Junior Sister, You Have Lost Your Moral Integrity.

I followed this book from beginning to end. The beginning was good, but the end ended so anticlimactically? It was obviously only a quarter of the way through and ended in a hurry. It makes people feel really unhappy

This book should be called "The Author's Integrity Is Lost...". I've read two of your books, and they both start at the beginning and end at the end!

The ending was inexplicably bad, I thought it was finally getting to the point, Goodfellas is over

Why should it be unfinished? The next dozen or so chapters are obviously perfunctory. The first part is so well written, but the second part is finished in a hurry. It's really cheating! I think the author can keep writing about how he struggled with his sister when he reached the higher planes, and how he slapped those unruly and willful young ladies in the face...

The author always says that the female protagonist has poor qualifications, but the female protagonist has reached the 7th level of Qi training in less than 3 years. Is this bad? ? ? That Mo Feng has practiced for more than 70 years before reaching the sixth level of Qi. This setting is very strange! Why didn't Mo Feng just leave after he died? Didn't Wu Yi only have 3 years to live? She misses home so much, even if the heroine doesn't leave herself, she can let Wu Yi leave!

The article has nothing to do with the title. The ending is too hasty.

Complete the book in one chapter 🙂

The beginning was good, but there were a lot of flaws in the 50 chapters before the ending. This ending is really drunk, and a supporting character was pulled out to be the hero... What is the difference between this and no ending? What a waste of money 😓

The ending was rushed enough. It has been very perfunctory since the ancient battlefield. Even the arrangements for Abi and Ayin were not written clearly. Write a side story. There is just no ending

I gave up after reading 20 chapters. Every author's hard work on coding is worthy of respect, but I still have to say that the logical arrangement is really a bit confusing and verbose. When the medicine came out for the first time, the heroine said that she saw something. Then in the next chapter, she said that she suddenly found that she could see her meridians or her pubic area. She couldn't remember clearly... Anyway, it made people look tired and messy. I hope the author can carefully read through each chapter and check it thoroughly after writing it.

Why do you feel that except for geniuses with incredible qualifications, everyone else must use Foundation Building Pills? Cultivation is about one's own understanding of the Tao. Pills should play a supporting role and are not necessary. At least the reason for not being able to build Foundation is because of insufficient qualifications, not because there are none. But this is cultivation. You can't have pills in every realm to break through, right?

The content has nothing to do with the introduction.

Should there be a second finale? . . . .

Yes, the introduction is very informative. It doesn't matter after reading the article.

After reading the introduction, it was good. After reading a few pictures, I really didn't know what it was about and couldn't stand it.

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience

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In fact, the heroine of this book is more suitable to write about evil cultivators? Personal feeling

The heroine is so dangerous now and still dares not to practice. Doesn't she know that it takes strength to change her destiny?

The plot develops too slowly! There is a gap with the copywriting introduction!

Come on, five tickets a day! !