Survive Corruption

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The book is pretty good and I can still read it. But there are still problems. Even with the main character's hang-ups turned on, the story still looks like a life-or-death situation. Why do ordinary people live so long?

The protagonist's combat power is blocked at the beginning, which is a very brainless way of writing. The first mob that appears at the beginning is a bird, and the description is that there are a huge number of races. There are no plug-ins at the beginning, and one bird kills the protagonist. As a result, it can only add 10% fuel to the lamp. All 10,000 people should be killed, except the protagonist.

Why do many things in the barter trade cost hundreds of grams or hundreds of grams of food in exchange? A fruit or thing that can upgrade physical fitness and make the body stronger is only worth 350g of food? What is the concept of 350g? Ordinary people can finish it in one meal, not to mention that they are in a world full of crises, and their food consumption will only increase. They work hard to get it all over the place. In this awesome thing, the result is just for one meal of food? It's better to eat it directly, maybe it will save his life. The other person is the same. One is a mutated hawthorn, which can enhance physical fitness and perfectly matches his talent. In the end, he exchanged it for 200g of food and three corpses. Three corpses are not even half of the upgraded lamp oil. 200G of food can only be regarded as half a pack at most. At most, it can only prevent him from dying immediately. In the end, just to avoid dying immediately, he exchanged this precious thing directly?

I have read Chapter 205 so far. This book is okay in all aspects, but the protagonist is too pitiful. He works like a nanny to upgrade others for no reward. Passersby are not even willing to call him "boss". Even if he is paid, it is not equal to the protagonist's efforts. The protagonist has no personality traits and is just a tool. It's so boring to watch. I don't even understand what the protagonist is doing with his life. Is he trying to be a nanny for passers-by? If you're bored, you can read this book, it's just enough food.

It's okay if you leave your brain behind, but there are a lot of minor problems if you don't. Count hay

Just after starting the first novice tutorial, the protagonist is faced with a situation where he will die without using his talents 😅

This kind of shelter doesn't always have souls imprisoned behind it and turned into guards, otherwise the house would be gone once you go out.

The early settings were considered good, but later they fell apart. The character design is becoming more and more like a tool, almost a robot without emotions, and the more you look at it, the more irritating it becomes. Originally, the protagonist wanted to be a lone wolf all the time and become the leader of the area. After being forced to form a group, the protagonist still behaves as a lone wolf. Helping others to upgrade is simply overwhelming their combat power. The defense of the city is all done by the protagonist. Lamp oil is always barely enough. The protagonist's daily talents are so awesome, but the survivors don't have the talents to cooperate? This also makes the initial copy talent very rubbish, incomparable to the kind of talent that can be reused.

This book is too extreme. If you make a slight mistake, the protagonist will die immediately. For players in the same issue as the protagonist, every wave of protagonists will break through the limit. After the merger of the same issue, the protagonist can only be considered average and a bit speechless. If old players come from other areas to rob, they will be the players from the previous issue, losers who cannot compete in the same area. They are backward compatible and not shabby. If you come to this period, you must be suppressed by strength, otherwise the last period will be indiscriminate killing, which is much more reasonable. There are also players who control corrupted creatures. This poisonous point is a bit big. If they change themselves into corrupted creatures, which is the talent skill at the beginning, and control corrupted creatures lower than themselves, this is reasonable, but the number of controls should not be too many.

The biggest problem for me is that the shelter has no ability to defend against people. If anyone enters the protagonist's house and steals food and lamp oil, the shelter can be destroyed by a fire. In this situation where the protagonist is about to starve to death, no one steals the supplies of the protagonist, a lone wolf.

It's just a simple account, without any bright spots. It has a mechanism but no mechanism, a scary atmosphere but no scary atmosphere. It's just a pile of values. If you can't kill one fireball, just two, keep piling up. If the first-level lamp oil doesn't hurt, go to the second level. If the second-level lamp oil is not enough, just collect a lot of lamp oil. . ? Who showed you the journal, while I paid to read the composition of primary school students?

Xiaobai's novel has all the poisonous points, and the cool bits are also old and cool.

I don't even know what to say about this eating phase. After the death of the Creator, he can still leave a legacy to you like ants. However, your eating phase is so ugly. You really have the strength. You will become a Tianlong immediately.

1. At first, there were many threats to the protagonist, but the protagonist basically killed the younger brother instead of the mastermind, and let it go on the grounds of "preserving vitality." This happened many times, and I tolerated it. 2. Faced with the transaction of an item in another district, the other party deliberately increased the price. The protagonist thought that paying the extra price was not unacceptable. In the end, someone wanted to prostitute for nothing and took the initiative. The protagonist faced the enemy's slap in the face and was about to touch his face before he knew how to fight back. Otherwise, it would be a continuous nonsense dialogue. It makes me sick to read it. Even the author of Eggplant writes better than you. It's really disgusting.

1. Regarding monster levels, you need to have room for long-term progress. You are about to fight high-level monsters in the early stages. You don't know what level the monsters after high-level will be. You are worried about the price drop, and you will have nothing to write about, and the number of words will become low. Upgrade the shelter without defense? 2. The issue of monster types and body drops. In the first few dozen chapters, I saw carrion, human-faced bird, giant dog, fish, wolf, and snake. A novice village with an ancient rural background. Is it possible that there are no other animals? Chicken, duck, cat, dog, pig, cow, sheep, horse, donkey, turtle, rabbit, mouse, etc. It can enrich the species and increase the interest of the novel. These animals can not only be used as food, but some can also be used as transportation tools. Have you ever heard of an ox-cart and a horse-drawn carriage? Birds have feathers, and the feathers can be used to make bows and arrows, beef tendons can be used as bowstrings, certain trees can be used as bow bodies, pig teeth and horns can be used to make daggers, turtle shells can be used as armor after being mutated, wolf skins and snake skins can be used as clothes, and rabbit skins can be used as shoes. Some things don't necessarily have to be made by the protagonist, other people can do it, and then they trade with each other, grow with each other, and fight with each other, and the intention becomes enriched. Rotten corpses are not necessarily humanoid, but become monsters, expressed in terms of strength, speed, and mental attacks. Are there any ghost monsters? 3. Does a village not have a blacksmith shop and metals such as gold, silver, copper and iron? Collect metals and use the furnace to create weapons, armor, etc. Since there is a lake, why not set the village to have fishing nets? In addition to fishing, fishing nets can also be used for hunting. 4. In this world, is there sulfur and saltpeter that can be used to make black powder? If there is one, get it out, cause large-scale damage to high-level monsters or groups of monsters, and then touch up the damage. There are also traps, such as bear traps, falling stakes, etc., To hunt monsters and even groups of monsters. 5. In the player group, are there any craftsmen or people with special talents? For example, craftspeople can make bows and arrows, crossbows, backpacks, traps, grow vegetables, make swords and spears, make incendiary bombs, build carriages, make cement (walls), trebuchets, make telescopes, etc. Special talents such as melting Transform metal, accelerate plant growth, heal injuries, treasure hunting talent, danger warning, summon monsters (upgradeable), contract pets, release venom, body alienation (eagle eyes, claws, night vision, horse hoof transformation, metal absorption, etc.), Mental bewitchment. 6. People who have lost their player qualifications have a very small chance of survival. Can they be recruited as tool people? Or, after the land is purified, they can become indigenous people and reproduce and survive? 7. If there are indigenous humans, we should be careful about the structure of their system. What do they use to survive? They have a source of power, will it conflict with players? Without indigenous humans, would there be their remains? For example, combat skills, methods of producing objects, are recorded on stone tablets and tombs. 8. As a lone wolf, if you don't join a group and choose to cooperate, the initial risk factor is high. If the other party betrays you, you can easily be beaten to death. You can make appropriate friends, bribe individual members of the other party, and report to the protagonist if you have any news. At the same time, catch a few more monsters as pets so you don't have to worry about team battles. "Diablo 2" is a masterpiece of darkness. I like the Necromancer the most. He summons skeleton monsters and stone monsters plus a mercenary. Six boys rush in front. I am afraid of whoever I can't defeat, and I will run away. 9. Space rings or backpacks should not appear too early, as they are likely to be like other people's books and become trashy and lose value. For reference only. . .

What can I say about the recent plot? It seems that the protagonist is not happy yet, but the monsters are getting stronger and stronger.

Be normal, don't let your cerebellum control your brain when it comes to women It looks fine so far

After reading the first few chapters, how many people can survive on this difficulty level?

If you can't continue writing, just cut it. I wrote a chapter in two days, and I almost forgot what I was doing before.

The difficulty of the start is so high. The survivors who don't know how to survive are fake, but the invaders are real, right? Only a handful of people are talented at the beginning, and they all look like cannon fodder.

The protagonist's ability is obviously more powerful in the group, right? Just use your ability to purify rotten meat at the beginning, and then get a start-up capital from a small group. Through the trading market, you can quickly complete the primitive accumulation and roll the snowball. Gradually becoming a lone wolf by yourself will waste a lot of unnecessary time.

In this kind of game, it is obvious that if you develop slowly, you will die slowly, and if you become a lone wolf, it means that you will not be able to develop quickly in the early stage. The correct solution can only be to support agents or form a small group to quickly snowball.

The requirements for group portraits are too high, and the author does not have the writing skills. In many cases, only platinum writers can write group portraits well. However, this kind of survival article does not include group portraits and it seems very retarded. As a result, many of these survival articles look good but are not good-looking.

I'm really speechless. Can the author have some brains? He works for others every day and his combat power is just like that. I was upset while reading it. Can he change it?

Suppressing the protagonist in disguise by playing tricks on the villain

What's going on? Why don't you update it after you finish chasing it?

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No, the writing is quite good, why do you want eunuchs? 🤔 Author, you need to know that eunuchs generally have a bad reputation. Many have a wonderful start, but if they always end up being eunuchs halfway through writing, their reputation among readers will really get worse and worse. It can only attract some newcomers and those who don't care, and then some people who still hate eunuchs will spontaneously promote it in book reviews: "This is an old eunuch, if you don't care, don't pursue it" and the like. Writing a book is not easy, and everyone knows it, but if you update it every three days, your results will only get worse and worse. People really prefer those who are good at large quantities and full control, such as the Eagles. There are some minor flaws in the front and back of this book, but they are not major. Overall, it is pretty good. It is a high-quality product among the post-apocalyptic novels with multi-person superpowers. The development of the world view and the atmosphere of the future are very good, and the plot is also quite good. I think more updates can really save the book's performance. Stopping updates every three days will really make the performance worse. The volume is large + it's okay. Even if it really can't be saved, the readers who follow the update will see it in their eyes: "The performance is obviously average, but it's not enough. Yan, more chapters, and I have worked hard to finish it. This author is okay! Okay, I will try to read the next book." I am not a moral kidnapping author, I am just stating a fact and pointing out a situation. It is the author's own decision to decide whether to be a eunuch or not. Adults make their own decisions and bear the consequences.

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