The Witch Collects the Smell

Another multi-female novel by the author, the world view is set in a modern world with hidden mysteries. As a member of a special department, the protagonist's daily job is to eliminate monsters that pose a danger to human society. "When dealing with the witch, put your own safety first, do not anger the other party, and agree to the witch's conditions as much as possible." "Okay, senior." ... Witch A: "I want you to fall in love with me, and you can't flirt with women." "No problem!" 'I didn't expect that a job would give me a wife. Where can I find such a good job? ' Witch B: "I want you to fall in love with me, and you can't flirt with women." "Okay..." 'Come on, it's just two people, you can handle it... Let me see... "Cultivation of Immortality from Time" "Management Begins", "How Neptune Was Made"' Witch C: "I want you to fall in love with me, and you can't get involved with women." "..." 'Which evil god can I believe in to obtain the ability of the clone? Waiting online! Urgent! ' Advantages: 1. Of course there are multiple female protagonists! What more do you want? Disadvantages: 1. The author has a bad criminal record. Please use your magical powers that are comparable to the evil sword manual! Book lovers who like to read love and battle light novels can come inside and take a look. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"TopicId":"886256127972278272","TopicName":"Weekend Book Recommendation"}

Trial reading of the new book | "The Witch's Smell" | A modern fantasy novel in the mysterious style of Cthulhu, a light novel with a plot about a woman chasing a man. In the setting of this book, witches are special women who are chosen by the gods of the abyss because they have endured pain and suffering, and possess "divine nature". Plot summary (minor spoilers): The male protagonist is a "beautiful, strong and miserable" template, and his sick and weak sister at home serves as a guide to promote the development of the male protagonist's plot. In the first thirty chapters of the book, two female protagonists who are suspected of being witches appear. As witches who feel the pain due to the death of the male protagonist, they are reborn to stage a story of a woman chasing a man. Summary: The author's writing style is delicate, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the characters he portrays do not feel inconsistent. Although the plot is a bit cliche and the foreshadowing arrangements are a bit stiff (I hope the author will turn around and slap you in the face), the interesting story content makes readers want to read on. Recommendation Index: Liangcao Keywords: Modern Mystery, Cthulhu, Witch, Rebirth of the Heroine Women chasing men {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}{"TopicId":"572182284338462720","TopicName":"Light novel"}

It was recommended that the author wrote "Harem" well, so come and take a look, but I haven't read Cang Qing, which has the best reviews. After reading dozens of chapters, I think there are several shortcomings in the early stage. Of course, I am not saying that I want to correct it, I am just commenting. I am not a troll, I hope to have a normal discussion and light trolling. 1. The world view is spread too slowly. It can be said that there are more descriptions of weirdness than the real world. As a result, this science fiction setting has completely become a decoration. The socio-political structure is also similar to that of Japan, but when combined with the science fiction and weirdness above, it is very strange. It is not clear how high the socio-political status of the protagonist and his superiors is, and the overall rationality is not harmonious. 2. The author seems to want to write a rigid and righteous protagonist, but all the descriptions show that the protagonist strives to kill monsters in order to save his sister, and can ignore procedural justice, and the vague smell of disdain cannot be tolerated. I can accept both kinds of protagonists, but you can't be one way and another at one moment. It's very embarrassing to read. Even if you do a mission for free without rewards or points for killing monsters after being fired, your character design is still established. 3. The author's satire on reality is too frequent and blunt. This problem is related to the first point. When the social system is not explained in detail, all social problems are parachuted. Without enough foreshadowing, readers cannot predict what the author wants to satirize. And the intensity of the satire is therefore very light, which can only make readers frequently break the fourth wall in their heads. In fact, sarcasm does not need to be so frequent, either it is mentioned in a joking manner, or it is only written in one or two places, but it is very profound. It is best to map out a reasonable solution that can be applied to reality. This is frequent and not profound. It is easy to be blocked and has no social significance. It is better to go to Zhihu.

Just deal with the ending. Don't worry about your B career lines.

I really don't like the protagonist who is too arrogant and incompetent. Among the first three books, I still like Aske the best.

After seeing through my defense, I went to the comment section and found that most of them were scolding, so I felt relieved. The story background, Qingyu's characterization, etc. Are all bearable. This male protagonist is better than Aske, not to mention Cheng Jinyang and Chen Guanshui. At least his logic is consistent and he does not treat readers as fools. Looking back at this book, the male protagonist is upright and reserved, but on the second day after having a relationship with Reina, who has the most favorable impressions, he crawls into the bed of his ex-wife, who has no favorable impressions. The reason is just to ask a few questions? Seeing this, I really hate myself for having a brain I hope I can write it properly next time. I will withdraw here as a courtesy

It can only be said that Teacher Dayou and Teacher Dachi both have extraordinary early and mid-term skills.

I haven't read it yet, but read the comments first Don't let the readers lead the way, readers don't know how to write books at all This is my impression after reading so many book reviews. Some of the readers' ideas are not bad, but most of them are wishful thinking. Even if the reviews have high likes, if you really follow the comments, it is more likely to be a mess The author has written millions of words, and his grasp of the plot must be far better than the readers. Not many people who praise highly have made money by writing books.

Catch up all the way to the latest... I feel like I am getting better after all three heroines are gone Compared with the author's previous books, the plot rhythm of this book feels a bit slow, and the plot of the entire first volume feels insufficient. As for the three heroines, they have their own characteristics, Reina is very cute, Xia Xia Zi Li felt good after leaving the scene Xia Qingyu, who was crazy about dissing in the comment section, was actually okay in my opinion I would say the biggest problem at the moment is The male protagonist is the worst in portrayal. It even makes me confused. Why do these three girls love him so much? With the male protagonist's charm not being shown at all, Xia Qingyu's entrance immediately made the male protagonist shake his head, so that many readers had a bad impression of Xia Qingyu In terms of combat power, the male protagonist is not outstanding, and the weapons he relies on are suspected to be provided by his sister. The upgrade system does not seem to be as good as the witch system of the heroines Compared with IQ, compared to the heroine's future memory, it is difficult to show the male protagonist's information when the amount of information is seriously insufficient. Xia Qingyu's entrance directly makes the male protagonist look like a Muggle. The author probably wanted to distinguish the previous works from the male-disdainful style, and in this work, the girls directly favored the straight men, so the male protagonist in this work wrote about the straight men. However, the girls all have extraordinary identities and are outstanding in all aspects, while the male protagonist has not shown any shining points. To be honest, this kind of negative attitude is really not good and will only make people speechless. It feels like an ordinary person's daydream about a princess falling from the sky at home... In general, I feel that the male protagonist is holding back this work

Just relying on the defense The male protagonist is ordinary and confident. I don't see any bright spots now. He pretends to be stupid every day because of his self-impression. As a man, I laughed out loud. It's really muddy and can't be put on the wall.

My evaluation is that reading it here is worse than reading the author's Cang Qing Sword. I won't say how poorly written the male protagonist is, but I will say that if I went to the desert to ride a camel and asked a businessman how many camels were enough, he would answer: One is enough.

It's useless no matter what reason you give me, Unification of the Empire Fighting the Federation My sister's secret The protagonist's occult growth You're not a mess, you don't even have a tail An anticlimax has cut off its tail, no reason you can use is useless, you're just a eunuch like four pigeons It's disgusting

It's hard to imagine that this author has ever written The Blue Sword

Big Pigeon is really interesting. The readers applauded me for writing a story about a woman's fight, and then I had to reward myself for writing a story about political struggle. It's the same habit as Huang Xiaoming.

After deleting the sister, the plot was not abrupt at all. Then why did you write the role of the sister?

Why do I feel like the author has hurt Zhongyong?

After reading hundreds of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. In order to save the world, multiple people have to fall in love. The tone is set at the beginning of Date A Live, just to legitimize the harem, so that everyone doesn't feel disgusted, and also to make the heroines jealous at most, rather than actually fighting. This book is good. On the one hand, the male protagonist seems to be a scumbag. Although he appears to be a great person, he actually has a lot of problems. On the other hand, the heroines are all bitches and scolds, and they are always ready to kill each other. Sometimes, not only does it have no effect on the main plot, but it is also a hindrance. 🤔🤔🤔 It doesn't matter if the male protagonist is not attractive, you are not even attractive to the female protagonist. I want to ask what do you want readers to see? You don't really think there's anything attractive about these manic patients who are full of foul words and ready to kill people, do you? This is a novel. You are just bragging that no matter how beautiful she is, I can't see her. Look inside? I see that inside I am just a piece of rubbish 🙄. Okay, okay, I didn't watch the male protagonist or the female protagonist. I watched the main plot, but the Riddler started as soon as I got here. The plot gradually progressed extremely slowly. The heroine knew everything but didn't say anything. The male protagonist knew what the heroine might know, but just didn't ask. Anyway, she just went to work, fell in love and played. Only the readers of the co-author care whether the real Takamagahara will explode or not, right? To sum up, this is something that was clearly understood in the first episode of Date A Live. The author has never learned how to deal with it, nor has he thought about it. Anyway, it's just a meeting, a lot of scolding, and then a few more chapters, the main plot? The author of the main storyline didn't even think about it well! Push your ass.

Ah, after raising it for a long time, I saw that the Moon Palace was already at home? No, I think one of the other two female protagonists has just made some progress, and the other is basically at 0 progress. It doesn't matter if the male protagonist in your book is a scumbag. You also said that he is Wei Guangzheng. In this case, what reason does the male protagonist have to start a harem when he has a girlfriend whom he is already in a relationship with? Don't tell me, just keep delaying it, and let the other two female protagonists know that he is a mistress and continue to chase hundreds of thousands of words until the male protagonist changes. It's too nonsense.

This should have been a hit Personally, I think the most successful part of Youzhu is the first half of Jinyang I have ordered both Asker and Jinyang Cang Qing's netizen characteristics are a bit awkward, but the Byzantine setting is very pleasing Jinyang I have read it three times. The bloodline of the family and the dream practice are both great The main girls are well portrayed The strange thing is that I don't particularly like the heroine in this book so far It may be that the fictional island country background makes it a bit difficult for me to read.

So far in this book, we have no plans to describe the male protagonist at all, right? I really like what Cang Qing Zhijian said, and I don't intend to label the character. So just don't write the male protagonist. Without a male protagonist, there would be no label, right?

I can only say that you are really defiant. You don't really think that everyone is just watching you write zhengzhi, do you? I remember when I first opened this book, I said that I should write more that people would like to read. Is this what you have written that people will like to read? The beginning is indeed okay, but do you want to take a look at what you are writing now? I feel a little physically uncomfortable after reading these chapters. Is this what Xia Qingyu feels like? And then be resurrected? How many chapters did I miss? The update is also perfunctory, and the emotional line can't be written?

First of all, this book is actually well written, even much better than the author's previous works. But the problem is that the author's previously written light-hearted and funny daily harem novels, as long as they are not too over-the-top in other aspects, and have one or two points of imagination, plot, characters, jokes, etc., Can be viewed as highly readable works with a score of 80 or above. As for the current subject matter, at least there should be no major flaws in the hard-core aspects of social system and ability balance. Considering that there is a lot of depressing and unpleasant content, it must have an average score of at least 80 points to be considered a good work. Although this book has some very good writing, overall it should not meet the above standards. Secondly, there seems to be a problem with the positioning of the target readers. The subject matter of this book, the daily love between the male and female protagonists, can only be a branch line. The status of the condiments may be a problem with previous writing habits, or the author may want both. As a result, I personally feel that it may not be pleasing to both sides. For example, in my opinion, the timing of the relationship between the male protagonist and Yuegong and Zili was very awkward, and the length of the driving related chapters was too much and even a bit boring. Finally, since the author chose such a subject, the commercial setbacks of the book should have been anticipated before publication. And now it ends like this, no matter how it ends, it cannot be avoided, which is very unpopular. If you really have the financial means, consider writing a short story. Don't start with such a big picture. It's okay if the writing is terrible, but as I said before, there is actually something interesting in the writing, so for readers who are watching and reading, it will be very uncomfortable to stop suddenly. At least as far as I am concerned, if I had known this result, I would not have subscribed so much.

It's a pity, it's actually quite good, but the author always likes to write about the big background, but humanities, society, transportation, and energy are all based on the earth's background. To put it bluntly, it's the background of a small book, and then the various big background descriptions, without the plot being developed, give people a strong sense of fragmentation, and the more they read, the more uncomfortable they become. The story is very good. In the early stage, it is better to start from this small place, starting from a city, and slowly unfold the story. Good guy, start directly from the planet, or even a metropolitan area of ​​more than a thousand kilometers... There is no way to say, show your hands.

Why are there still bureaucrats in such a high-pressure environment? Weirdness didn't appear on the first day. Can't we write about monsters and upgrades properly? Isn't this kind of plot simply disgusting for readers? I wonder if I had any brains when writing the book 🙄

I'm a little scared. This book about the protagonist who could have disgusted me before chapter 70 was actually written by you! Don't write too much. It's rare for the protagonist to have an appetite for it... Su Lili seems to have been written by you. If it's a book about physics and mathematics as a superpower, md, it will fall into your hands three times. That book originally looked at the author's fate as a final conclusion, and Su Lili was killed. As a result, the book insists that Su Lili is different from the previous Su Lili, and only the side that likes the protagonist is left, and the poisonous resistance is not moist enough. (Time management is not written by you, right...)

I even want to run away before I can put it on the shelf. Isn't this really a waste of words that I spend an hour every day on the outline, combined with my mood and thoughts at the time, and just expand it?

The author must have had fun writing this book. Although there is nothing poisonous about it, Zhang Zhang talks about contradictions in reality, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. Alas

For the first time, I have an author I like and have ordered all his new books. The two joys overlap each other, and this double joy brings more and more joy. We were supposed to have a happy time like a dream, but why did it become like this?

It feels so scary, doesn't it? It is closely related to reality, such as economic downturn, general election, gun attacks... Did the author really go back in time 🤐

Um, this book has hit the base so fast, is it going to be cut in half🐴? It's too fast, it feels like it's urging people to run.