After Listening to the Advice, I Live Broadcasted the Cultivation of Immortality

This is also a new book that I discovered recently, and it is also a popular listening and persuading article recently. Of course, such a book cannot be separated from the support of the system. Some readers do not like the system in the book. My idea is to read online books, not just to read stories. I like all stories that are well told, so there is no need to care so much! The protagonist is the son of a Qingcheng Mountain tea farmer who refused to resign in 996. Because he resigned and was taught by his old father, he activated the "Listen to Persuasion and Cultivate Immortality" system. This system screens other people's suggestions for the protagonist and gives the protagonist corresponding rewards after listening to the suggestions. After the protagonist returns to his hometown, because his family produces Qingcheng He came up with the idea of selling tea through live broadcast, but no one bought the tea. He practiced Tai Chi in the live broadcast room and became an Internet celebrity. So after accepting the suggestions from netizens, the protagonist practiced Bajiquan, Jiuyin Zhenjing, Yi Jing Jing, and Sunflower Book, and rushed to become an immortal! This book is quite readable. The author's system settings, plot development, and rhythm control are all good. However, attention should be paid to the description of some conflict points and the design of the plot. The design of some plots was simple in the past, making the transitions feel a bit stiff and not natural enough. I hope the author can write better and better. There are always good books, come on!

If you practice martial arts without practicing courage, no matter how good you are, it will be useless. He was armed with a sharp blade and had a murderous intention. He was half dead when his breath was gone. It was unexpected that a small village chief and a second-rate tea merchant could speak so many words. It is recommended to revise the outline. A man with a pig's trotters who wants to become an immortal already has the strength value, but his thoughts are still ordinary people. If you write too much about the village plot later, the article will easily collapse. It is only right that the carp jumps over the dragon's gate as soon as possible and ascends to heaven and attains enlightenment.

How are you going to deal with the attitude of the villagers? If you don't support the report, it's okay, and you'll just give it a blank look. If you later have the villagers incited to morally kidnap the protagonist's family, what will happen to the Qingcheng Tea you plan to create? Repaying kindness with kindness? You shouldn't write about these villagers rolling their eyes at the people who reported them. It's okay to complain a little, but you can't exclude them. What you wrote is completely unworthy of the protagonist leading them to make money.

It's a very good novel, but it's not suitable for me who has been poisoned by short stories. I can't stand any novel that I want to read carefully. I get irritable after reading more than a few dozen chapters

To be honest, the front is really a bit too frustrating. I suppressed first and then promoted. I didn't ask them when I was suppressed. But at least the protagonist must take action himself. He is not a God's perspective and can see other hopes. And then the protagonist is too stupid. A modern college student who uses the Internet to sell goods does not understand the power of the Internet? Is there someone with overwhelming power on the other side or a billionaire CEO of a group who has the power to reverse public opinion in an instant? Don't be ridiculous, why do you need to stay in such a remote place to be an official? Do you need to go out and buy tea by yourself? Wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to secretly record and take some videos? We were bound to break up in the end. How could it be possible that even though they seemed to be in harmony with each other, they ended up helping each other to make money and get promoted, but wouldn't they use reality to disgust the other person? Moreover, the protagonist is already on the commanding heights. Even if there is no popularity, spending thousands of dollars to buy some trolls to create popularity will not affect the outcome. Originally the writing was quite smooth and the narrative was quite organized, but it was really frustrating at the beginning. I hope to change it if possible. Even if the protagonist urinates next to the enemy's house, I would consider him to have acted.

I won't talk about anything else. Are you going to the monastery to find the abbot? I have read very few books and don't know much about this aspect. Isn't abbot a Buddhist title? Moreover, the little Taoist priest's greeting is Amitayus Buddha. Is this a Taoist temple or a temple?

The protagonist's family has contributed so much, but they still have no status at all in the village? Have you lived in this village for generations and have no relatives or friends?

If we attack directly, we will kill the village chief and his entire family.

The story is still very good, and so is the writing. As we all know, if a story wants to be written happily, it must be pressed down like a spring before it can bounce higher (more pleasurable). The author also writes in this way. However, the author must have been too forgetful in writing, and he didn't let go! The protagonist has been written down for dozens of chapters. Although readers know that they will be very comfortable later, the starting point is not just this book. Naturally, it is impossible to read such a long chapter about the protagonist, so most of them will save or cancel the collection first. If you want to have a high number of readers, you have to control the time between suppressing the protagonist and the protagonist's counterattack. It should not exceed three days at most. The author has suppressed the protagonist for almost ten days in this first plot. Who can come here every day to watch the "abuse of the master" plot.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching Chapter 21, it just felt bland. Another thing I want to complain about is, is the end of cultivating immortality still being live streaming? System streaming, live broadcasting, and cultivating immortals, the integration of these three things is really neither fish nor fowl.

The title and introduction of the book look interesting at first glance. As a result, the writing is not enjoyable at all, hehe.

This is a book that denigrates Sichuan people. The Sichuan people in it have no spirit of the Sichuan army. A few ruffians can crush the Sichuan people to death. Don't write if you don't have common sense and knowledge. Practicing martial arts and cultivating immortals is not a coward. It would be disgusting if a weakling could also cultivate immortality.

Let's get rid of the tea first. When I'm old, I just want to read a more relaxed book. I'd better forget about the fighting and killing kind.

Isn't it because the background is the revival of spiritual energy? Otherwise, you can cultivate yourself and show that you are really not afraid of others checking? ? ? How do you explain that all people should cultivate immortality? ? ?

I hope that Tea Leaf and Boss Huang's plot will end soon, it's very uncomfortable to watch.

There are still fewer disputes between neighbors. Most readers come here for the extraordinary and the appearance of saints in front of others. I have an idea to be a pioneer and take off netizens together.

I suggest that the protagonist urges the author to update ten chapters a day, so as to ensure the speed of practice.

I suggest you not to bring the two Wang family dogs and the three-pound licking dog to make money in the future. Also, this plot is accelerating. Don't let these dogs continue to bark at outsiders. The tea merchant should teach you a lesson so that no one will die. It's so frustrating to watch. The protagonist can't cure these people. What kind of plot manager is there?

It's so obvious that you still live broadcast regardless of the above. Is it possible? The author thinks about how to fill this hole!

Tai Shui, what I want to see is cultivation of immortality, not martial arts.