The First Male God

The creativity is good, but the writing is too restrained! It seems ordinary and tasteless

This book is quite interesting. The first part is easy to write, but it depends on the second part, especially the description of the superfluous Internet that can be realized if you have enough money. At least it seems quite happy and relaxing so far, and the characters' IQs are all OK. Come on, author

Okay, the main line is clear, it's just for money, everything else is just extra.

It's written in a treacherous way, and it's a pure injustice.

The writing is very good, funny and ridiculous. Reward the author with 100 coins.

It's okay, the protagonist has a clear purpose, not the Virgin

I have been watching dramas and watching live broadcasts for more than ten years, and most of them are short words.

The writing is okay, I didn't find any major flaws, my IQ is online, and the plot is smooth. Keep it up, but the early updates should be sufficient.

It's really inexplicable that the protagonist becomes rich in reality. First of all, all the income is legal and reasonable, so why do you have to make up another lie to cover it? The lottery is real, the game account is real, and the stocks are real. Even the official can't doubt you. There is nothing to doubt. After all, you have experience in financial operations. Just say that you won the lottery, then trade in stocks and transfer money, and that's it. There are many ways to avoid having anything to do with Brother No. 1. Reality develops slowly. If your assets are not comparable to Brother No. 1, No one will doubt it. Applying this layer of shell really feels like superfluous.

I've always been giving rewards on live broadcasts, which is a bit boring.

At the end, I still don't know why the protagonist needs so much money. It seems like he just bought a few clothes? Shouldn't you enjoy life if you have money? If you're a bit more decadent, try Gourmet Sister-in-law. If you have any pursuits, plant trees and beautify the environment. It's really rare that people want to make money like this just to increase their bankbook numbers.

Tone down the temperament of this big grudge, it's boring to watch too much

Starting from the chapter about rewarding two cheating anchors, the appeal of this article to me decreased. Later, the characters of several characters I created before became unstable. Come on, author, the mountains are high and the rivers are long. See you again if we are destined.

You can read the first 10 chapters, but the rest is really special. . . . . . . . .

It's quite funny haha. It's fun to watch anyway 😁

It's interesting and easy to read.

The layout is too small, the style is not good, and I can't drive. It's strange that it's popular. The subject matter is okay, which is a pity. You can revise the outline and rewrite it. You must be able to drive. It's really impossible to write a great novel without knowing how to drive.

2 Votes support, author, come on, stop cutting it