Let You Rebel and Establish the Immortal Kingdom?

It is recommended not to write about summoning historical figures

I suggest you watch Jet Li's version of Fearless. In it, he beat an opponent to death, and the opponent's apprentice killed all of Huo Yuanjia's wives and daughters. If they are all enemies, don't hold back. The protagonist is too merciful and merciless, and he spares the wives and daughters of the enemy family 😥😥😥

If this pattern is not changed, it will not go far. If there is no military formation, it is basically impossible to establish the Yun Dynasty. If you practice at a higher level, you will kill everyone in an instant and there will be no way to start.

Can't luck be restored naturally?

Don't set your personal force too extraordinary in the hegemony text. A single warrior of several levels can determine the outcome of a battle, and then you have to fight with the chicken-feather army.

If you want to be an emperor, don't play the tricks of the Datong society. The princes and generals Xiang Ning are so talented that they can lay hidden dangers for their future rule. So if you are thinking about revolution in another world, don't play the tricks of the emperor. Don't think about luck or anything like that.

I feel that since we are developing fairy dynasty-type novels, we cannot write too fast, we must slow down the pace, and the timeline must be extended. Otherwise, how can a power established in just a few decades defeat a power tens of thousands of years old? I have read a book called Eternal Kingdom, which is also a Senchao-ryu novel. The writing was okay at first, but the pace was too fast, and my personal strength was too much. It was unfinished, and the ending was too hasty. I felt free to write, and tens of millions of words would not be a problem. I hope this book can be well written and developed, and that my personal strength should not be too prominent. This book has a grand world view, and there are definitely many realms. If the protagonist's strength improves too quickly, it will become a fantasy novel.

Do you have to write about the luck of killing someone? Since it is a jade seal, the territory will expand and the overall strength will increase, the population, materials and money will increase, and the people will support you. If your luck has improved, won't you be able to generate more luck after you use it? Is it a one-time product? If you write about your luck, it will be of no use. It is better to use the whole system of adding points to kill people, which will save you money and sell dog meat.

I have a suggestion: Add the Jade Seal of the Kingdom to use luck to realize enlightenment, increase the speed of cultivation, and add some elements of luck to identify the novel Yi Ding.

I hope to add a "many ants bite the elephant to death" method such as military formation, otherwise in the later stage, as long as you reach a small level, you can kill everything instantly with your eyes closed. The army, power, people's hearts, etc. Become meaningless. Anyway, experts with trillions of dollars can't defeat enemies even if they are only a small level higher.

Don't go to the back and don't engage in science and technology. Don't tell me that ancient society could achieve great harmony. The great development of modern productivity has not been achieved.

Has the author seen Eternal Kingdom?

The body has improved, but the mind cannot be left behind.

It's too idealistic. You want to be an emperor and create a new social system. The results of thousands of years of practice are unsightly in your writing.

I would like to give you a suggestion: be less shocked. When you are startled, you will be startled at every turn. Have a little style, okay?

I like the subject matter very much, but the author's writing style is not good and not grand enough.

I feel like if I want to see the content in the introduction, it can be as fast as four or five hundred, and if it is slow, it may be over a thousand or even the finale.

Come on, two problems can be seen in the first ten chapters of this book. The author obviously did not plan the combat power well. The personal power is far higher than the collective power, which will make the collective power dispensable. It is meaningless for you to expand the army, because others can choose your commander to kill. The second point is that we made a very common mistake, a mistake in combat concepts. Ancient times belonged to the era of cold weapons. Therefore, in order to increase the lethality as much as possible, we focused on causing more damage per unit area, so we formed battle formations, such as round formations, square formations, and long snake formations. The front row uses sword and shield hands to resist damage, and spear hands directly thrust out from the gaps. This requires coordination. Instead of training which push-ups are available and which ones are not, what you need to teach is discipline, which is to follow the flag and drum orders and be able to change formations without hesitation in times of crisis. It's useless even if you don't have anything, because once there is a fight, the seven-meter-long spear and spear will penetrate directly, and you can't even hide, you can only carry it.

The time span is too fast, less than half a year to reach the second level. I know that there is still immortality behind you, but you want to build a force, not just yourself. When you level up, just change the map. Once you have established a force, now it seems that it is all pig's feet killing everyone by yourself. Don't dare to split too much.

Can you summon Chinese heroic spirits or something?

Those who receive orders from heaven will live long and prosperous lives. Once the slogan is shouted, you will always be in the world.

It is recommended that the book be renamed: If it makes you crazy, will you drive the whole village crazy?