One Shot Kills

I have read Chapter 458. I don't know why, but the more I read, the more inconsistent I feel. Things with no technical content such as flash bombs and smoke bombs are not easy to produce. I think the author's restrictions on these props should focus on their abilities rather than making them rare. For example, smoke bombs have different diffusion ranges, diffusion capabilities, anti-dispersion capabilities, and some additional capabilities such as poison, electronic interference, energy stability interference, etc. At different levels. If you can describe these. If there is a confrontation between technology and technology, between technology and superpowers, it will definitely have a good performance. The current descriptions feel very awkward. As of Chapter 458, I haven't seen the appearance of high-explosive weapons such as C4. The author is not good at writing numerical values, nor is he good at writing guns. The power of a gun is not improved by the gun itself, but by bullets. The gun can only make your shooting more stable and accurate. The metal the bullet is made of, as well as the ammunition used, can increase the bullet's power. The Wolverine's conventional weapons are basically ignored when mounted, but it can be damaged by bullets made of Adamantium alloy. In addition to changing the bullet, another way is to change the caliber, but the reason is still the bullet. Another problem is the damage of machine guns. Some are larger and some are smaller. The rate of fire is 50+ per second. Is boos difficult to kill? A level 50 machine gunner will hit 50boos. The most common machine gun has 50 health per bullet, which means your BOSS has one million health. 1000000/50=20000 Rounds. Count on your speed of 50 per second and ten machine gunners. 20000/50/10=40 Seconds to end the battle. Even if I cut the damage to 10 HP and double the HP, it only costs 2,000,000/10=200,000 rounds. Cut the speed per second to 10, that is 200000/10/10 = the battle will end in 2000 seconds, and if I have a hundred machine gunners, the battle will end in 200 seconds. The bullet costs 200,000 rounds, one credit point per shot, 200,000 credit points. You have to tell me that even a little forced damage can kill you without breaking your defense. The 5,000 team also lost 2,000 people, 100 people went to the front to fight, and 4,900 people set up machine guns in the back. A little damage, 10 seconds, and the battle ends in 40 seconds.

The writing is general and verbose. The character that pisses me off the most is Big Pineapple, the pig brother. Every time I see this character appear, I want to poke his eyes out. There is also sexism. What does it mean that female players will vomit after seeing these scenes? As long as ordinary people, regardless of men and women, they will vomit when they see it, okay? Then there's the character's IQ, which is really not high. The protagonist's personality was okay at first, but when he was a lone ranger, he couldn't stand it anymore when he had many friends. The villain also forcibly defeats the protagonist and opposes the protagonist from the beginning to the end until he can no longer continue. And most of them are children from rich families. Why, do you hate the rich? How well educated are children from rich families? In this river? The villains are generally unintelligent, and the character descriptions are flat and extreme. I forced myself to finish reading half of it. After I came out of the role of Big Pineapple, I just wanted to know what other poison the author could give me. This poison is already red. I would like to advise you to run away quickly!

I read this article many years ago when I was in high school. In the blink of an eye, I graduated from college and went to graduate school, and then I remembered this article and came to buy it. After all, it was a novel that I loved back then, and I still love it now after reading it again. The writing style is not very good in the starting point, but it is passable, as long as it does not affect reading and writing clearly. How rare it is to find an online game novel without a female protagonist! I can't find any online game without a female protagonist! I have to say that the male protagonist is my favorite among all the Qidian novels. It is easy to say that the male protagonist is calm, low-key and cautious, but after watching so many male and female videos, I have never seen a few. The plot generally doesn't have any major flaws (don't read online articles with a mind that is busy with nitpicking, otherwise there will be much more to read). Writing battles is indeed a bit verbose, but this is the author's habit, so it's okay. It's not a big problem to write more detailedly (as someone who never bothers to calculate the values ​​and skips them all, I won't comment on the value settings). Midway through, the original plan was disrupted by various random criticisms, and some parts seemed a bit abrupt. In fact, it would be better to write it as you want (after all, no plot can satisfy everyone). The plot of the slap in the face is quite logical. As for the occasional issue of mental retardation, I just want to say that there are indeed many mentally retarded characters in reality (...) It's not even a lot of low-level slaps in the face. Except for the last part, it's not ridiculously strong without any reason, and there are various restrictions. I just feel like Feng Luo is addicted to melee combat later on and can't extricate himself, but this is a sniper article, it would be nice if he could shoot better (｡ì _ í｡) I still like him for shooting, although even if he really is a warrior, this article will still be my favorite online game article. It's a bit unfinished, but it's still good. Everything that needs to be revealed has been revealed. Although I really want to see the author continue writing, the next step is indeed not a pure online game. Of course, I still want to see Feng Luo continue his story (இωஇ ) The problem of too many typos is really a bit low-level. There are too many typos. The whole article is full of typos. It's not just typing errors that are not illiterate (I have seen many illiterate people) What I really don't understand is that when writing about female characters, most of the time, the starting point is male authors' descriptions of female stereotypes. , But Feng Luo himself has basically always been calm and didn't become the male protagonist of Brother Zhu in the starting point. It's amazing (is it because Brother Zhu is focused on the big pineapple?) Anyway, as a female reader, because Feng Luo is very good, this article is still quite readable. Just ignore the traditional and stereotyped descriptions that occasionally pop up in the middle.

I made it to chapter 39 and couldn't bear it anymore, so I stopped reading.

I don't remember whether I read this book in junior high school or high school. There are still about a hundred or two hundred chapters left, so I'm going to finish it now. At that time, I had been obsessed with novels about this type of online games. I had read some online games: Melee Mage and Online Games: My impression of this book is that the early stage is very good, and the plot and character creation are OK. In the middle stage, the bad jokes about female stereotypes and the level design that requires points to be unlocked are repeated three times. The post-processing feels unfinished, both in terms of plot and settings. It's just a pity that the early stage was relatively exciting, and I thought there would be further development of other planets or universes later on. But overall, worth watching.

I picked a few sentences from Yuemian, the author of Qidian. I don't know if the author can read the book review section, but I very much hope that the author can read these sentences. "Readers of online articles - originally I wanted to say Chinese but I always felt that this was too broad - readers of online articles are very stingy with their praise. If they read a book and feel it is good, they will give it a recommendation. Most people will not use words to praise the book in the book review area. Many people will not even click on the recommendation, but only subscribe, but they really like your book. There is a word to describe these people, called the "silent majority". They do not express, or the way they express is silent and difficult to detect. But conversely, people who don't like your books tend to jump very high. Because the black ones jump high, and the silent majority don't speak. " I like this book very much. To be more precise: now that online game writing is in decline, there are fewer good online game writings to read. I hope the author will not be biased by the opinions in the book review section. I don't want to see another good book ruined by book reviews!

Author, I have many questions to ask you. First, why is this book so rushed? You see, in addition to upgrading, you also do tasks and auctions. Don't you think the tasks are too tight? There are also biohazards that are either breaking out here or there. The federation is really screwed. Let's talk about the issue of psionic energy. Are the protagonist's Eye of Death and the Blade like that? What a simple question. Why don't you just change it to Old John? If it doesn't work, just upgrade the gun manufacturing. In theory, if you can create legendary force weapons, you can also create legendary psionic weapons! Besides, if a mercenary has the opportunity to make his own weapons, he will not do it. You can see that your protagonist's interest has almost been wiped out by you. The protagonist cannot fail to see that his two careers in life are helpful to him. There are also how long the game is open, the levels are opened too quickly, which game is like this, and you only write about online games, and you can't even make it through a section. What kind of alien world is that? And then the level seems a bit strange. The Zerg level is low. It's not that the level is low, but how do I put it? I can't understand The Force Awakening. For example, the second awakening at level 70 is too big. According to the Zerg level written in the book, it doesn't feel right. There is also The Force Awakens, which has at least intermediate and advanced levels depending on talent, and maybe even ultimate. These levels and things make me feel that the Zerg level is a bit low. The above alone can almost prompt the protagonist to reach a large level. Don't always fight monsters to level up. There are also force skill enhancement chips. Such a tricky thing, has the protagonist ever thought about making it himself, or a psionic skill enhancement chip, or a professional chip? Are there no players who want to make these things themselves? Let's talk about pets. The protagonist's pet is too bad, or the system is too bad. Even if it has no attack power, its defense power is not that strong either. It doesn't have much HP, it's been weakened too much, and even the summons are just average. But I still have a question. Have you never thought about equipping pets? And it's not difficult to develop some kind of psionic potion. There are so many ways to defeat monsters and upgrade. If you fight monsters for several months, won't your eyes get tired?

There is no need to read after Chapter 300. The supporting characters reduce their intelligence (just find any excuse. All the supporting characters in the Evernight City all said that our IQ should be offline to cooperate with the protagonist. Anyway, we will believe whatever you say); People have expressed their astonishment, fearing that others would not know that they are rich, and they may have forgotten that they are a sniper after getting a second career); amnesia patients (before chapter 20, they tried their best to hide their pet abilities with stupid excuses, but after chapter 20, the protagonist casually revealed his pet abilities 😅)

What are you beeping about in 2016 novels (￣∀￣)

The reader group of this book is relatively directional, with keywords such as online game firearms, decisive killing, straightforward and refreshing writing, and large quantities. The writing style of this book is relatively average, that is, at a medium level, allowing readers to read normally. In terms of plot, the book is quite interesting in the early stages. Although it is slow-burning, it makes people enjoy reading it. However, in the middle stage, the level of the story began to decline, and the content became bland. In the later stage, it was reduced to the level of hay. Of course, I personally think it may be that the author has written too much. With more than 3 million words written in a novel about online games and firearms, it is inevitable that the writing power will not be able to support it. If this book could be compressed and squeezed out of the later water, it would probably be more popular among readers. In addition, Brother Jiu, I have to pull out the poison for you. Remember, you must ignore or skip the realistic part of this novel. The realistic part is quite bad. ---Recommended by Gong Zhonghao's "Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

Really hydrology, the first part is okay, very exciting, the sniper type is very well written, but after chapter 240, I started to hide the professional mission, I don't know why the author is exhausted. Especially hydrology, I wrote a hundred chapters of a hidden career mission to downgrade, to save an NPC, and I wrote more than 50 chapters just because I was robbed by others and pretended to be cool. Anyway, I couldn't stand it anymore, and it became more and more incompetent as I went to the back.

The plot of the battle royale was a complete failure. It was long and smelly. It didn't make any sense or make any sense. It would have been better to finish the mission earlier. The word count was always low. I skipped at least dozens of chapters, but I still felt that I could connect. This also shows that the middle was completely full of nonsense.

The front is very good, the sniping is very good, but the back is not so good. A sniper's weapons are not legendary, the old back is. I have some other weapons. I am really speechless. After changing my profession, I personally feel that it doesn't look good. It doesn't have the sniper flavor from the front.

I really don't understand. Since you have all kinds of data and information, why don't you do the most basic protagonist panel? How is this different from writing fantasy without a level, writing about cultivating immortality without building a foundation? I don't know how others see it, but after reading six or seven chapters, my appetite disappeared again.

The biggest problem with this book is that it is not interesting enough. Every time the author writes about the protagonist making a lot of breakthroughs or getting awesome attributes or equipment, but when it comes to combat, he is only a little better than ordinary players. The scenes are also delayed a lot to make up for the word count 🤫 I suggest that since you are writing online articles, don't pretend to be a famous author.

As a potion that cannot be made without the protagonist, only get a fifth? Such a big profit must be at least three or four fifths! One-fifth is enough because there is no reason to weaken the protagonist. Why should we take 90 from one-fifth? Why wasn't the four-fifths given to Lin? If you can't write it well, just don't write the plot of selling it. Capitalists will cry when they hear it. And the initial one million equipment is only 2% tax, and the tax of 10 million is 10%? The auction house gets 10%, Lin and the protagonist get 90%, Lin gets 75% from 90%, and then gets 90% from the protagonist's 25%. One knife is more severe than the other, so the story is changed to a cool one, and the protagonist holds his breath and swallows it, feeling that it is good for himself. Compared with the fantasy people who are afraid of unstable realms and do not break through, and are afraid of emptiness and do not take pills, and then are beaten violently by people who take pills to break through to a higher realm.

I was fascinated by it when I was in junior high school, but I probably can't stand it now hahaha

Is there a similar profession: Gunslinger, and a book that is better than this one?

Very nice sniper article! It's a pity that the author's later books are no longer available

This combat power system is really a mess.

If there are familiar things in the game, shouldn't you go to the game planner? What can you find when you enter the game?

Leave an eye open for easy search later

I thought I hadn't seen it, but when I clicked on it, I found that it allowed me to skip the progress. How many things had I forgotten?

Are there any gun novels like this?

In the hidden career assessment, Big Pineapple was poisoned to death after being forced into the plot halfway through.

Is there no heroine? I feel so tired watching it.

You can read Shuhuang. Except for the fact that the data can't be calculated at all, the villain is occasionally brainless, the teammates are occasionally cheating, and the protagonist is occasionally arrogant about himself, everything else is pretty good.