Douluo's Heavenly Master

There are no advantages or disadvantages in this book. It's just that the author's writing is always like a foot wrap. It's smelly and long, and the writing skills are not good. Reading the book is like reading a ppt, and it's like having kidney deficiency and incontinence of urination.

The author doesn't know what kind of setbacks you have encountered, but you have persisted for so long, and there is no reason to give up. Some people like your work, and some don't. You can't let people who don't like your work disappoint those who like your work. I really like your story about Chen Erhu. Although it has some flaws, I still like it. Dionysus is also the first light novel I have read. It's very inappropriate not to update for so long 🤔

There are some minor flaws in Chapters 36~38. I hope the author sees this post and corrects it. It looks really bad.

Don't abuse Tang Sanyu Xiaogang. Secondly, we don't accept beautiful female supporting characters. Third, what kind of nine exams are there? What's so good about this self-created god? There are so many guardian gods in Taoism. A random god position is no better than a self-created one. The key point is that you also wrote that it was the funniest thing. Using the power of soul beasts is nothing more than external force. Cut it off. Too poisonous. It doesn't feel any better. Fan fiction is no fun. It still doesn't make up for the original meaning. Might as well read the original work. This wave is called persuading to cut off.

You said you couldn't borrow power, but you ended up cooperating with the soul beast. Then why are you pretending to be cool?

After reading the first few chapters, the biggest poisonous point is the whole nine-test test for mentally retarded people. A 6-year-old, level 10 kid, don't turn into a piece of shit as soon as you arrive at the Soul Beast Forest.

The first book, Dionysus, was a bit toxic, but I could still accept it, so I ordered it all; the second book, The Eunuch, honestly didn't understand what the story was about, and I was a little confused; the third book, I saw that I had gone back to participate in Poseidon Fate and then gave up, I really couldn't accept it; the fourth book, it was a critical hit at the beginning. Goodbye, never see you again

I think there is something wrong. This soul ring should not be the earliest product of cultivation in Douluo Continent, which means it has nothing to do with the Nine Examinations of Heaven. After all, in the original work of Douluo, it has been explained that it is the shackles placed on the soul beasts by the gods of the divine world to restrict the soul beasts. However, this is not a big problem and can be viewed as a parallel plane.

The Nine Tests in Chapter 6 are really speechless. You have to hunt all the soul rings by yourself. If you have such ability, why do you need a soul ring? The same goes for Yu Xiaogang in Chapter 9. When there are other people around, saying that Tang San has twin martial spirits is really forcing the protagonist to take sides. If he does not become a disciple and become a fellow sect with Tang San, then Tang San will You are not someone I can trust. After all, you know Tang San's trump card and you already have a way to kill him. This is the way many Douluo fans who attack the street start to attack the street one after another with poisonous points

I have never seen an author who gets worse as he writes. When you reach 6 and take off, you don't get paid. Who do you think you are? As a fan writer, brother, you have to write in line with public opinion and abide by the settings. Readers come for all kinds of reasons. What do you want to do if you don't change anything? Isn't it good to read the original work? I have been reading novels for many years, but my starting time was very short, because I didn't have a mobile phone when I was young. I used to read Peerless Tang Sect and Great Master, one book a month, about 60 chapters. What was your last book about? You can change it very simply, kill the Red King and blame Shrek, or lead a team to defeat Tang Sect and Shrek. You can work with the Snow Emperor to become like-minded people, change the continent, Civilization Research Institute, a very good name, but it is a pity that there is no civilization. In my opinion, the Federation is considered civilized

It turns out that you wrote the book "The World-Suppressing Bronze Coffin", no wonder! I said why are there two fools. The product is written so similar?

There are too many flaws, such as the Nine Tests of Heaven, and the Immortal Grass. Even Dugu Bo is dead. Tang San still has the Immortal Grass. When I was playing Dionysus, I wanted to say why the Immortal Grass is still Tang San's.

Why don't you go to the Ice and Fire Eyes to get the fairy grass? Keep it for Tang San? They are all time-travelers who understand the plot. They don't take the Blue Silver Emperor soul bone or the fairy grass, and they still travel through time!

You stayed at level 30 for half a year without absorbing a soul ring. You absorbed a hundred thousand-year-old soul bone and a powerful Vajra ape soul ring that lasted for more than 8,000 years. You are only level 32, which is equivalent to one level lower than absorbing the soul ring directly without absorbing the soul bone. It took three months to ride a good horse from the Star Dou Forest to Tiandou City. Wuhun City is next to the Star Dou Forest. During the soul master competition, it was useless to go from Tiandou City to Wuhun City. Months, and the army is still marching. It took less than a month for the original Shrek to disband and walk to Tiandou City. During this period, he also experienced the Silvis Great Soul Fighting Arena and the fierce god to fight against the spirit. This is your first Douluo fan. The logic does not make sense. It is bullshit. You are not seizing the opportunity to have a deadly feud with Shrek. You are allowed to grow. This method of cultivation and growth of yours. When Tang becomes a god, you will still be bullshit. You are a scumbag.

There are too many sexy tricks in this book. Nine exams in heaven? A 6-year-old child hunts a century-old spirit beast alone? Generally speaking, a century-old spirit beast requires at least a soul master to defeat it. Not everyone is as cheating as Tang San. I am certain that 12-year-old Zhu Zhuqing and Ma Hongjun cannot defeat Tang San's first spirit ring: the four-hundred-year-old mandala snake. In addition, Dugu Bo died, but Tang San still got the fairy grass. Doesn't it mean that Shrek wouldn't be able to write if he didn't participate in the competition? After reading so many fan stories, letting Dugu Bo and Tang San become friends only has one effect: because Shrek Academy is not at a high enough level to receive some confidential information, only Dugu Bo is strong enough, and through his mouth can everyone tell Shrek about the awesomeness of the protagonists.

The protagonist doesn't know that his father is a strong man, which means that the protagonist has no brains and would have died without his father.

God Jiukao laughed. It is not possible to obtain a soul ring with the help of others. It is possible to obtain a soul ring with the help of a soul beast. Even if you make traps, poison, or use environmental factors such as terrain, I will not say anything. As a result, in the previous chapters, they were still talking about the Nine Tests in Heaven and refused to obtain the soul ring together. Now they are relying on the power of the soul beast because the reason is that they will die alone. The year before last, I thought I had a deep awareness.

No, Dugu Bo is dead, and Tang San is no longer involved with the Dugu family. How can he get the fairy grass? Even if he becomes a teammate with Dugu Yan, it is unreasonable. Who would trust someone who has only known each other for a few months so much, and let Tang San take away the fairy grass from his family, but he doesn't have any. And the protagonist's father is not too worried about the protagonist being alone outside.

The level is much different from the previous books. My evaluation of this book is shit, watery and stupid. It feels like there is no outline. I want to write it one by one. I wonder if the author still remembers the passage at the end of the copper coffin. A pure soul master will not be involved in disputes for no reason. Nowadays, I am causing trouble every day. If I have a big daddy, I don't want him to suppress everything. I might as well write cool articles and slap him in the face while causing trouble. Attached is the author's words:

Author, what is your understanding of the nine tests of independent hunting? You are so genius. Your cooperation with the soul beast is borrowing strength. Does borrowing strength count as independent hunting? It means that using the power of humans is borrowing force, but using the power of soul beasts is not borrowing force, right?

Bad reviews, talking about gossiping and looking for trouble at the same time. It's such a rubbish. It's also a scholar at the same time, and it doesn't even understand the character.

He said that he had to hunt the soul beast alone in order to complete the Nine Heavenly Examinations, so what if he cooperated with the soul beast Wind Spirit Horse? Does it count if there is someone standing next to you (Hu Liena)? If you didn't find the Millennium Spin Turtle yourself, does it count if someone (Hu Liena) led the way?

Author, you are really good at poisoning. I would like to call you the reincarnation of the Poison God.

If you have to pursue killing the soul beast by yourself, you can't ask for help, then turn around and find a soul beast to help you, and the soul beast will help you 🙂 Just take off your fucking pants and fart

There are probably a lot of poison points. I saw that the author was not very good at writing emotional scenes! This emotional scene between Hu Liena and the protagonist is so embarrassing.

The protagonist is as tangible as Jiahao😅. On the outside, he looks like a handsome young man, gentle as jade, but his heart is not. He just likes to pretend. Like Jiahao, he thinks that wearing all black clothes and a mask means he is a cold, mysterious and handsome guy. In fact, it is just the opposite. At the very least, Jiahao can pretend to be cold and silent, and the protagonist is even worse than Jiahao. Then in the Nine Exams, Wuhun needs to understand the word to absorb the soul ring. I won't say anything. I won't say anything if I don't become Master Tang San. But you, a twenty-level one-ring soul master, have absorbed more than fifty thousand-year soul rings. You are said to have the same origin as the first soul ring. Will the second soul ring be followed by hundreds of thousand-year soul rings? In the third thousand years, you will have to kill all the soul beasts in the mainland. The Dou San Spirit Tower is not as outrageous as you. The key can also increase the life of the soul ring, but what about the protagonist? There may be an improvement, but it's minimal.

I've only read a few chapters, and I'm already shocked. I've read so many Douluo fandoms, and this is the first time I've seen the saying that the 10th level of soul power is in the early stage, and the middle stage is perfect. Moreover, after the protagonist cultivates to 10th level of soul power, he doesn't quickly absorb the soul ring to break through the realm, but drags on for several months to accumulate soul power, just to cultivate to the so-called 10th level of perfection. The most outrageous thing is the so-called Nine Tests of Heaven. Please take a closer look at the specific smell of shit.

Personally, I think this movie is not as good-looking as Jueshi Zhencoff, and the protagonist is not decisive enough in killing.

I'm really speechless. Since the author plans to let the protagonist obtain the soul ring alone, then why do you design such a father based on this premise?

What other set of talismans should be written in the introduction? Why didn't they appear when they were ambushed in the Soul Master Competition? It has a shelf life, so don't use it in vain. The ones you saved before the Soul Master Competition are almost out of warranty. Your teammates are all playing four rings and five rings. Why don't you Feijian and Yellow Turban Hercules come out to help? Even if you don't use the wind blade, I believe they can beat it, right? Lure the knights away, don't throw away a bundle of talismans at the first moment, and then go up and challenge them to a duel? Do you throw away the talisman after picking it out? Are you really afraid that all your teammates will be dead by the time you're done? It's really a big mistake. I was angry when my teammates were petrified before, but now they don't care about their teammates who don't know when they will die? He also kills decisively and cannot carry it clearly.