Immortal of the World

There is no change. It is like a stagnant water. It is an utopia, but it is unrealistic. Immortality is precious and private, and resources are unlimited. 1. There is no external pressure. 2. There is no internal competition. It is fate that you write over and over again. But through the main character, the Dharma Master can determine the fate. Isn't it my destiny to be determined by God? Cultivation is based on strength, not fate. Since fate is written, it is better to be like Lanke Qi fate, which is natural and casual, rather than a few big guys playing in the world, sealing off strength, and betting on who the big boss has a fate with. It is inexplicable and unclear. The development interface is not like the promotion behind the scenes. There are no fights in the realm of two strokes. I suggest changing the name (my invincible daily flow)

Damn it, the bandit leader turned into a master and wrote a fairy tale 😰😰😰

How to say it! I can't stand the first chapter. There are no river gods, mountain gods, etc. In the world of immortality, because the position of a god needs to be conferred by heaven. From this point on, the logic doesn't make sense!

Occupy the top spot in the comment section! I just want to ask, who else?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I kept feeling something was wrong. It turned out that the author's choice of words and sentences did not seem like writing, but rather speaking. The characteristic was that there was no rhetoric or written language. And you don't have to change a line in one sentence or even half a sentence, right? For example, in the paragraph below, these things can be written in one paragraph. The author looks quite awkward like this, I don't know what everyone thinks.

Don't read this guy's novel. The plot is so awkward. He's still an old eunuch. When I say his plot is awkward, he gets angry.

I hope the new book is as decisive as the old book

It fits my aesthetic perfectly, so I ordered all of them. The impetuous man found a little haven today, without the fighting and killing in traditional fairy tales, which is rare and valuable. It's as bad as Ke Qiyuan whom I've watched before. This is what I think of immortality.

I think the interesting thing about this type of Xianxia is that it explores the bizarre world of cultivation and reveals new world views and settings. Most of the current mainstream novels feel like variants of game novels. The core is just upgrading and playing dungeons.

It looked good in the early stage. Since the setting of the lower realm was introduced, the protagonist's behavior has been inexplicable. The protagonist has become a person. The protagonist has become a human being. Those who return evil cannot be killed. He has dragged the eight wastelands to the five continents. He doesn't care about anything. The evil cultivators above are going to invade the five continents. The real card is using human lives to fill the protagonist's mess. What is the protagonist doing? He is dragging several other immortals to travel around.

It's so bland that it's boring, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

? ? ? 85 Chapters and 520,000 words. . . Unbelievable

The article seems strange, and it seems to be looking at ancient times with modern concepts. A bowl of tea costs 2 cents and a pound of pork costs 10 cents. Is the tea more expensive or the pork cheaper? Why do ordinary people still drink tea when tea is expensive? Is it because pork is cheap because scientific and large-scale pig farming began in ancient times? A 24-year-old young man was praised by several instructors for quickly getting started in the martial arts gym. But in ancient times, was a 24-year-old really considered a young man? I think it's more reasonable to change it to 14 years old.

If the first three chapters are also divided into levels, the first three chapters of this book should be the king, and they deserve the title.

It's okay, but those who know you are a golden elixir, but those who don't know think you are a golden immortal, making it seem like you are omnipotent.

It's becoming less and less "fairy". In the front, I am a tea stall owner, wandering around in the world, tasting human delicacies, and casually awakening the demons and gods. It feels good and fits my imagination of immortals wandering around the world. The latter becomes more and more tall, but it makes people feel very hollow. I can't even remember the names of some of the immortals who follow the protagonist. The characters are too thin, and they are not as attractive as the black bear spirit who loves to eat steamed buns and pretends to be an expert. Moreover, the chapters are too big, and I skipped through some of them because I didn't want to subscribe as soon as I saw the chapter names.

It's okay, a bit fairy-like, but the disadvantage is that it's a bit too utopian (the bureaucrats and landlords are all good people, but everyone is extremely rich after 10 years of rule). Moreover, the price income of the Tang Dynasty was equivalent to that of the Song Dynasty. I can only say that the people there lived better than us 😭

It doesn't feel like writing a novel, it feels like keeping accounts

Where is my Taoist friend? This book is worth reading?

The sales account has been changed! The whole thing was not written by the same person.

I read more than a hundred chapters, but in the end it felt boring... I still want to see ruthless gangsters roaming the world.

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When I read Chapter 83, I felt like I had gone from a few immortals gathering together to opening the lower realm. The taste is getting more and more wrong, and the protagonist is getting more and more erratic.

It's over, oh, it's so sudden. Although when I saw the "final chapter", I thought it would be the end. After thinking about it, I thought it was the end of this plot. Unexpectedly, after reading it, after a while, at first glance, it was over. It was so sudden!

It reads a bit like Lan Ke's Romance, but it doesn't have the same flavor as others. I feel like it's a bit too low-priced to say that I am a golden elixir.

The author's writing is very good. If he optimizes it, his next work will definitely be better.

The writing is very good, but the ideological concepts are backward, and it is still the same thing as good will be rewarded with good and evil will be punished with evil, which is a bit inconsistent with the taste of today's readers.

This introduction is awesome. You can practice qi using a qi training method, and then use your own deduction to reach the golden elixir. Why don't you go to heaven?

For this kind of subject matter, without a large number of dog-licking readers, the results will not be very good.

Author, your writing style is pretty good. Why don't you write some cool articles that cater to the public? Readers will enjoy it and they will get better grades.