Global Era of Heavens

When I opened the article, I was filled with the flavor of the world, and the word "fastidious" was revealed between the lines. The last time I had this feeling was when I was watching "The Grandmaster" in college, the dialogues, scenes, plots, etc. In a word, Master Jiang pays attention to people.

I personally do not agree with the author's understanding of chivalrous people. What is a chivalrous person? It is not a great chivalrous person who serves the country and the people as Jin Yong said. If there are too many so-called chivalrous people in society, then the society will be in chaos, because you can't ignore the huge harm to society just because of a group's little brilliance, not to mention that it is sad to have chivalrous people to do chivalry. This should mainly rely on the government and the social system and social security. Can one or two chivalrous people manage China's 1.4 Billion people?

I would like to make a few comments. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I feel a little aesthetic fatigue. The protagonist does things too rigidly, like a dummy. I don't know how to describe his inner activities. I feel that the protagonist has no emotions.

The writing of this world is a bit disappointing. It is said to be a competition, but it does not describe the various strange abilities of the Yuanmen fighting, nor the magnificent waves of the sea adventure. Only the protagonist finds the boss and kills it.

It was originally written well, but once we got to the Three Kingdoms, the character structure fell apart. In the front, there was a person who dared to do things and had the demeanor of a hero. As soon as he arrived at the Three Kingdoms, he became a villain who plotted against others and was opportunistic. What confuses me the most is that the mission is obviously a team mission, but the characters in the book are fighting each other. Looking at the previous missions, we know that the mission rewards may be shared by each person, so what is the reason for them to fight? We all come from the same world. I don't believe that everyone is cold-blooded. There is no chance for everyone to cooperate? As soon as you find out who the Primordial One is, kill him? Don't understand

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​         I'm going to give you my personal opinion, I don't know if the author can read it. To be honest, the first two chapters are not very well written. In some places, they are not even written in the correct order, and there is not much content that will not catch people. I won't complain about the introduction and title of the book, they are quite weak. After entering the world, it starts to become exciting. It has a bit of a martial arts style. The fighting scenes are very exciting. The protagonist's acting style is chivalrous. It's a bit amazing when watching Gu Huo Bird. Although some characters are not well portrayed, it can be seen that the author is very careful. I will also write two sentences with some flavor. But as the plot develops, the book collapses. One kill is basically the end of the story. Each world is about finding clues and completing tasks. Some of the original unique characters have also been eliminated. The members of the Pioneers have become younger brothers who can only call 666. The characters are just like thin pieces of paper. The book has a bit of a Jianghu flavor from the beginning, but now, it has almost lost that unique thing. The author should understand what he is good at and what readers who like him like about him. Is it the chivalry of traditional martial arts? Or is it a world of grudges and grudges? Or is it something that although it is niche, some people still insist on it? If these are gone, I'm afraid this book will be lost. The protagonist cheats all the way and sweeps through everything. There is no need to worry about difficulty. Once you enter the world, you are close to the top. Just upgrade, so what else do you have to worry about? I couldn't write anything new, so I wanted to copy what I had done before, but I found that as the background of the world of heavens progressed, some things could no longer be written, and they would not match if I wrote them again. I had to learn from other infinite heavens, and come up with a bunch of earthly immortal saints, rules of heaven, reincarnation time travelers, and Brawl. These are not new ideas that are also found in other books, but they are not what readers really want or agree with. In the final analysis, although spiritual energy recovery and Zhutianliu are popular, it is difficult for the author's advantages to be brought out in this context. But it doesn't mean that you can't write different things, such as "Gu Dao Changsheng", which turns white when you sleep, which is probably the name, and Lao Niu's "Aura is Compelling". Another example is the elbow's book that everyone knows. Although they are all spiritual revivals, their writing has its own style, its own taste, and it is time to upgrade. But the core is different, or the style is different. The elbow skin makes people laugh to death. Lao Niu can always design exciting plots and profound thoughts on society and human nature. The author is both in the heavens and in the revival of spiritual energy. He wants to grasp it with both hands, but he can't grasp it with both hands. The structure of the book collapses in the later stages, and he simply makes the revival of spiritual energy as a by-product. My personal suggestion is that if you want to write about it, you should keep digging for your own things. The lost chivalry in the world, being straightforward, taking pleasure in grudges, is the unique nature that the author wants to express. Other novel structures and plots can be slowly practiced. Although I am still very immature and like a newbie, I believe that if I look back more often, I can always gain something. The so-called never forget, there must be repercussions. I write so much not to criticize the author, but just to hope that the author can continue to go on in a serious and responsible manner. Come on

I feel that the author's writing style is much better than when he wrote the last book. Come on

There is nothing to say about this book. I really enjoyed reading it. I started to follow it not long after the beginning. Now that I have seen it, I particularly like the kind of story telling with the heroic spirit of a warrior and the high-spirited spirit of drunkenness and courage. The writer is also good. But I would like to make a small suggestion. The backbone of this thing is the story after all. The rich text, ink, and color are all embellishments. Of course it is good. But after reading these recent chapters, I feel a bit putting the cart before the horse. There is a feeling of forcing poetry for the sake of poetry. . Because of the character of the protagonist himself, you can also say that he has the atmosphere of the world. But some words are just like what a literati poet says. He cannot blurt it out. This kind of collapses the character a bit. In addition to the protagonist, other people or the whole story also feels a bit out of the bag. It feels not as well written as the previous dozens of chapters. Of course, this is my personal feeling. I hope it can be the icing on the cake. The book must have flaws. I just hope it can be as perfect as possible.

Jianghu is good, but you can't use it as a buying point, especially don't say it out loud. Jianghu is good when it is revealed inadvertently. It is not good to emphasize harmony too much. Also, it is not good to always be low-key. There should be some content in reality. It should be pretentious in reality. Don't be blunt. Show the extraordinary. There should also be elements from the Internet and videos to set it off. For example, the social reaction at the beginning of some spiritual recovery novels, between individual extraordinarys, and between extraordinarys and society. The key is to bring in people, add some characters, and then what is the protagonist's goal? Anyway, it's better than For example, some infinite heavens pursue immortality and freedom, and the protagonist is too passive in the world. This will make people feel sick just like some system novels. It is best to enter some familiar worlds and actively become stronger. You can stay in the world for a very long time, and then you can learn and upgrade alone. However, at this stage, it is still low-level martial arts running around the world |(￣3￣)|. However, although this part is well written, it feels like it lacks a sense of satisfaction if it is written too much. Also, come on, the author｡◕‿◕｡

The atmosphere of the world is too strong. As mentioned in the article, the protagonist is like a boxer living in the old society. He does not look like a person with a college education at all. He has no sense of the contemporary era. It is in obvious contrast with the protagonist in urban martial arts novels who practice martial arts in an isolated place and come out to be a school belle or young lady. I feel that the two are written upside down.

Can we discuss it with the author? You can write less poems, but can we update it twice or three times? In my opinion, the quality of the writing is excellent. It is definitely not worse than the great master. If you update it, it will be popular.

Okay, very good, I like this style

Good book. The only book in recent years that I read without skipping a word. It has the same feeling as when I read Purple River and Covering the Sky. I look forward to updating it every day.

Looks comfortable and energetic all over

I think it was written very well before. Warriors practice strength and strength, and numbers represent strength. This is okay, but after the Three Kingdoms, it became blurry. The outline is to practice strength before ten, spirituality after tenth, I still don't understand what to practice after twenty, spirituality after thirty, martial arts in the early stage, chivalry in the middle stage, and immortality in the later stage! I skipped through the later stages. To be honest, the early stages were OK, but I didn't know what to say later. {"NickName":"Cow in the Cocoon","UserId":115300360} Brother, come and read this novel. I was a little confused after reading it.

I feel something from between the lines! Maybe that's what it means to stay true to your heart!

AWSL... For the first time, I felt like I was being crushed physically and mentally by a writing style QJ... The key is that I clearly had no choice but to enter a state of enjoyment without even a period of shame 😭 I originally made a very exaggerated performance. I found a review of Shenwen and wanted to praise the author, but the reviewer When I checked for typos, I found that my speech was too crazy and illogical. It was shameful. Although I just wanted to praise the author so much that he stood shoulder to shoulder with the sun, the author probably didn't want to be praised as the Great Sun Tathagata_(:з∠)_so I'd better skip it You only need one sentence to praise this article This article is really exquisite That's enough~(￣▽￣~)~

The author's characterization is good, but the description of the storyline is poor. The connection between the dungeons is too tight and a bit streamlined. It is better to write a longer dungeon than to keep short dungeons. It is not a fast time. I just saw the third dungeon. I feel that it makes no difference whether I write this dungeon or not. I also feel that this book lacks a main line. Other rebirth novels, after rebirth, it is either a cliché revenge or a struggle for hegemony. At least a main line has been established. The protagonist seems to be wandering around in the rivers and lakes now. I don't know what the purpose is. In my humble opinion. If the quality of the subscribed chapters does not drop, I will keep subscribing. I hope the author can work hard and write in his own style and still be popular (don't be too heavy)

When I saw the latest volume, I really couldn't help but feel unhappy. I can't explain what it feels like. In short, something is wrong. Frankly speaking, it is really not interesting, starting from asking for accounts, all the way to the breakthrough of innateness. This book is almost over. According to my understanding, the author's book should be a transitional book, mainly for relaxation and breakthrough. So, when did it become a large-scale show-off and slap-in-the-face scene? Yes, in my opinion, the recent chapters are all the same pretense and slap in the face. The taste may be lighter and the writing method is different from others, but they are still pretentious and slap in the face. Just like you transform into a master, it doesn't mean that readers won't recognize you if you put on women's clothes. That doesn't exist. Originally, the transition volume is not that big of a deal. I push the map quickly and bring out the main line after breaking through. I am happy. However, the update is too slow. There are more than 30 chapters at once, and it has been more than a month. Some people are still alive, and some people are dead. At this point, I have to talk about the main plot of this book, the era of global heavens, in other words, the era of disaster and martial arts. Times, epochs, epochs, you have taken the name of a great era of great turmoil and strife, but in the end, you are still making small fuss in this three-thirds of an acre of land. Yes, not long after the thick fog came out, the relevant departments did not react, which is normal, but the protagonist has been confined here, and the layout is too small. How to arrange other people and other things, how to make it reasonable, and how to look good, you have to consider these. Don't settle for a corner. Up to now, it has been promoted all the way and has been invincible. In the final analysis, given the background and tone of this book, it should not be a show for the protagonist alone, and it is not allowed. Some people are struggling to survive, some are swimming upstream, there are conspiracies, and there are also grievances and resentments. This is the atmosphere and splendor of the entire world, a new era, and a new era. So what I want to say is that the protagonist should go out and see, or let him go and let him open up a new era. Of course, if you don't have this plan, just pretend I didn't say it. If anything, I'd say the pacing is a bit slow. That's it for now, just take a look at it and don't take it to heart. It doesn't mean any specific praise or criticism. If it does, a thousand words can only be condensed into two words. Come on!

Not much else to say. I suggest the author revise the introduction and the first few pages. The writing style is a little wordy at the beginning, but the author gradually gets better at it. If the beginning can be made more attractive, the performance of this book will be improved to a higher level.

The book is very good, and the protagonist's chivalry is very enjoyable. It has a post-chivalry style, but there are too few updates, one update a day... (It would be better if it were updated three times a day.) 😁

The book is quite interesting, but it describes a dynamic social organization in such a moralistic way, and murders and arson are all done according to the rules, which is very unpleasant. It's probably because I'm past the age where I like watching Young and Dangerous…

I read about 50 chapters in the time that normally takes me to read more than 100 chapters. The author's writing is really good and the plot is well connected. But there is an indescribable feeling. I feel a little tired after reading it. I will collect it first and come back to taste it again.

Lu Zhou brushed away the fallen snow from his palms, held it tightly, and looked at the gunmen with loneliness in his eyes. A gunman gritted his teeth and said, "Sir, times have changed." After saying this, there was a burst of gunfire. Ding, click, is the sound of the bullet shell falling to the ground, and the slowly opening hands, filled with melted snow water. With a fierce wave, there were several muffled groans and the sound of the gunmen falling to the ground. The snow fell even harder. Lu Zhou turned around and disappeared into the white world without holding an umbrella.

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There's been a bit of a blank in the plot recently, so come on, author!

To be honest, Sansheng should discuss changing the title of the book with the editor. Something like "The Vast Jianghu" is better than the current one. I feel that the title of the book has delayed more than half of the subscriptions and hindered too much (manual funny)

How about changing the name of this novel to "Speaking of Heroes and Martial Arts"?

This book really felt delayed by the title. A very nice book

Don't look at the name or the category. This is a martial arts novel. The writing is good, but it's a bit niche. I don't want to read it if I don't read it now.