Mystery: the Stars Returner

I don't want to say it anymore, but I really can't stand the world view that this novel randomly introduces. After reading all the chapters, the introduction of the concept of the outside world is really a failure among failures. I originally thought it was a little bit heartfelt, but the characters of the protagonist and important characters were not well shaped in the end. There are a lot of poisonous points that I don't know how to describe. Please read the original work a few more times. In addition to the angels and below, in addition to the audience being able to briefly open the incomplete mythical creature form, the result of the saint opening is out of control. And it's not like Russell is dead. If Huang Beibei is forced to take the path of the Black Emperor, is it possible to kill her again in the end? In addition, I really don't know what to say about the old rulers, so I just wrote them randomly. If you want to introduce the old rulers such as the King in Yellow, at least the characters must be correct. What the hell is it that is above all the old ones? Respect the original work, the four pillars. They have their own symbolic meanings. They are at the top of the universe. When you introduce the stars of the protagonist, you at least give him a symbolic meaning. The words of the outer gods at the beginning are very good. Why not the initial rational part? Does it have to be written outside the universe to make it look high-quality? I wonder if the author has changed. Some of the details and characters were toxic at the beginning, but now there are problems with the outline. There may be some worldviews expanded by the author later, but this is a fanfic, and I actually doubt whether the author can grasp this worldview. Now, it is on the verge of collapse. Let's not talk about the situation of Ke Miao. Amon has also lost too many roles. This is really a fanfic of the Lord of Mysteries. I want to make some original understanding, but at least the big framework should not change. In this way, nothing can be seen, and the final work can only be a suture monster. Does the author understand? It's best to change the chapter. This really doesn't work. Can't you just write the name Great Old One as a normal Old One? Is it really because of this that it controls all the past? When Squid was designing the Old Ones and Outer Gods, he was referring to the Cthulhu Mythos. You really can't write it like this. And if you want to add the Old Ones such as the King in Yellow, it would be best to only classify the Old Ones at the top such as Azathoth into the ranks that have pillars of strength but no corresponding symbolic meaning. There is a bad book that handles this very well. , It's just that the author wrote more than 700 chapters and then changed the book directly after a break. Otherwise, it's okay. If he really wants to write it, the author would have better just put a bunch of Old Cthulhu into the ranks of ordinary old days. As for why the stars have to be written outside the universe, this is the biggest poisonous point. Can't he be written as the fifth pillar? Or if the person's status is raised a little higher, it can suppress the other pillars. If the star returns, if it is outside the universe, how can it be related to the original? How to guide the past of this universe? Also, the person beyond the pillar is too weak. Even the dual-pathway true god of the ancient sun god can be blocked. This is not the old days, not even half of the old days. How can you peek into the high-dimensional overlooker of the old days and not even see a dual-pathway true god? Back then, it was far away The ancient sun god is not the same as the old one (the original book said that he is above the order but not yet the old one). Even if the Chaos Sea joins the human race in its heyday, it will not be so special after splitting. Generally speaking, there are really many poisonous points. I am too lazy to talk about it. I won't complain and I won't subscribe anymore. Goodbye👋

The author knows how to disgust people. Since the introduction of the protagonist, the barrier has been weakened, and the invasion of the gods has become more polluted. He has single-handedly allowed the alien gods to increase their influence on the earth. The true gods on the earth resisted the alien gods in the suffering star world. As a result, the protagonist came with a large-scale bombing cannon, and their kingdom of gods was almost destroyed. There is no old love in the earth. Counting all the true gods, there are only 6 true gods left. You must know that there were originally 10, and their beliefs are only the goddess of the night and the god of steam. The two are relatively stable. Soon the anchor of the goddess of the night will be unstable. It seems that the protagonist has not done anything good. He also actively welcomes and guides the attacks of the outside gods into the barrier to bomb the kingdom of the true gods.

I'm speechless. The Phoenix Ancestor wrote it out and even brought it back to life. It was a failure. Although the Goddess of the Night is not a good thing, it is obviously much better than the Phoenix Ancestor. At least the goddess is still popular and can be regarded as one of the time travellers. However, the idiot author is better, helping an Phoenix Ancestor who has no relationship. If there is no Phoenix Ancestor, everything will not be easy to say and the subsequent plot will not be possible. As for it being like this, it is not good for me, a fan of the Goddess of the Night. It is very unfriendly. I really vomited. I think I still ordered it all (QQ to read the full order). Really, he knew that helping the ancestor of the phoenix could get the help of the Goddess of the Night's dual-path true god, but he wanted to help a single-path and weak batch of garbage. He had too much time to take care of himself, and he also had to be a burden. Isn't it bad to side with the earth camp? It is obvious that he has moved closer to the camp of the Outer Gods, but the idiot went to help the group of Outer Gods. I feel that the end of the world will be better without him. Among the idiots, although he did not directly help the Outer Gods, he directly helped the three Outer Gods Desire Tree, the Super Star Master, and the Original Hungry Avatar came to the earth. People said that he was plotted by Adam and also plotted by the high-dimensional overlookers of the earth he placed on the earth. I can only say that he deserved it.

It feels like a semi-nanny novel. Obviously he is a star and should remain neutral, but he always favors Heiye. Heiye kills the protagonist's younger brother Death. Instead of revenge, the protagonist goes to help Heiye. The main theme is to repay evil with kindness. In the later stage, Amon was dealt with first to help pave the way for Xiaoke. Those who didn't know better thought that the protagonist was the mysterious one. Anyway, if you hate nanny fan fiction, please read it carefully.

The author really might as well just make the protagonist an alien god or write him as a pure happy person. I think the protagonist in the previous plots was obviously portrayed as a person with upright views and on the side of the earth. However, he had to go to the meeting of alien gods. He did not get any benefits from it and made the situation on the earth worse, allowing multiple alien gods to unite and invade the earth. The protagonist now feels like a self-made fw

I don't understand the plot of this book. What is the protagonist's motivation for pulling the foreign god into a meeting? What are the benefits? A weakling, for no reason, held a meeting to connect with foreign gods, and then the whole thing happened that he had no ability to participate in. He was just like a clown. If you are very good, you are taking an evil route, and your purpose is to cause trouble and gain profits. But from what I saw in the previous shaping, the protagonist was not written as an evil camp. So why did you hold this meeting? The most important thing is that the meeting is completely initiated by the protagonist, but since there is no benefit, and the protagonist does not want the alien god to really come, then why are you holding this meeting?

Wasn't it the first time that Tarot and Klein recognized each other's identities, and the two supported each other on the path to godhood, and were each other's best anchor?

Why do I feel that the protagonist has become a licking dog now? I don't feel as bold as taking the path of the Black Emperor. Although the protagonist no longer takes this path and takes the path of the stars, what about the personality of the stars? What are the honorable names of the stars? I feel that the temperament of the protagonist is not worthy of the role of the star-returner. It's okay to invite foreign gods to have a meeting, but what's your purpose? You can waver in the middle and watch the struggle between the Outer Gods and the Seven Gods, or you can plot against the gods behind the scenes, but do you have any grudge against Amon? You can help Klein, but once or twice is appreciation and fellow feeling, but what do you get from helping so many times? Is it a mystery in the future? Haha, will Klein definitely become a mystery? Haha🙃, the original work will be like this, but what about your fans? If you invest in Amon, and if you help Amon, who do you think will become a secret in the end? ... In the Lord of Mysteries novel, in my opinion, the gods are all investing and betting, competing and calculating. Night invests in Klein to plot against the God of War, Storm invests in Night, Lilith, the God of Steam, the True Creator, and many other gods are essentially investing and betting to carry out their plans. They all do things with purpose, for profit or to get something. But what about the protagonist of this book? I can't understand. Forcibly intervening and participating in the plot, the characters are changing... Well, the more I read, the more entangled and uncomfortable I become 😣. I hope that the protagonist's personality in this book can be more vivid... But, I still hope you can continue to work hard. The previous writing is really good and great. I hope it can be completed. Wish you good luck

The author's description of the improvement of the protagonist's strength is too slow, and it seriously suppresses the improvement of the protagonist's strength. It doesn't matter if the pre-demigod improves faster, and the post-demigod's strength can be improved slightly. After all, the strength span of the pre-demigod in the mysterious world is not that strong at all, so it doesn't matter if the strength improves faster in the early stage. In the end, the protagonist is only sequence 6 after more than 300 chapters. The suppression of the protagonist's strength is a bit too much. After all, the protagonist is not an aboriginal, but a time traveler who knows the plot well, and he is also a ruling class The nobles of the upper class are not like the protagonist in the original work who needs money, money and knowledge. In this case, it is unreasonable that the protagonist's strength is still so slow to improve. After all, the protagonist arrived in the mysterious world several months earlier than the original protagonist, and his understanding of the mysterious world is much better than the original protagonist. Unlike the original protagonist, he is not short of money to buy extraordinary materials. Goldfinger is also stronger than the original protagonist. The speed of strength improvement cannot be compared with the original protagonist's strength improvement, which is quite nonsense.

The Meeting of the Stars was a failure. It made the protagonist look like a mentally ill person. He was on the side of humans and the Earth, worried about the safety of his friends, and had a kind heart. At the same time, he brought the alien gods together and asked them to discuss how to advance the end of the world. No benefits were obtained from it. Several crises still occurred because of this. It made the protagonist look like a mentally retarded person.

The design is quite novel, and the writing is okay, but there is one thing I don't understand. Why do you have to smoke djinn every day when you have nothing to do? Everything else is fine, but I can't understand this.

What the hell did the author write? He and Sharon and Audrey went to have a harem in the past, right? The world of Cthulhu couldn't control the lower body and even took a close-up of it. It sucks.

It's only three things. Huang Beibei should give up if she doesn't believe in it. Two helpings can be regarded as helping her fellow countrymen. She doesn't deserve to be helped by a star returner all the time. She enjoys the benefits and is wavering. Isn't a Sequence Two qualified?

I was confused when I read the next chapter. Why is the protagonist still only a Sequence 5? It stands to reason that the chaos created in Beclade caused the death of a Sequence 2 and a King of Angels. The magic potion should have been digested long ago. Is it because the ritual was not completed or nothing was said. The Sequence 1 potions were not promoted until the Sequence 1 potions were available. What's stuck here, what's in the water? If you are afraid of the resurgence of high-level beings in your body, then don't be promoted. Now you are thinking about promotion while being afraid of this and that. It is too confusing for our readers. The water should also be at a certain level. If the ritual is not completed, write down the ritual so that we can have something to look at.

The one who returns the stars? The kind that has something to do with a big alarm clock?

The role of a lawyer is a bit ridiculous. The protagonist has never participated in a case. He has digested more than half of the magic potion just by studying law and watching others handle cases. According to this logic, Xiao Ke only needs to learn divination and watch other people's divination.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the protagonist whipping the djinn with a whip just after sequence 9. It was too frivolous. I would like to ask, is there any benefit to the protagonist from doing this? Messing up an old friend for no reason. Although many protagonists in the fandom like to be fun people and persecute Kemiao, it is because Kemiao has a good temper and he is not a true god. Which protagonist offends a true god for no reason?

Okay, okay, obviously the front can be read from the back. I really don't want to say anything. The more I watch it, the more awkward it becomes. Ever since the emotional drama started, it has become more and more wrong. The emotional line is wrong, the story line is wrong, the characters are even more wrong, and the overall situation is getting more and more wrong. The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel.

Mistress Audrey, please 😭

The author, I think it's too cool. Recently, the dialogue and writing have become increasingly white, and there are too many ambiguous chapters with female characters (there is a tendency to get closer to the readers next door, so you must stay away from this abyss)

I don't quite understand the meaning of the protagonist's attraction to the Outer God. The Outer God mobilizes the masses to find Star Disciples. He is still developing followers. Does he dislike the unpleasantness of being exposed?

Hei Ye has slapped you in the face, so you can't let her go this time. Even if Hei Ye is the organizer, he can't keep her even if he lowers himself to become an angel. The next step should be to open the box and then come to Adam in yellow. You can keep her to raise the God of Knowledge and then arrange the sun.

Is there any secret fan recommendation? Don't be too fond of Xiaoke. It's better to have your own power, or train your own subordinates.

The whole process was aimed at the goddess of the night, and the phoenix was resurrected to become one of his own, so that the night was forced to fight against the protagonist because of the access problem, until the night was forced to use the power of the mother goddess to forcibly accommodate the river of eternal darkness, and the disaster problem became the old days and fell into madness, and then gathered and devoured a bunch of ordinary old days, and then was killed by the mother goddess and a bunch of old days. The seal was crippled, and then the protagonist completely wiped out the consciousness of the night and died in front of the Mother Goddess and the old ones. Well, he was still a traitor. If your protagonist is a fun person or an outsider, it would be fine, but the protagonist you wrote is not. It is more disgusting than the protagonist of the Aurora Society. The worst part of the whole story is that the goddess of the night protects the earth and dies more miserably than those old ones.

The protagonist is really a traitor, and the indirect harm he causes to mankind is far ahead of others.

The awkward licking of Audrey in the early stage was a bit disgusting, mainly because Audrey's father is very annoying. It was obviously Audrey who took the initiative to approach and invite the male protagonist. Her father always acted like a coward and intimidated the male protagonist. Later, they went hunting together. Audrey ran around by herself and ended up dreaming at night. Her father, Earl Hall, also threatened the male protagonist. Can the responsibility for such an inexplicable accident be placed on the male protagonist? Moreover, after the male protagonist saved Audrey, Earl Hall still acted like you have to be humble. It was really disgusting.

It would be better to have no heroine or only Sharon as the heroine. Audrey is a bit alienated every time she appears.

The meeting of stars has no benefits, only negative effects

To guide alien gods to invade the earth, all I can say is pure sand eggs.

To be honest, I can read it, but the first half of the book is a bit interesting, and then it becomes more and more boring, fake and empty, and the writing doesn't have the flavor of Lord of Mysteries.