The Celestial Master of Douluo Dalu

Don't abuse Tang Sanyu Xiaogang. Secondly, we don't accept beautiful female supporting characters. Third, what kind of nine exams are there? What's so good about this self-created god? There are so many guardian gods in Taoism. A random god position is no better than a self-created one. The key point is that you also wrote that it was the funniest thing. Using the power of soul beasts is nothing more than external force. Cut it off. Too poisonous. It doesn't feel any better. Fan fiction is no fun. It still doesn't make up for the original meaning. Might as well read the original work. This wave is called persuading to cut off.

You said you couldn't borrow power, but you ended up cooperating with the soul beast. Then why are you pretending to be cool?

After reading the first few chapters, the biggest poisonous point is the whole nine-test test for mentally retarded people. A 6-year-old, level 10 kid, don't turn into a piece of shit as soon as you arrive at the Soul Beast Forest.

The first book, Dionysus, was a bit toxic, but I could still accept it, so I ordered it all; the second book, The Eunuch, honestly didn't understand what the story was about, and I was a little confused; the third book, I saw that I had gone back to participate in Poseidon Fate and then gave up, I really couldn't accept it; the fourth book, it was a critical hit at the beginning. Goodbye, never see you again

I think there is something wrong. This soul ring should not be the earliest product of cultivation in Douluo Continent, which means it has nothing to do with the Nine Examinations of Heaven. After all, in the original work of Douluo, it has been explained that it is the shackles placed on the soul beasts by the gods of the divine world to restrict the soul beasts. However, this is not a big problem and can be viewed as a parallel plane.

The Nine Tests in Chapter 6 are really speechless. You have to hunt all the soul rings by yourself. If you have such ability, why do you need a soul ring? The same goes for Yu Xiaogang in Chapter 9. When there are other people around, saying that Tang San has twin martial spirits is really forcing the protagonist to take sides. If he does not become a disciple and become a fellow sect with Tang San, then Tang San will You are not someone I can trust. After all, you know Tang San's trump card and you already have a way to kill him. This is the way many Douluo fans who attack the street start to attack the street one after another with poisonous points

I have never seen an author who gets worse as he writes. When you reach 6 and take off, you don't get paid. Who do you think you are? As a fan writer, brother, you have to write in line with public opinion and abide by the settings. Readers come for all kinds of reasons. What do you want to do if you don't change anything? Isn't it good to read the original work? I have been reading novels for many years, but my starting time was very short, because I didn't have a mobile phone when I was young. I used to read Peerless Tang Sect and Great Master, one book a month, about 60 chapters. What was your last book about? You can change it very simply, kill the Red King and blame Shrek, or lead a team to defeat Tang Sect and Shrek. You can work with the Snow Emperor to become like-minded people, change the continent, Civilization Research Institute, a very good name, but it is a pity that there is no civilization. In my opinion, the Federation is considered civilized

There are too many flaws, such as the Nine Tests of Heaven, and the Immortal Grass. Even Dugu Bo is dead. Tang San still has the Immortal Grass. When I was playing Dionysus, I wanted to say why the Immortal Grass is still Tang San's.

It turns out that you wrote the book "The World-Suppressing Bronze Coffin", no wonder! I said why are there two fools. The product is written so similar?

Why don't you go to the Ice and Fire Eyes to get the fairy grass? Keep it for Tang San? They are all time-travelers who understand the plot. They don't take the Blue Silver Emperor soul bone or the fairy grass, and they still travel through time!