Game of Thrones: the Mercenary King

It's a game of thrones, not a game of bed. There are hundreds of thousands of words that are either about dating women or looking for women. Just take it with you and forget it. It's happened too many times, and it looks particularly disgusting.

A song of killing and fucking?🙂

The entry point of this book is not bad, as Aegon participates in the great changes in Westeros. However, one thing that is hard to argue with in the original work is that nobles also practice monogamy. It may be a bit difficult for you to seduce the daughters of other real nobles later on. Similarly, if the author still wants to have more female protagonists, the Blackfire Rebellion of the Targaryen Dynasty will happen again.

Write quickly. I want to criticize the protagonist.

It is still recommended to polish it a little bit. The author dares to write. But don't think too much about explaining everything in just a few sentences. The first few chapters are very interesting to read. After reading the fifth chapter, I immediately felt that I lost most of my interest due to the novice-style writing. The description of behavior and conversation is too lacking in character. It just feels like two modern people talking nonsense.

I just read the third chapter and it was very well written. Keep up the good work, the author, as long as you don't write those messy things about gods and ghosts like that Holy Flame King.

Atlas, you can look here when you don't know the location.

After reading so many books, I don't think I've ever seen one that opens up a harem ruthlessly. I don't think I've seen Sansa, Arya, Margaery, Myrcella, Bear Girl, and Daenerys all together 😭

It's good to read, the only Game of Thrones fan fiction I like to read. It covers both fighting and collecting women. The other Game of Thrones books are either in the middle of a war or on the way to a war, which is boring to death.

The further you get to the end, the more words are added to the plot and there is nothing interesting about it. It's nothing more than copying the plot of the original book or TV series onto the pig's feet. Really, in order to catch up with various major events, the plot is forcibly killed and the wit is forcibly reduced.

Little Rose

🙂I want to see big scenes, epic battles, rivers of blood

If the dragon doesn't appear in the later plots, it can only be used as a pet.

Myrcella

WTF, what kind of thing is written in the section to King's Landing? He is either in Japan or on the way to Japan. Goldfinger is only mentioned once in chapter 20, and his agility is only increased a little. The main line is very clear, kill while sunning, wait for the time to kill Viserys and kill Robert, and then establish himself as king to rule the world. Before the time comes, it will probably be day and day. The main character's personal charm depends on spreading money and spending money, and the benefits brought by spending time are even greater than spending money. The one he gets is either a slutty lady or his deceased father and only daughter. Is this his plan to acquire the entire continent?

Author, please make a character card. A few good-looking pictures can improve the sense of immersion and reading experience.

Author, your book is bound to be popular, it is so well written, please stick to it. In addition, the author, you should strengthen the description of the killing array. The description of the war in the Summer Islands is too ordinary. If you don't understand Western European-style cold weapon warfare, I recommend buying a copy of Emperor Morris's "Strategy", which contains very detailed descriptions of formation changes, command, and soldier training. Finally, I wish the author a speedy success.