Rule Survival: I Pawned the Monster Boss

I have to write some emotional scenes at the beginning...

At the beginning, most of the strength could not defeat the driver monster. Your golden finger only has two rules for the time being. With no other bonuses, you can punch and kick it?

The first copy I wrote was pretty good, but the second copy about the little girl selling matches was inexplicable, with inexplicable enemies, and an inexplicable plot. Apart from the fact that she really sold matches, it had nothing to do with the original fairy tale. The players in it are all from the same research institute, and the result is that they are opponents instead of companions. The hostility relationship comes unexpectedly. When they cannot clear the level, they first think about killing people and grabbing treasures. After being beaten by others from beginning to end, you still dare to directly oppose him. Isn't this like you have never died?

The plot line is inexplicable, and the emotional line is inexplicable. Knowing that the researcher was killed by the researcher, he would only be transported to the outside world, and he kept killing him. He sent all the few who were against the protagonist to the outside, and none of them died. What on earth did you want to write?

The supporting characters are witty, and the protagonist's description of human nature is also very one-sided. The writing style is similar to the weird style of previous years, with no highlights except for the name and introduction, which are a bit new.

It is indeed a book that can be used as a daily guide to poisoning people. The first few chapters can poison people to death.

Daily poisoning, don't look, Shennong is dead

Honey stained with shit, this is my evaluation

A lot of what I wrote is incomprehensible. The first dungeon, "Weird Bus", has nothing logically to do with the "Research Institute" that follows, and then I wonder what the purpose of this "Research Institute" is? Similar to the infinitely terrifying "Lord God"? Or what's the relationship? In the copy of The Little Match Girl, everyone transformed and entered, how could they still recognize the girlfriend at a glance?

I have to write some emotional scenes, and why he is so cliched 😒

I don't dare to raise it, because I'm afraid it will kill me, and it's not enough to watch, which is annoying

I have read many good books. It was originally good, but it forced me to write an emotional scene, which made many people unable to stand it and abandoned the book. If you can't write an emotional drama well, don't write it. It's not an urban novel.

The plot has deliberate internal conflicts. At first glance, I thought it was back to ten years ago.

Why write about a bunch of second- and fifth-year-old teammates?

It feels like you have fought hard and suddenly gained strength. It is not this kind of performance, it is very unnatural. . . It's very strangely written. . . The character's psychological behavior should be consistent. Even if a major change occurs due to something, there should be a transition and keep working hard.

I don't understand it, especially the second copy. Everything is inexplicable.

The author has three thousand collections of this crappy book, right? He slipped away😭️

Is the protagonist Tiansha Lone Star? My parents died on my birthday, and then I finally got out, and I was about to find a girlfriend. My girlfriend died on my birthday again, and three relatives died on my two birthdays in a row.

In Chapter 8, only the eyes of the protagonist that mutated due to the car accident appeared from time to time, and there was no trace of the weird golden finger. Too lazy to look

A group of people can't come up with an idea, right? The enemies came to kill them all. After losing a few words, I let it go. This plot is really disgusting

The first three chapters of poisoning me were poisoned.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.