Douluo's Bacchus

20 Chapters to persuade me to quit... I can't hold on! It seems that I have to take the poison but it still won't work... Farewell! To put it simply: It can be seen that the author likes originality very much, and the martial arts creativity is also good, but the plot arrangement is really unacceptable. First, the protagonist's martial spirit is a wine gourd, and the auxiliary martial spirit. I want to be on the front line every day, shouldn't I just be content with it? Come on at the critical moment... It's better to exchange the sword skills practiced by the protagonist with the martial arts spirit of the wine gourd... The sword is the martial spirit, and the medicinal wine is used as family medicine and the protagonist's research and development to assist training. Beagle went up all of a sudden... How come you can beat someone else's beast spirit with just one support... It's unreasonable! You're still at level 25 and you have a fight with Dai Mubai, who is over 30 levels. I'm just kidding. Second, since the protagonist has joined Wuhun Palace, he has entered Wuhun Academy. You can also go to Shrek after graduating from junior high school. Even though the author Wu explained it in the form of spoilers at the end of Chapter 20... It's still full of poisonous points. Forcing the plot together... Third, several children from the junior college are all original creations. How should I put it, even if it is a supporting role originally created by a fan, it is not good to have too many original supporting characters. It is foreseeable that there will be no drama in the future. It can also be seen in the comment area that even the little one is marginalized... Overall, the author can look at Tang San and the master objectively, without attaching too much or strong personal preferences. I like this better! The inexplicable malice is really inexplicable... But the plot is really unacceptable...

After reading this book, let me talk about my feelings. The early stage was really addictive, mainly focusing on Eight Gates Dunjia, and there were also some other large and small, fast-food stories. I forgot them after reading them, so I didn't remember them too clearly. But starting from quitting Shrek to form a team, the excitement started. He didn't follow Tang San's path. The protagonist had his own teammates and his own natural resources. If nothing else, the protagonist's team of 7 should also be able to become a god. Overall, the writing is very good, keep up the good work

Let me talk about my "personal opinion" on this novel Firstly, the description of the character's personality, which is remarkable and quite acceptable (the description of the protagonist is more vivid) Secondly, the rhythm of the plot, which can also be said to be relatively stable, not obviously too fast or too slow, the author has relatively good control over the rhythm The third is the idea, the author has a rough standard for the entire novel! In other words, the thinking is relatively clear (clear thinking is closely related to the rhythm of the article's plot) and can be recognized! The above are the advantages Disadvantage one: the use of writing! And this "I personally think" is also the most important point. The use of writing includes many factors, such as digging holes or baggage, the ability to be concise, sentences and lines, and other factors in writing. The biggest shortcoming of this novel is the use of writing. There is no obvious pitfalls or baggage. It is too general and bland, resulting in no eye-catching features in the free chapters! The second is the ability to be concise. This novel contains a lot of introductions, explanations and repetitions, which makes the whole novel very ink-filled. When I read the free chapters, except for the character dialogue, it can be said that there is no sense of immersion at all! Wordy ink... The experience is quite poor (although the narration is a narrative technique, except for the dialogue, it is a narrative, so compared to the article, it is equivalent to failure) The second disadvantage: the fighting scene. It can be said that the fighting scene is an indispensable part of all genres, and it is also one of the easiest writing techniques to introduce. Wherever there are intelligent beings, there will be disputes, rivers and lakes, and bloodshed! So how to make readers feel involved is particularly important. High-end, colorful and gorgeous skills? There is no need to be too deliberate! Describe detailed fighting? It's too boring and not engaging. I can read several chapters in one breath! Not burning or a simple generalization? It's better not to write about fighting... And the fighting scenes in this novel are too detailed. I became more and more annoyed as I read it and couldn't get into it! I can only lament that this novel is not suitable for me Summary: This is a novel that has no characteristics, is long-winded but is relatively close to reality... It can be used for fun, and it is suitable for training the mind. The author needs to pay attention to the natural paragraphs, not so long, because it is really uncomfortable to read Note: "The above opinions are purely personal opinions, please do not take them seriously"

Regarding the current situation, I would like to make a personal suggestion: 1. Chen Hu has an innate peak soul power of level 7. Although he is very good, I feel that if he continues to practice like this, experience and other events, he may reach the Super Douluo realm. (It may be a bit exaggerated, but the upper limit is level 97) [This does not count the inheritance of gods, and one must be a super genius to become a god] So I feel that the author needs to arrange for Chen Hu's martial spirit to advance once before he can be comparable to a super genius (after all, sometimes the talent gap is really big! 😢) 2. I believe that the author will definitely arrange some melee ability points for the male protagonist, but it is recommended not to use some perfect attack self-created skills at the beginning. (If you directly learn the perfect Rasengan, after all, it took 3 years for the fourth-generation talent, and it took Naruto at least 2 years to learn it perfectly! Therefore, it is recommended that the male protagonist slowly understands it, and does not succeed all at once [at least a year 🙂]) 3. The male protagonist is almost ready to get the soul ring. Although it is a bit greedy, I still recommend that the male protagonist can arrange it with the perfect configuration [yellow-yellow-purple-purple-black-black-black- Red - red 🙂] (Although this is also very abnormal) 4. It can be seen that the future god of the male protagonist is the god of wine, so the soul ring skills must be all alcoholic, so I suggest to speed up the training speed, ignore fatigue, increase critical hits, and increase real damage 😄 (maybe the idea is outrageous, it is recommended to spray lightly.) Finally, I hope the author can continue to update, I will support it! 😄

I carried it through The Genius of Wuhundian to Shrek. I thought Lin Xiaoxiao was the heroine, but after spending so much time portraying Lin Xiaoxiao, the heroine turned out to be a arrogant little princess like Ning Rongrong. I really couldn't handle it anymore. Who stipulates that those who can use martial soul fusion skills must become husband and wife? Isn't it just because of the money and resources of the Qibao Glazed Sect? With the support of Wuhun Palace, the Qibao Glazed Sect is really not a big force.      ，，，，😭

At present, the pace is relatively comfortable. There is no obvious subjective bias of the author, but it is slowly discovered in a way that promotes the plot. This is good, and I hope it will continue to be maintained. First of all, as a fan novel, adhering to the love routines and feelings of the original work, it must have a female protagonist, preferably an original female supporting character. After all, the original female protagonist of the anime itself is a deduction. Of course, try to have only one female protagonist. If there are multiple female protagonists, it may be very fresh at first, but over time it will become numb and boring (personally, no matter how many heroines are changed, it will not be as impactful as one heroine with a distinctive personality.). Secondly, in terms of plot development, you can participate in team battles, but I personally feel that it should be toned down a bit, and the original branch lines such as the Killing City are refined, so that you may have a pretty good experience.

Why do you want to join Shrek? The Shrek Academy in Dou Yili is useful except for the master in the early stage. Later, it relies entirely on Tang San to take off, okay? Only the academy after Dou 2 is called a good school. Hmm, I think it would be better to directly enter the Spirit Hall. Haha, want to take advantage of the opportunity of fairy grass? I think your book was just borrowing the world background of Douluo at the beginning. You wanted to write a Dionysian from scratch. Now you are a bit deliberately following the Shrek line. Let me talk about some basic methods. How can the people of Wuhun Temple push their own talents to others? Moreover, they need experts and experts and resources, and you still use them. This is not good.

Well, I see that many book friends don't like the protagonist joining Shrek Academy. Let me briefly explain the reasons: 1. I had the idea a long time ago that the role of Ye Liyuan is very important. He is from Shrek Academy, just like Qin Ming, but he chooses to join the Spirit Hall and will be the protagonist's biggest supporter in the Spirit Hall in the later period. In addition, I will introduce it later. Ye Liyuan forcibly concealed the information about Lin Xiaoxiao and Chen Hu. The dean of the Snow City Spirit Academy agreed. The real information about Lin Xiaoxiao and Chen Hu was not known to the upper level Spirit Academy. 2. Shrek Academy is the most important plot point in the first part of Douluo Continent. It is impossible not to involve related plots. After all, many people in Shrek Academy have a greater influence on the plot of Douluo 1. 3. Although the resources of Shrek Academy are average, the biggest resource of Shrek Academy is actually the Shrek Seven Monsters. Although there are geniuses in the upper level martial arts academy, there are absolutely few who can compare with Chen Hu and Lin Xiaoxiao, and it is impossible to gather them together. Therefore, getting along with these geniuses, fighting side by side, and learning from each other's strengths is also an improvement for the protagonist. The master's theory also has certain merits and can improve the protagonist's path. The protagonist's practice direction has been set and will not change, but it needs to be improved. 4. Although the protagonist will have a certain affection for Tang San in Shrek Academy, after all, they are all time travellers, but they will never kneel and lick blindly. They also have their own absolute persistence, and may even have conflicts with the original Shrek members. What's more, the protagonist's martial spirit can't always be so low by drinking for his teammates. How to provide auxiliary gains in battle is also a problem, and Tang San needs to be used in this aspect. 5. The protagonist will not stay in Shrek Academy forever. Due to various reasons, the protagonist will find that Shrek Academy is not suitable for him. At least during the continent-wide senior elite soul master competition, the protagonist will not become a member of Shrek Academy. 6. The protagonist is too weak in the early stage. It is not a good thing for the protagonist to directly enter the high-level vision of Wuhun Palace. After all, Bibi Dong's purpose is to bring down Wuhun Palace. In the faction of Wuhun Palace, the protagonist needs time to grow. 7. In addition, the protagonist's early growth will be through a separate dungeon, and will not all rely on Shrek Academy. That's it for now. If you really don't like this plot, you can skip it. The Shrek Academy plot won't be too long, and there will be some new things. I hope you can reluctantly give it a try. If it doesn't work, don't insist. For newcomers and new books, some aspects may not be comprehensive. I'm really sorry. Finally, thank you all for your support. If you don't like it, you can tell me and discuss it. The author will slowly grow. In addition, you can join the QQ group (734656650) to discuss the plot! Finally, thank you all again for your support

The protagonist robs Xiao Wu and all the female characters, uses Xiao Wu to deceive Tang San, forces Tang San to commit suicide, has Ning Rongrong cut Oscar to death, and has Zhu Zhuqing stab Dai Mubai to death. A Yin kills Tang Hao, and Liu Erlong kills the master. Come and take a look. You don't need to search for the book title, just click on the comments to read it. Start hunting the protagonist from Douluo

It's so rubbish. You have to give in to any opportunity. Just don't practice and wait to die. Cultivation is about fighting, especially the nearest soul bone. Either you don't want it or you choose the most rubbish one. Have you seen Tang San give it up in the original novel? Just change the protagonist. Writing this kind of protagonist is useless. Just kneel down and lick Tang San and spare the protagonist's life.

The writing is so weird. A top food auxiliary soul master and a level 7 innate genius joined the Spirit Hall. As a result, to hunt for soul rings, you have to research the types yourself and hunt them yourself. It would be very dangerous for a twenty-nine-level master to take Tang San hunting. In the end, the so-called Ye Master let a few children figure out their own martial arts spirits. Also, after graduating from Wuhun Palace, he actually recommended going to Shrek, because he was probably not going to be an undercover agent. The weirdest thing is that with the addition of Shrek, the final ending is still the original Wuhun Temple and Shrek going to war. Just multiple protagonists changed

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Chapter 24: I haven't finished reading, so I'll post my thoughts here The first poisonous point: Five seven-year-old children went hunting soul beasts by themselves, four of them were only level ten, and I was fucking drunk, but they were still the best geniuses in Wuhun Palace. Isn't this the intention to destroy them? Under normal circumstances, they should only kill the tenth level soul beast! The second poisonous point: The genius of Wuhun Palace was sent to Shrek. Are the people of Wuhun Palace fools? The third poisonous point: having a martial soul fusion skill with Ning Rongrong, and then licking her hard really disgusted me to death. Generally, books that I can't stand are deleted directly. But this one I really want to call rubbish cao

Why are the hot searches all about fellow Douluo people? It's really disgusting.

I have read more than 70 chapters. To be honest, I have read nearly 200 Douluo fanfics, and there are still more than a hundred undeleted on the bookshelf. The quality of this Douluo: Bacchus is among the top three. Only the other two can compare with it (it's a pity that both of them are out of update now...) In general, this fan can proudly say that the IQ is online throughout the whole process, and there are almost no common old poisonous spots, which is really commendable. 😁 This book is not at all those mindless novels that insult the readers' intelligence. There is no cheat system cheat. All the current opportunities are still very reasonable (compared to the original protagonist group, they are very ordinary...) And there is no such brainless point. And the logic is self-consistent, yes, the logic is self-consistent! The plot and content make sense, and based on this alone, I can't tell how many cool articles of the same genre have been published. 🤭🤭 In short, I hope the author knows that there are still many readers who support silently. The real majority of supporters still rarely post comments. The fan comment area is the hardest hit area, especially the Douluo fan. I hope the author will not be too affected by the piles of negative comments. 😁😜😜 Hey, come on, author

The writing was poor in the early stage, how can I think of a good theme? In the original work, the master at level 29 plus Tang San's own unique skills are frightened to kill a soul beast that has been around for hundreds of years. It's all kinds of hardships. You are here, an eleventh-level girl, plus a few tenth-level miscellaneous fish, hunting souls by yourself, and forcibly strengthening the protagonist's combat power. The subject matter is good originally, and without being in a group, the protagonist's support can be the core, and you can completely cheat on the support and life-saving abilities. The medicinal wine gourd also went to Pengci to attack. . .       37，， I don't often post book reviews for novels no matter how ugly they are. I'm really depressed and vomiting blood even if I don't tell you this. If you really want the protagonist to be so awesome, you can create a fairy-killing gourd or cheat Tang Hao at level 10.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         being hung up with an auxiliary sheep's head, are here to sell the dog meat of the strong attack.

Please let me know if anyone has read the latest chapter. Is Ning Rongrong the heroine or Lin Xiaoxiao the heroine. Obviously Lin Xiaoxiao is one of the rare heroines who has a better portrayal, but Ning Rongrong was forced into the role. If the heroine was Ning Rongrong, I would have given up on the book. I'll just leave it on my bookshelf for now, and I'll decide whether to delete it or not when someone replies. After all, Douluo Tongwen rarely has such a normal protagonist.

After reading Chapter 30, I was fed three mouthfuls of poisonous Xiang! 1: An auxiliary soul master who is not even a soul master, singles out an offensive soul master. What do you think, the protagonist or the author? Was the protagonist a martial arts master in his previous life? 2: You have already joined the Spirit Hall, and you can actually quit and run to Shrek. Are you really not afraid of death? Two people who can be said to be geniuses. After all, a person with innate level 7 soul power can cultivate faster than Ning Rongrong, who has level 9 innate soul power. Can the Spirit Hall really let you go? ? ? 3: Participate in the spirit fight and lose all 150 games! Where does the protagonist get his money? Instead of losing a game, do you have to pay another 10 gold soul coins if you want to fight again? Isn't the protagonist an ordinary rural family? Where did he get the money? Not to mention soul master subsidies, soul master subsidies are not enough.

Chapter 25: There is poison there. The fat man just said to you that he can eat better than me, and the protagonist started to complain. I couldn't understand... That's it Then he highlighted how stupid the protagonist is through Dai Mubai's words. I really don't want to read it. An auxiliary soul master is level 37. It's like hitting a baby. You don't know that the level difference between soul masters is very big. You can see that the hidden weapons Tang San used have some backgrounds, but you just made the Eight Gates. Why don't you just make the Rasengan? And you got up at 4 o'clock every day for 7 years, right? Just reach level 25. The key is to practice physical fitness every day. This setting is a bit poisonous. Let me do the math for you. You have 3 hours more than the Shreks. It can only be 4 hours at most. There is nothing wrong with practicing physical fitness for those 4 hours, but in terms of combat power. There is something really wrong. Tang San is born with full soul power and top-notch talents. The protagonist's level 7 combat power is almost catching up with his intuition. It's quite speechless. Tang San's Xuan Tian Kung is not as good as yours. Why not write about the battle soul master when the protagonist's assistant is so awesome? There is also the one who touches a hundred-year-old spirit beast with his body. That is because the protagonist has never practiced physical training. It will be fine after passing out. The martial spirit will also help you heal your injuries. Oscar is not that awesome. Looking at the talent of Oscar written by San Shao, it is a little lower than Tang San. There is no such awesome martial spirit. There is also a martial spirit fusion with Ning Rongrong. Combination skill, if it comes out later, I will start spraying it directly. The martial soul fusion skill requires more than just the fusion of two martial souls. I won't talk about this and go to Baidu. This book is really speechless. The author can't say whether he likes it or not. He didn't let me say it because he wrote it like this. Impossible!

He was born as a commoner, had no golden fingers, and his soul power was less than level eight, so his martial soul was still an auxiliary type. If I choose, I choose Tang San. First, there is not a single auxiliary soul master in the Golden Generation of Wuhun Palace. The Wuhun Palace is so powerful that there are many soul masters who choose to join the Wuhun Palace, but there are still no auxiliary soul masters in the golden generation. This directly proves that it is difficult for auxiliary soul masters to get ahead in the Wuhun Palace. And how much attention can an auxiliary soul master who is less than eight levels receive? Two, the protagonist's halo. Whether you agree or not, Tang San is the protagonist of Destiny in Douyi, and the world line revolves around him. In the long history of Douluo Continent, no one in Wuhun Palace can become a god, but in the future Tang San still has people around him who can. Tang San's side has a foreseeable bright future, but Wuhun Palace's side is uncertain. Three, grass jelly. In the entire Douluo Continent, except for Tang San and Ju Douluo, no one knew the fairy grass. Poison Douluo has owned the treasure land for so many years but has not been able to find out those fairy grasses, which can explain this point. Moreover, Ju Douluo only knew the names of some fairy grasses because of his magical velvet-bending chrysanthemum spirit, but that was all. Only Tang San in the entire continent knew the quality, medicinal properties, and how to take the jelly grass. No one except Tang San could make full use of those medicinal herbs. Four, elite teaching. If his talent is not extraordinary enough, he is destined to receive a large class education in Wuhun Palace. The resources available to him will definitely not be sufficient, and how powerful can the teacher resources be? It's not enough to compare with Shrek! At least for auxiliary soul masters, in Shrek, you can have direct teaching from a food-type soul master who is almost level 70. And it's a one-to-three small class teaching! (Plus Oscar and Ning Rongrong) This kind of powerful teaching resource is unmatched by Wuhun Palace. I don't believe that Wuhun Palace is willing to let a seventy-level auxiliary soul master teach a group of children who are ten or twenty levels. Based on these four powerful advantages, I choose to side with Tang San. Even if the starting resources are insufficient, the advantage in the rear is too great!

It's toxic. I only read Chapter 20 and couldn't stand it anymore. At the beginning, a college teacher asked a group of kids with one ring and no soul rings to hunt soul beasts. Then five years later, the teacher asked the protagonist to go to Shrek Academy. The teacher from the junior college affiliated to Wuhun Palace asked the students to join Shrek Academy? What do you think? The author doesn't know how to write about other colleges' plots, so he has to go to Shrek College to write about it?

As soon as the eight doors are opened, all readers will quit. What a powerful skill.

This book is very abstract. Chapter 20 is less than my IQ and I was pressed to the ground and rubbed.

It's really hard to stretch. The reason why you have strong physical fitness is because of the master's fw exercise? Who doesn't know how to run with a rock on your back? The master's pure fw theory is that plant martial souls can absorb animal soul rings. If it can't be absorbed, there will be a problem. Take the Clear Sky Hammer as an example. If you want to break through, should you go to the hammer spirit? Looking for a weapon master? If they are physically strong and can become gods, they rely on fairy grass. Otherwise, not many of them can become gods, and only Oscar can do it.

I'm really speechless. You want to write an original heroine? Just write it well. Why do you have to change the heroine? I saw another comment section said that the stallion behind, a good original Qingmei heroine, you don't have to create something else, right? Although I don't like Tang San, at least there is only Xiao Wu, and some fanfics can be said to include all female characters with surnames. I really don't know why some fanfics have the nerve to abuse Tang San.

You have already joined Wuhun Palace, how could you go to another academy and take away another genius... You just can't stand it, so why not? Obviously the writing style is good, but it just doesn't follow logic, right? Will the Spirit Hall let the innate level 7 food soul master out?

The combat power is not bad, there is no breakdown from the beginning to the end, and the relationship between the protagonist and Tang San changes relatively smoothly. Tang San was originally a person who grew up in a feudal society, and he definitely doesn't have a good impression of pan-continental organizations like Wuhun Palace. But if Wuhundian kills his mother and wants to kill Xiaowu, he will definitely fight to the death with Wuhundian. This is quite normal. The protagonist and Tang San have different positions, but Tang San is indeed not a heinous villain. Some other Douluo fan fiction is too violent. They humiliate this one and that one, and even open a harem like crazy. This can't be called fun.

1 After awakening the martial soul, he joined the Wuhun Hall and entered its affiliated school to study and still had to fight. The protagonist, as an auxiliary system, defeated an offensive system. In the early stage, when the martial soul did not develop and the soul power did not develop, how could he beat others in the offensive system due to the bonus of the martial soul. (As an auxiliary type, it's not impossible to have a strong attack type, but you have to show off your cool moves and other special development abilities of your martial soul.) 2. All the protagonist's roommates have the same talent as the golden trio. Three months after awakening the martial spirit, they have all reached level 9 or even level 10. 3. A few months after awakening the martial spirit, a group of children form a team to hunt for souls after reaching level 10. What does the leader of the team say? He won't take action until the moment of danger, and the protagonist is actually knocked unconscious while hunting for souls. They are a bunch of little kids who entered the soul hunting forest for the first time. The protagonist's team is so talented. For the first time, there is no one to guide them and provide them with life experience, soul hunting experience, and soul skill selection experience. It is inexplicable that people don't care about life and death, and no one has punished the teacher who led the team. 4. After joining Wuhun Temple, a few years later, he went to Shrek Academy again, and joined the affiliated school of Wuhun Temple before. Regarding the school conflict, just follow the plot, and I won't be able to write if I leave it. Liu Feng | 9. Likes

The writing is neither fish nor fowl, the writing style is blunt, the plot has no twists and turns, and it is boring and embarrassing from beginning to end.

If you haven't read history, you can really come and see this history.