The Taiyi Dao Fruit

It feels very funny. The protagonist says that there are dangers outside the sect, private fights are prohibited within the sect, etc. However, it turns out that these rules only apply to pig horns. Anyone in the sect can attack the protagonist. The key is that there seems to be no means of tracing. This is called safety, and you will die from poison.

It's so funny that you can't even figure out who the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are, so you're writing a book. Is the Yellow Emperor the Three Sovereigns? Shen Nong, Fu Xi and Sui Ren are the three emperors, okay? Huang Emperor is the first of the Five Emperors

Although it's quite exciting, author, you have to be logical. The Dinghu school is the best in terms of emotions, right? Why don't these people go to the Taoist sect instead of the protagonist? Throughout the book until now, the protagonist has been targeted by all kinds of people and things, and it never stops. Even though it's thin every time, it does feel a bit boring. Can't you change your routine? I understand that the protagonist was weak and had no background when he was young, but now he is a genius who is one of the top forces in the world, and he is still approached by all kinds of cats and dogs. Although the reasons you gave are quite reasonable, it is still annoying. Why don't others argue about things so much? I suggest that these messy things should be dealt with quickly. Every time I start to fight back after being called upon, this is not something that a Yi Dao master would encounter.

Stop writing your shitty jokes, okay?

I don't know why, but the more I watch it, the more I feel frustrated. Just because the protagonist is pregnant with the Jiang family, there are so many people inside and outside the sect who want to kill him. The whole plot makes people feel uncomfortable. It feels like there is a halo of ridicule. Everyone wants to kill him, which is very tiring.

The protagonist can use thirty or fifty talismans at a time, and they can be scattered without money, and they always work wonders. However, neither the so-called third son of the Jiang family nor the traitor who is being hunted has ever used such a simple, crude and effective thing. Jiang Zhuyun has a bunch of things in his hand that look awesome, but in fact, he only uses a few healing pills and a useless military god's five soldiers. From the beginning to the end, he has not done any effective damage. Can't people other than the protagonist use damage props?

I'm not saying that, I feel that the protagonist has no meaning in that sect. Yaoguang doesn't like the protagonist very much, Kaiyang is always on guard against him, Tianji plots against him, Tianxuan probably just uses him as a tool, let's not talk about it before the leader appears, and the other two are just Tianxuan's licking dogs. It always feels a little aggrieved to see it this way.

It feels to me that everything is not going well for the protagonist, it's not that he can't do anything, but that everything he does has to be met with twists and turns. For example: I went to a canteen from home to buy a pack of salt. I was hit by an electric car on the side of the road and scratched my skin. Then I fell into a ditch on the side of the road while walking. I slipped several times when I tried to get up. Finally, after a lot of hard work, I finally bought the salt and went home, but I was in a mess.                                                                Apart from the Daoguo's own abilities, most of the protagonist's other skills, magical powers, etc. Are incomplete. The sixth true biography of the dignified one does not have a complete sect's skills, which is too abstract.

In fact, some of the descriptions of angel wings could be less and a bit peace-keeping. Author, several of your novels have this flavor, martial arts, more pure Chinese flavor, not like Xuanyuan Sword: Traces of the Sky, which is useless. Learn from Zhu Xian

If this book excludes driving and rushing, the results will be at least several times better than now. Every time I read it, it is good, but in the blink of an eye, it becomes inexplicably a pornographic article.