I Kill Gods in My Dream

Shennong's test book represents only his personal opinion. From the current point of view, the protagonist's personality should be a big heart. If the setting of an older online novel is used, the protagonist will have a complete lack of emotion, or have no fear, and is calm and rational far beyond ordinary people. In addition, I don't like the plot of Chapter 34, but it's okay and acceptable. Finally, the author should not be stingy in shaping the characters. I have experienced two dreams so far, and the most beautiful female characters in them can be related to the ordinary and ordinary protagonists in reality. I don't like this kind of protagonist who has been around ordinary people for the first 20 years, but then starts to walk around with a hundred ghosts at night when he first achieves his magical power. I prefer the plot of Shilipo Sword God. The world is so big that there are so many places where the plot can happen and the protagonist saves. The protagonist constantly shapes his identity and gains attribute points to advance step by step. It's great, and it's fun to watch It's not this kind of thing. If you know something is going on in the world, you'll run over and you won't be able to save yourself, but you'll be in trouble for the rest of your life, and it may even harm your family.

The author can consider that when assuming the role, he will be affected by the experience and habits in the character setting - for example, when he assumes the role of a fisherman, he becomes as cheerful and heroic as most fishermen, and even challenges the gods, while when he assumes the role of Mr. Detective A, his thoughts will become calm and delicate. This can also explain why the protagonist is so big-hearted the first time, but calm and elegant the second time

You should write whatever you want. Some people are just like eunuchs who don't have a heroine. The protagonist of the novel should have a period of life that is close to reality. If you want to live without a heroine, don't find a girlfriend or marry a wife. If you don't have a heroine at all, the author can do it according to his own ideas. Don't listen to this or that.

What the hell is this live broadcast barrage written in? Players perform dangerous live broadcasts, and the barrages posted by other players are all about worrying IQs, and there is no sense of crisis at all. Also in the book, the yin is strong and the yang is weak. Basically, the protagonist meets women, and everyone is curious and interested in the protagonist.

Seeing that the protagonist is still so bad now, I hope the author can understand that when the gap in strength is too large, IQ cannot make up for it. It's also really painful to watch the main character rely on this and that every day. Even now, he can't make up his identity as someone with extraordinary strength. Doesn't he have AI to help him? The side effects of having a three-legged cat's strength are ridiculous. Stop having your IQ online every day. When a strong person doesn't abide by the rules of the game and you are not strong enough, you have to send it no matter how many identities you have. If this continues, the writer should consider changing the protagonist. I hope the author will not be deceived like a villain when he writes the article, and can use more brains.

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To be honest, in the first chapter, a maid from the dream came, which directly reduced the mystery to obscenity, the extraordinary to daydreaming, and the pig-foot temperament directly became that of a primary school student.

How many books is this in? You guys are writing about behind-the-scenes stories. Do you really like to find a woman to show off your waistcoat? Do you think it would be insincere not to tell the truth to the heroine? The protagonist of the time travel system does not go around saying that he is a time traveler and has a system.

Eunuch, I at least post an explanation to give an explanation to the readers who are following me.

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Oh my god, this thing is so embarrassing, but I can actually see it recommended by others.

It feels like the player's settings are designed to satisfy the need to show off. The first round of inserted tasks can also be said to advance the plot, allowing Detective A and Weird to connect. In the second round, when the team was suddenly inserted during the transaction, it felt awkward to force the audience to show off. If it must be inserted, it can actually be that a certain task team is doing a task nearby. When they hear the explosion, Detective A puts on a gorgeous show, and then starts a live broadcast. After the fight, they talk about picking flowers, and everyone praises the boss. Then he complained that the protagonist was completely pinching his own face. It was easy to guess the author's intention, which was to make other characters, especially female characters, recognize him and attract girls in the future. As well as making the villain think of the dream character and his true form, attacking the protagonist to advance the plot - I would say this is a poisonous point for many readers. Especially when the protagonist is not in the Qidian Orphanage, his parents are still in college, and the problem of a train attack on both sides will be even more poisonous. Also, I don't know if the author has considered the AI ​​setting of the controllable characters. Part of the action time of the character without a ticket actually takes place in the same time and space as the protagonist. In other words, when they meet, there will be many possibilities for different settings such as virtual personality/AI/different timeline/world line/secondary processing of real souls. In the same game, some people like to use the same gender and nicknames, which are also their usual online names, and they pay attention to a sense of substitution. For example, the protagonist of this book. Some people like the opposite sex, and their nicknames will also use the names of their favorite characters. They pay attention to a wife and husband who are eye-catching to the opposite sex. In other words, the fourth role of the protagonist can basically determine the direction of the next development.

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Don't write about female characters in depth in every plot. It'll read like an urban cool novel, and you won't be able to read it directly.

You kill gods every day. Have gods dug up your ancestral graves?

I thought it was okay at first, but after reading Chapter 38, I instantly lost the desire to read it. I just tied up an unrelated person and threatened me. I just did whatever they asked me to do. I really had the heart of a Holy Mother.

As for the heroine, it is very difficult for an author to get around it if he wants to continue to improve. My suggestion is not to touch the first book because he is not strong in resisting risks. Copy some correct answers that are not so difficult first. But if you don't have to worry about food and drink in the future, it is still recommended to practice. After all, there are too few authors who write good heroines. If you can do it, it will be a big asymmetric advantage. (I also like books with female protagonists. This wave is cultivating authors, haha)

It's well written, why haven't you updated it?

Xdm, do you have any recommendations for books on this kind of group running theme? There is a shortage of books.