My Apocalyptic Simulation Game

I feel that building an organization and recruiting people are a bit weird and awkward. I jump through the relevant content very quickly, but the rest is quite fun.

I suggest the author change the title of the book to "The End of the World: The Fire Bearer in the Shadows" or "The End of the World: The Fire Bearer"

The time span is too big and it feels unnecessary. The simulation becomes weak again and the original younger brother becomes stronger. It seems uncomfortable, you know.

After all, the first novel has no fan base, but it can be seen that the author is very talented. If he maintains this level, the second novel will not be a problem.

It's well written. Just tell a good story. In fact, the reincarnation of the end of the world is suitable for telling a sense of fate.

The writing is good and not too toxic, the plot is not boring, it is excellent material.

If you keep it, you will die. This. . . It feels like it's well written. . . What a pity. . The author has a post saying that this novel has less than 500 sales per month. . What a pity. Why

It's a very good behind-the-scenes novel. I've read more than 100 chapters and haven't seen any bad points. I highly recommend it.

Seeing the cut-in time point made my eyes light up, because generally simulation novels have a pain point. Growth after simulation will soon lead to invincibility, and then it will become boring. After the simulation here passes the first chapter, the starting point of the protagonist's simulation is directly moved back several decades, and the protagonist changes from a full-level boss to a younger brother, which is good. However, in reality, the protagonist is already invincible, and reaching the point where invincibility leads to boredom. It would be better if this could be solved. Anyway, come on, don't be a eunuch!

Is there a female protagonist? Don't want to watch emotional drama

Have you opened a new book ( ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤ )

Brother, don't be clumsy. I think your plot and settings are okay.

The content is pretty good, but the name is a bit exaggerated, and the author is a newbie with no fan base. It would be much better to change the name. Come on and write

I hope I can at least see the ending. I think it's quite interesting.

On the whole, it looks good, but I feel that although the protagonist has organized a fire carrier organization, he is acting alone from the beginning to the end. The other members are either directly invisible, or they are taken over and become stronger during the simulation. There is a lack of character shaping and the process of character strength growth, which may make viewers a little confused.

I feel like I'm not good at writing about people. The character creation is a bit stiff and doesn't feel real or natural. But the plot and setting are very good and it's just fun.

At present, it is not very attractive. I would like to make some suggestions. The author's outline of the plot is very good, and the writing is not bad. On this basis, more supporting roles can be added, the plot can be expanded, the pace is slowed down, the echoes are echoed before and after, and the logical chain is written in full. It is very energy-consuming, but it can definitely achieve better results.

It's probably already G, the bookshelf has been removed 🤫🤫