The Best Player on Earth

I don't want to say much. I admit that my understanding is limited. Please ask the author to clarify the realm, item level and grade. It's too confusing.

The author didn't grasp the relationship between the new characters and the old characters well. A new hero appeared in just one chapter and it felt like the article was written as a character introduction. You can enjoy the freshness of the concept at the beginning, but if the story is not logical and logical later on, it will not retain readers. The author should have a way of developing the territory. I feel that the author wants to find a balance between the central position of the protagonist and the development of the territory, but obviously there is no good balance. I also wanted to insert some branch plots at each story stage, but it was too harsh. The key is that the main plot is too confusing, and readers, or I personally, don't have the patience to read the branch plots.

After adding the live broadcast, it will only become a funny and vulgar joke, which kind of ruins the world view! ! ! Does the author focus on writing about live broadcasts, or does he take risks? ? ? ? ?

Little white text, I can barely read it. Chapter 19 persuaded me to quit and gave up.

Although the boss doesn't know me, I still want to call Shi Yao awesome~

Give the author some advice. Many years ago I read the author's A Shot That Kills. Although the writing style is slightly lacking at the beginning, the overall level is still good in QD. But it got too boring after 300 chapters, so I gave up after more than 500 chapters. After reading the new work in a few days, overall the setting is very good, but there are still some water problems. For example, the chapter where the protagonist is broadcast live, I think it will be good if it is limited to 300 words to show off. It's fun to show off, and it'll be fun as long as you keep pretending, but it won't be fun if it's too cool. One more suggestion, try to control the exclamation points.

Strong criticism of the author: For example, "When more than a dozen warships were sunk from the water, Fang La's army had hundreds of warships, large and small, and only the last 30% was left." Since you wrote this article, you have updated more than 300 chapters, almost 400 chapters. I beg you, can you, let's write the article as we write, can you not mention the word count. If you can't look at the works of other great masters, can't you learn from them? Can you not change your stubbornness? One chapter is more than 20 pages long. Tell me how many words you've lost. I really can't bear it anymore. If I don't, I will die of pain. In all aspects of setting, your writing is not bad. I have been chasing you for a long time. You can't die if you don't know the word count! 7456 I won't give you any more votes, just reflect on it, hum ╯^╰

This book is similar to online games like Lord God and Online Game Stream. It doesn't have much creativity but the writing is good. You don't really need to care about the protagonist's name. I rate this book 3.5 Stars (out of 5 stars).

I'm going to update. I'm seeing something wonderful.

Multi-fusion novel? Can the world setting be self-explanatory? Not optimistic,. . It's better to write about online games honestly

To be honest, the people in Water Margin are several levels behind those in the Three Kingdoms. We don't care about strength or potential. We look at virtue and quality...

After persisting to Chapter 47, the protagonist became the leader of the village. He didn't upgrade well, but also took the players to fight monsters, especially with the coalition government. The next step is to hand over Erlong Mountain to the coalition government, and then lead the humans to fight monsters and upgrade, and directly start working as a nanny. I have such a big heart, the subject matter is very good, I really feel uncomfortable reading it, I feel uncomfortable reading the novel, but I still read it. No wonder the results are not good.

The author's writing style is good, but he focuses too much on race and civilization. The whole article implies that individual strength is not worth mentioning, and we need to rely on racial civilization. It is a bit Cao Dan to write this way.

♤●If it doesn't look good, don't talk so much nonsense. Writing a book is not easy. Why don't you write one yourself and let me see it. This book is good, good-looking and to my liking. Recommend "Earth Travel Era", "Eternal Kingdom", "Add Immortal Lord", "The Last Human", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Martial Tomb", "The Ancestor of All Ghosts", "Drunken Immortal Gourd", "Invincible with Eyes", "I Become the King of the Summers", "Don't Mess With That Dragon", "White Dragon Lord of Winter", "Searching for Immortals", "Zombie Evil Emperor", "Mechanical Latitude", "This Lord Is Not Easy to Mess with", "Killing God", "Demon Sky Chronicles", "Mysterious" "Journey", "Rebirth as a Tree", "Super God Refinery", "A Mist World with You", "Nightmare Corrosion", "The First Emperor of the Human Race", "Ji Dao Demon", "Wizard World", "Spirit Login Device", "Huntian Star Lord", "Ancient Games Invasion of Reality", "Ji Dao Fist Lord", "Global Spiritual Tide", "Killing God", "Zhang Sanfeng Travels to Another World", "Soul-Eating Book", "Road to Heaven", "Ping Tian Ce", "My "Wild Tribe", "Ultimate Demons and Ghosts", "Carry a Lottery Panel with You", "The Strongest Non-Human", "God and Demon Breeding Farm", "The Torrent of Ten Thousand Laws", "Beast Control Evolver", "Destiny Master", "Let go of that demon pet", "Crossing the Qin Dynasty to become a tyrant", "Start picking up attributes from today", "Wizard Count", "Eternal Great Summoning", "Online Games: The Wasted Kingdom", "Super God Wizard", "Wizard World", "Eternal Sword Master" "League of Legends Invasion of Another World" "Super God Mechanical Legion" "Pirate Lord" "Farming Lord of Time Travel" "I Summon Heroes for the Emperor of Heaven" "Green Sea Tycoon" "Xingyao Canidi" "Fa Dao Zun" "Supreme Conquest System" "I Have the Talent of Evolution" "The Skeleton Emperor" "The Inheritance Showdown of the End of the World" "Portable Mountain and Sea World" "Immortal Space" "Monster Altar" "City of Horror" " Wild Fairy World" "I Have an Eye of Truth" "Summoning Nightmares" "Crazy Evolution" "Supernormal World" "Dragon Shepherd" "I Have a Big World" "Misty Hunting Ground" "Mage Secrets" "My Countess", "Law of the Shadow Dragon", "Lord Wizard", "Wizard World", "Wizard Immortality", "Poison is the Way", "Devil of the Abyss of All Realms", "I Can Redeem Merit Template", "I am an Immortal", "Shu Zong", "Sword Builds the Immortal Road", "Book of Gods and Demons", "Weird World", "Starry Sky", "Dream World" Realization" "Plutonium Dragon Realm" "Cultivation in the Elf Continent" "World of Gods" "I Have a City in Another World" "Tauren Lord" "Mountains and Seas Are Dragons" "Searching for Immortality" "Start Cultivating Immortals by Killing Pigs" "Making Dragons Great Again" "My Beasts Are All Myths" "I Go to Another World" "Snake of Hades" "Happiness" "Dream Road", "Evolution Island Kingdom", "Witch World Journey", "My Empire War Game", "Lord of the Corpse Controller", "Lord of the Other Side", "Golden Summoner", "Undead Bone Disaster", "Qingjian Family", "I am a Monster", "I Became the Ancestor of the Blood Tribe", "Super Soul Master", "I Raised Millions of Billions of Ants" and "My Doomsday Territory" "Earth", "Lord of Violence", "Travelling from Another World", "I Can Extract Everything", "Super Divine Training Factory", "Passing Through the Middle Ages", "Crazy Evolution", "Summoning the Sea of Stars", "Starting from Demonic Cultivation", "I Have Ten Talent Positions", "Evolution from Water Drops" I can't find a million words on Baidu search. I am in a book shortage. Please recommend the same type. I don't have money to support, but I recommend it to others. Borrow it. I'm here for a visit. If it doesn't look good, don't talk so much nonsense. It's not easy to write a book. Why don't you write one yourself and let me see it. This book is good, good-looking and to my liking. Recommend "Earth Travel Era", "Eternal Kingdom", "Add Immortal Lord", "The Last Human", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Martial Tomb", "The Ancestor of All Ghosts", "Drunken Immortal Gourd", "Invincible with Eyes", "I Become the King of the Summers", "Don't Mess With That Dragon", "White Dragon Lord of Winter", "Searching for Immortals", "Zombie Evil Emperor", "Mechanical Latitude", "This Lord Is Not Easy to Mess with", "Killing God", "Demon Sky Chronicles", "Mysterious" "Journey", "Rebirth as a Tree", "Super God Refinery", "A Mist World with You", "Nightmare Corrosion", "The First Emperor of the Human Race", "Ji Dao Demon", "Wizard World", "Spirit Login Device", "Huntian Star Lord", "Ancient Games Invasion of Reality", "Ji Dao Fist Lord", "Global Spiritual Tide", "Killing God", "Zhang Sanfeng Travels to Another World", "Soul-Eating Book", "Road to Heaven", "Ping Tian Ce", "My "Wild Tribe", "Ultimate Demons and Ghosts", "Carry a Lottery Panel with You", "The Strongest Non-Human", "God and Demon Breeding Farm", "The Torrent of Ten Thousand Laws", "Beast Control Evolver", "Destiny Master", "Let go of that demon pet", "Crossing the Qin Dynasty to become a tyrant", "Start picking up attributes from today", "Wizard Count", "Eternal Great Summoning", "Online Games: The Wasted Kingdom", "Super God Wizard", "Wizard World", "Eternal Sword Master" "League of Legends Invasion of Another World" "Super God Mechanical Legion" "Pirate Lord" "Farming Lord of Time Travel" "I Summon Heroes for the Emperor of Heaven" "Green Sea Tycoon" "Xingyao Canidi" "Fa Dao Zun" "Supreme Conquest System" "I Have the Talent of Evolution" "The Skeleton Emperor" "The Inheritance Showdown of the End of the World" "Portable Mountain and Sea World" "Immortal Space" "Monster Altar" "City of Horror" " Wild Fairy World" "I Have an Eye of Truth" "Summoning Nightmares" "Crazy Evolution" "Supernormal World" "Dragon Shepherd" "I Have a Big World" "Misty Hunting Ground" "Mage Secrets" "My Countess", "Shadow Dragon Law", "Lord Wizard", "Wizard World", "Wizard Immortality", "Poison is the Way", "Devil of the Abyss of All Worlds", "I Can Redeem Merit Template", "I am an Immortal", "Tree Sect", "Sword Builds the Immortal Road", "Book of Gods and Demons", "Weird World", "Starry Sky" and "Dream World" "Plutonium Dragon Realm" "Cultivation in the Elf Continent" "World of Gods" "I Have a City in Another World" "Tauren Lord" "Mountains and Seas Are Dragons" "Searching for Immortality" "Start Cultivating Immortals by Killing Pigs" "Make the Dragon Great Again" "My Beasts Are All Myths" "I Go to Another World" "Snake of Hades" "Happy Dream Road" "Enter" "Island Kingdom", "Witch Journey", "My Empire War Game", "Lord of the Corpse Controller", "Lord of the Other Shore", "Golden Summoner", "Undead Bone Disaster", "Qingjian Family", "I am a Monster", "I Became the Ancestor of the Blood Race", "Super Soul Master", "I Raised a Billion Ants", "My Doomsday Territory", "Rage Lord" "Traveling Merchant from Another World", "I Can Extract Everything", "Super Divine Training Factory", "Passing Through the Middle Ages", "Crazy Evolution", "Summoning the Sea of Stars", "Starting from Demonic Cultivation", "I Have Ten Talent Positions", "Evolution Starting from Water Drops", "Summoning the Angel Legion at the Beginning", I can't find it with a million words on Baidu search. I am in a book shortage, please recommend the same type. I don't have money to support, but I recommend it to others. Borrow it. I am here for a visit

I'm so used to those players. Those players eat the protagonist's money, make money from the protagonist's, and don't listen to the protagonist's advice. The protagonist also asks them to do things. I can't stand it. And is this an online game novel? Really.

The author created a setting for the protagonist to resurrect his parents after becoming powerful. I would like to ask you, what should you do if your parents also miss their parents? Endless resurrected bloodline ancestors?

I chose Water Margin as my initial stronghold. I guess I persuaded a lot of people to quit. After all, people nowadays are beginning to have their own three views. There are only eight generals in Water Margin, but there are really not many good people. Opening an inn and killing the guests to make steamed buns. How distorted are the three views of a "hero" like this? I won't talk about Li Kui. I'll search on Baidu for examples of this year's crackdowns on gangs and evil.

I'm so annoyed, why do you want to do a live broadcast? What I hate the most is the element of live broadcast in the novel. It makes me uncomfortable to read it. Gone, gone. Let the protagonist slowly show off to others.

It's a confusing word. The author originally wanted to write a personal adventure flow, but later changed it to a stronghold farming flow. I feel like I've already written whatever comes to mind now.

The subject matter is very good, but I've reached 300 chapters. The protagonist is a licking-go-ryu (government-licking) novel with mediocre cultivation, mediocre combat power, and mediocre intelligence. How many readers can such a novel attract?

The previous plot development is really attractive, but the plot after it is released is really unattractive. All kinds of races have appeared, and the protagonist has been dragged down by Erlong Mountain. I know that the author has a good idea and wants to write everything well, and it must be logical and reasonable. But in the end, the book I read gradually became vernacular and boring.

They are all from the Water Margin, and a group of bandits have become heroes.

I have clicked on this book many times. . But every time I see Summon Water Margin, I lose interest. . Why do so many characters choose Water Margin😅

In fact, the author has fallen into a misunderstanding. Generally speaking, people who read it are attracted by your introduction. Personally, I have seen a few chapters, but I haven't seen the synthesized characters mentioned in your introduction. I feel that it does not match the introduction, but the plot should be considered good. I would like to make a suggestion, you can either get into the theme as soon as possible and synthesize various characters, or use the introduction to save money.

I need individualism again and a selfless protagonist who loves and dedicates himself to the point of vomiting. Can you not be too idealistic when writing a novel? Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you. Maybe you, the author, can withstand it. Goodbye.

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Water Margin is just a group of murderous bandits, no matter how good it sounds,

The author does not set a threshold for comments, which is much better than some great authors who are not good at writing. There are many great authors who have good starting points, but they are worse than level 5 authors!

According to the information in the article, the protagonist should be from Deyang

Nice idea, but the author seems to have trouble controlling it