivating immortals. However, I feel that the description of the sect is very one-sided. For example, it seems that they are all other disciples who follow others' opinions and verbally criticize the heroine. The image of the elders is also a little bit. . . Don't know what to say. The fighting scenes are very cool, but the heroine is just practicing Qi, which is a bit too much (┯_┯)

I originally wanted to watch it, but since the heroine in the original novel is green tea, it's not necessary and it's a bit cliche.

After reading the first few chapters, I was persuaded to quit It's too naive, I hope the author can get better and better It is not a very wise behavior to use not-so-smart supporting characters to set off the strength of the protagonist and create a sense of pleasure I believe that many female readers would prefer to see plots where girls help each other.

Author, I really feel uncomfortable reading it. The writing style really suits my taste. I am very selective in reading books and it is rare to find a book that suits my taste. However, some settings are really good and illogical. Does the sect really not care about the life and death of its disciples? Does anyone go to such a sect?

I talk about social fear, but I don't see where it manifests itself. The previous ones were full of malicious intentions from fellow students. I thought everyone was just following the characters in the book and following the path in the book, only the heroine was sober. As a result, the characters in the back suddenly wake up and apologize, so what about the brainless supporting characters in the front? If they are not brainless, at least they have to get over it...

Stop competing with each other 🥺 If you want to abuse, just abuse the original male lead.

The hostess is so holy that when others want to kill her, she not only saves them, but also teaches them the art of swordsmanship.

It feels like the heroine's experience is planned, either foreshadowing or not written well The chance of the distant heroine has been given to the current heroine, such as the tiger So I make a bold guess: The world is about to be destroyed, Tiandao has joined forces with the big guys to save themselves, and is preparing to use all the power of the world to cultivate a person who is powerful enough to ascend, that is, the original heroine , but there may have been some accidents and failed, so we went back in time and introduced external talents, that is, the heroine, and then roughly followed the original script, with slight modifications to the plot. After that, it is estimated that all the big guys will show up in front of the heroine to show off their faces (so as not to take him with them when they ascend). For example, there is now the Beast King, the old lover of the master, and the master of the Demon Sect. Various geniuses will also show up and make friends. So do all ethnic groups. After that, it should be about going on adventures and encountering difficulties, and then either a big boss happens to be around to help, or a genius lives and dies with her In the end, the heroine saves the world, and everyone can ascend, a win-win-win situation.

The plot is zero points, the character design is okay, the villain design is zero points, and it doesn't give Song a brain🧠, or is this the way people who are PUAd are like?

The more I look at it, the more I think my cover is very interesting, so fun 😌😌

There were too many poisonous points in the first few chapters, so I basically skipped them. I stopped reading the one about that guy. I still want to ask why. The protagonist has stayed in the world of immortality for more than 10 years. It shouldn't be.

The article is very long-winded. I have to talk about so many small things. I feel extremely uncomfortable reading it. The heroine is a bit fake, especially when I read the chapter about Fu Xiu. He was almost seriously injured when he beat 6 people. The heroine took the big sword and blocked it. Fu Xiu saw that she was inconvenient and wanted to let the heroine hide behind him. As a result, he just said the heroine looked at him with a strange expression 😒

I really like this book. When I first read it, I thought it was some kind of green tea bullshit novel, but later I found out that it is more about the growth history of the heroine. The overall context of the article revolves around the process of the heroine becoming stronger. There is no romantic love, and the character creation is more interesting. I like the Miao siblings very much, and some of the descriptions of the scenery can also be included in the drama, and the writing is not bad. I highly recommend it to everyone 😁

From the moment the heroine rescued Zhang Hejin, she began to abandon the book

Why does it feel more and more ugly? It's like a routine. After saving the second brother, I immediately go to save the fourth brother. The vocal is so boring. The heroine's character in the early stage seemed to have changed in the later stage. The parts that needed to advance the plot were written bluntly, and the supporting characters only appeared to advance the plot.

The idea is very good, I like this kind of story about a heroine who is dedicated to the truth. The original heroine was a little jealous at first but she became very good after she woke up. There is no plot of female rivalry, the writing is also good, and the plot is well connected. However, the plot is not ups and downs enough. The success of the protagonist team seems too easy. No one sacrifices and it is a happy ending. Overall, the flaws are not concealed and it is worth watching.

There are so many men in the story of the non-CP heroine. Are there five and four men in the school to highlight that she is the darling of the younger junior sisters? Isn't this another kind of spoiled wife? In the few pictures I have seen, except for the heroine and the original heroine, these two women, the other characters are all men, which really offends men 😅

Oh my god, I saw it in 23 years ago and liked it very much. Then I couldn't find it. When I came back today and continued to look for it, I didn't expect that he just recommended this to me. I recognized it!

I feel like this book is quite well written, but there are a lot of typos.

I'm not afraid of society to this extent. It's uncomfortable to look at.

It's so well written. Please update it soon. It's not enough to read at all.

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Why do I become increasingly confused after reading the text? It just feels very messy. Well, the plot can't keep up. (Please don't comment on personal feelings).

(Not a scolding novel) The highlight of this book is that there is no female rivalry between the original heroine and the current heroine. The original heroine was scheming but also had a bottom line. The heroine did not argue with her and only used force to solve the problem, which was particularly good! The original heroine was completely convinced after being defeated twice. From then on, there was no causal relationship with the heroine. The two of them were not surrounding a certain man, they were just competing in a normal way. I felt very comfortable when I saw it. I think this plot is very exciting and not ridiculous. But later on I couldn't stand watching anymore. It's not that what the author wrote was shocking, but I often didn't know what to watch next. I felt that the heroine was always being plotted by the boss, and was turned around like a tool. The heroine herself didn't know what she was doing, and I didn't even know what the heroine was doing. It turns out that there is a goal to defeat the original heroine, a competitor, but the subsequent goals seem to be stretched infinitely to soar. The goal feels very long, and the plot in the middle is very bland. The heroine is still building a foundation after 100 chapters, but the whole novel only has about 400 chapters... There is no sense that the heroine has successfully completed the current small goal and resolved the current conflict. The plot is not ups and downs enough.

It seems like there are a lot of typos, but actually I have written hundreds of chapters.

Oh my god, it's as big as the Immortal Cultivation Edition. ,

I can't help it anymore. I really liked this back then and got to the finale. Now I have changed my account on my phone and I can't find my old account.

Strange, why can't I feel happy when the plot clearly slaps the heroine in the face?