Coiling Dragon: The Evolution of Life

Do you think people who have read the original work are idiots? You've already fused with the rules, and you're a seven-star powerhouse, a mid-level god? In a rule-based world, reaching four stars naturally makes you a high-level god. How can you get this wrong in a fanfiction? I suggest you abandon this book and go back and read the original work again.

The protagonist was rescued and joined the Temple of Life. He then cultivated his way up to godhood, eventually reaching the Great Perfection level in the God Realm of Life, and rightfully followed the Lord of Life.

Well, to put it simply, being level nine meant someone cast a level nine healing spell on you, and you swore an oath to the Supreme God to do three things for free, all within the material plane... The rest, you guys can judge for yourselves.

I'm really looking forward to it; the protagonist will be writing about the rules of life. Most previous protagonists were wind and earth, because those were Lin Lei's main cultivation areas in the original story.

There aren't many people writing Panlong fanfiction; eight or nine out of ten are abandoned. I hope you write well. I'll save this for later and give it a recommendation.

Most Panlong novels are poorly written, even the power system and universe are haphazardly altered. They just use a few Panlong terms and write it in a nonsensical way. I wonder how this one is.

Trying to capitalize on the popularity of the original work while altering its settings, I could accept it as a new book, but as fanfiction, it's unbearable.

If you can't develop this younger brother character, don't write it. Maybe you're planning to use him to later show off and get back at others to advance the plot, but that's a really bad strategy.

Why is it that everyone achieves godhood externally? Personally, I feel that external godhood is too common. People who achieve this are often afraid of death. The first thought that comes to mind is that it grants an extra life. Furthermore, three of the four Rulers achieved godhood internally and are at the Great Perfection stage, while the Death Ruler's external godhood doesn't involve the…

We can leave now.