Immortality: the Ultimate Martial God

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The setting is too weird. The better settings can be seen as getting out of the way, which has nothing to do with lifespan and the like. Plug-ins such as broken mirrors that improve the realm and break through bottlenecks require medicinal materials or energy, which is logical. Many plug-ins nowadays are based on imagination and are made out of thin air. It feels good for a while, and I just write a paragraph and get excited. Unless the writing is excellent, it won't be finished until the middle.

Is this thing I wrote really a plug-in?

Rebirth in the world of flying immortals is just a fantasy before death.

Find ordinary people to besiege the protagonist. The protagonist cannot fight back or he will die 😂

There is something wrong with the logic.

You won't become a muscular tyrant, right? ? I've seen a lot of this, and I'm tired of aesthetics. Just have more muscles, be more even, and don't become a muscle monster. It's just too curious.

There is no feedback in the comment area. I don't know if the writing is good or if there is anything that needs improvement🥺

I am the craziest about Qingqing Prairie. If you come up with this idea and write it, you will definitely become popular.

Overall it's barely okay. There is a problem with the rhythm. Sometimes the rhythm is too fast and sometimes too slow. Too fast means that the protagonist develops too fast and jumps too high all of a sudden, while some plots are too slow, such as some storylines.

In fact, the comments from several other readers are quite pertinent. Whether you listen to them or not is up to you.