Do You Have a Problem with the Necromancer?

I came here to see the extraordinary world fighting against monsters and harems. As a result, the book has been updated until September 21st. All the heroines are still limited to label creation. Most of the pen and ink is written about the extremely boring palace battles and the even more boring political establishment. If I have this time, I might as well write some details about the heroine's life experience to increase the completion of the character To sum up, this book is not as good as the previous one. At least the beginning of the previous one was good, but although it fell apart in the middle, this one is almost as good as it is now.

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I feel that there are only two points of interest in the author's book: stitching together the background of the world and seeing the exotic customs; the other, of course, is running pictures with the female characters to enhance feelings and Shura field. If the author insists on setting up a shabby world background, or even insists on describing his own plot, then most of the book will be sent. That book on Immortal Management is an example: it uses a gimmick to keep readers interested, and the early plot is actually a parallel plot that keeps cutting off the characters. How dare the author write this? Especially when it comes to catching up on updates, the reader is not familiar with the female character yet, so he just changes the map and reappears after dozens of chapters. If I don't see the interaction between the female character, I still can't watch it. The plot is also a classic point. Every time I watch it, I have a feeling of déjà vu. I felt like a donkey looking at carrots. When I saw the last scroll, the female characters finally met each other, but in the end I felt like I didn't write much. Let's write about Randian. Anyway, I've read six books and I've never felt that way. Every time it feels like something big is coming, but the author just tells the story in a straightforward way and ends it? There are already six books here, so there's no need to worry. So why not use your strengths and avoid weaknesses? Readers say they like your Western fantasy, but I think it's better to say it stitches together a modern setting. For example, Cang Qing's Shinra technology, the girl's aristocratic family + modernization, as for the demon sect demon girl, it feels like ordinary spiritual energy recovery. I think Cang Qing Sword is like a road book, with constantly changing maps, which is not bad. It is like the magician's manual from Tingri (although the back part is also rotten). To put it bluntly, don't you just want to see the protagonist and the heroines become stronger as a team, watch the humanistic plot while enhancing their relationship, and prepare for some harem fighting? You have to make the plot more complex. Wouldn't it be more fun to write about a special world view and experience the exotic customs? Wasn't this the case with your first two books? The author insists on involving a power struggle, not a battle of wits. Of course, it's good to be able to write well. I've read six of the books in question, and the author has been writing for six or seven years. I always know what level I'm writing at.😄 I won't comment on the female characters. If you write too much about this kind of thing, it will become thin.

Only from the reader's perspective, personal point of view. I've basically read Cang Qing/Girl/The Witch, I've read the book Cultivation of Immortals from the middle to the end, and I've basically read dozens of chapters of the book Witch/The Witch. My personal opinion is still in line with the data. If I don't write well at the beginning, I will basically slide all the way to the end. The problem of fatigue in the later stage is common. Comparing the three books with good Youzhu data, it is obvious that readers like the protagonist to take the harem group along the way to upgrade, enhance the relationship, and interact with the harem in the Shura field. This kind of writing is the basic plan of Youzhu, and few other authors have touched on this track: other authors are used to introducing new heroines while becoming stronger, and then the role of the previous heroines drops sharply (the heroines rarely interact). And You 🐷 prefers to select and collect and then interact. The advantage is that each character appears frequently, but the interaction is difficult to write. On this basis, if we can design a pretty good world view, the quality will be improved to a higher level. Cang Qing/girl is obviously this type, a Western Holy See + modern technology, an Eastern family + modern technology. At the same time, I can clearly feel that Youzhu is not good at writing plots such as expanding power. I basically stopped reading the plot of the book "Girl" after I got married. On the contrary, a road novel like "Cang Qing Sword" is very suitable for the author, with one map and one heroine (the author is pretty good at writing people😀). - On another note, I feel that the author is basically doing the opposite. He can't stand writing about harem interactions, but he likes to write about it. I almost didn't read the book Demon Girl. The background of spiritual energy recovery was badly written. I've read more than a dozen books. Fortunately, the interaction between the heroine is good, but I can only say that the design of several dungeons is quite satisfactory. When I saw the sun sword being pulled out, I had no interest in it. It was just a flat push and skipped directly to the end. In this time management book, I can only say that there is basically no interaction between the heroine, but I said at the beginning that it is explosive at the end. Then the middle part is stinky and long. To advance the story, I either want you to get together and write it like this (there is also a focus), or the heroines appear one by one according to the plot, but you actually write parallel lines? I don't dare to study 5 projects at the same time😄, readers must be very tired to read. When byd saw the ending, he found that the thunder was loud and the rain was light, but that was it? It was similar to how Cang Qing dealt with the mentor at the end. The problem was that the highlight of the book was the interaction between the heroines in the middle period, and the ending was just the ending. The expectations of this book are all at the end. If you can't write an explosion scene, readers will definitely not buy it. There is also a world view, a classical cultivator, which is one of the reasons why I jumped to watch it in the middle period. I really can't stand the arrogant little junior sister, the rich lady senior sister, the sword cultivator senior sister, an orc princess, and a model drama of the world of cultivating immortals. As for the witch still having this book, there is nothing to say. It is a pure light novel style, a medieval plot, and the heroine is not very interested in it, so I simply don't want to read it. Looking forward to the background of the next book and the setting of the heroine, I hope it will be a bit novel 😎

Brother, why do I feel that you have never looked back on your road to becoming a middle-aged greasy political uncle? Why do you take the development of things so much for granted? The way things develop is not that I should try to figure out what will happen and be cautious in case something goes wrong, but that I have confidence that things will develop like this... The heroine should fall in love with me, even if I quarrel with her. Others should lick me, nod and bend.

Do you still want to write about women's rights in your article? ? ? ? I read novels to feel refreshed, to daydream, and to relax after a day of being a cow or horse! It's not because you write about feminism to disgust me!

Isn't the main theme of this book against the White Walkers, then what is written in this book? How many ancient heroes have been resurrected? This is a drop in the bucket against the White Walkers. Is it useful to also write about a lot of palace fights, bad jokes, and intrigues to highlight that I am sober? Kill the king to be a puppet, support the elves to be the queen, use the dragon girl to coordinate the lizard people, and fight the white ghosts together. Writing an Amazon association is like a sow in charge of infertility in the kitchen when the enemy is in front of you.

I know that people don't want to watch this kind of childish palace politics. They want to watch romantic adventures. If I don't want to write about it, I have to write about political fights, and then cut it if no one will watch it.

I hope it won't be another early God of War 😅, the author of Ultraman, and the light went out after two hundred chapters.

Doesn't the author really think that what he witnessed was well written? When it comes to witnessing, everyone's IQ drops to kindergarten level. Especially the aristocratic part, I don't know what it means to be eye-catching

First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The heroine is well written, and the male protagonist's character is also better than the previous one. I will probably continue to subscribe to this book. Then let me talk about some points that I wanted to complain about when I watched it. 1. Issues of world view and power system. I wrote that there are a lot of battle scenes now, but as an online game that travels through the world, there is currently no systematic power system, which is very strange. In addition, this is obviously a high-magic world, and other people are not surprised when they see magic, so why are there no mages in the Marquis of the Border, the Dire Legion, the Imperial Capital, and the Duke's family? Judging from the battlefield efficiency of traditional mages and the role of practical small spells such as calmness, there is no reason not to recruit mages. 2. Is this amber flow game background necessary? Although Warthog says it is amber flow, in my opinion, this is not so much amber flow as a rebirth invincible flow. The biggest role of the game background at present is to make the protagonist invincible and omniscient. In fact, the most important thing about the Amber Sword is to change the fate and save the characters who died tragically in history. But the protagonist's necromancy is a bit too unreliable. He has been dead for 1,000 years and is brought back to you. There is no sense of urgency at all. The current plot feels like the boss is playing house with the children. Rather than talking about the Amber Sword, it is better to talk about the Western fantasy version of Emperor Domination. 3. Political drama, I have seen many people say this but I really can't help it myself. The first one is to appoint the protagonist as the captain of the Royal Capital Guard after a meeting. The analogy is now equivalent to the chief of police in the capital. The question is, why can we appoint him directly after we have only met him once? And who do you think the protagonist is from the perspective of the royal family? He left home for eight years and even his biological father did not know his whereabouts. When he came back, he suddenly brought two female companions who were suspected of being members of the elf royal family. You will only believe this if you say that he has not colluded with any forces. Normally, you won't be able to pass the preliminary review. The second is the death of the Duke. At first, I thought I was turning the cats into zombies and running away from the dukedom, and then fabricating some evidence to lead others to suspect that the duke wanted to use sacrifices to resurrect his beloved cats. The results tell me that the role of cats is to make civilian women think that the Duke is a cat-like maggot, and then rush in and kill the cat-like Duke? And there is not even a high-level knight or mage around this Duke. When faced with the civilian riots, his first reaction is to run away? And then he doesn't run away? This is probably the most flamboyant Duke in all the Western fantasy movies I have ever seen, bar none. I say it would be more reasonable for you to control a bunch of zombie cats to bite the Duke to death. In a world of high magic, a powerful Duke who was feared by the royal family was rushed into the house and killed by a group of civilian women on the pretext of stealing cats. Except for the protagonist who secretly ignited the plot, there was no element of extraordinary power. I laughed out loud looking at it.

It's so beautiful It's so sweet It's so well written 😭The next few novels don't have that flavor😭 Even the killing line is included . Make a wish that the author's writing skills will regress twenty years tomorrow Return to his peak state overnight 😃

I thought he was an anti-hero who would rather form an army of the undead to save the world. Just like the path of the Lich in Pathfinder's Wrath of the Righteous, sacrificing himself to save the world, but he turned out to be an anti-hero who was selling his own flesh and blood to the living dead. You can change your profession and become a priest.

Youzhu, after so many books, haven't you realized that the testimony you wrote is just a bunch of facts? Think about it, among all the books you have written, which one died suddenly because it was not about politics? It collapses as soon as you write it, and it collapses as soon as you write it. Look at how bad the data in the next few books are. Can't you admit that your testimony level is just a piece of cake? To put it bluntly, if you rely on writing political dramas, whether it can be put on the shelves is a question 😥

The separation between the previous and the previous content is too big. From the beginning, I thought he was a ruthless person who would turn everyone out of their graves as undead and natural disasters in order to save the world. But later on, he started to engage in Machiavellian tactics? ? It's just a joke, the more I watch it, the more I can't stand it.

I don't even want to mention the update speed, and the content is also funny. Several people came to see your key policy and they really didn't like it. I finally wrote about some girls and it's only one or two chapters. I will continue the endless key story immediately. I won't follow it anymore. I just want to see what your book will look like in the end.

For example, some people always say that Chinese Immortal Cultivation is terrible and not as good as the first Western fantasy, so they get angry and write another Western fantasy [to prove themselves]. Full of dissatisfaction and antagonism towards readers, it doesn't feel like writing a good story😅

Whether the writing is good or bad is a matter of controversy among some readers. Such slow updates affect all readers. Silent readers like me come out to comment. You have reached the kill line, You Zhu.

Why don't the author change his industry? You really can't capture the readers' point. I have been fooled by the Cangqing Sword for so many years. If I had the thought to do other things, I would have already earned it.

Each book is worse than the last. The first book is at its peak and then it goes high and low. The next few books are simply incomprehensible. Why? This testimony made me laugh out loud. Chun Chun didn't understand high school politics.

The Western fantasy apocalypse flow is actually so attractively written, and the text is not watery at all. It switches between three scenes in six chapters, and everything is explained clearly.

Please write something about what a necromancer should do. Apart from writing your identity as a necromancer at the beginning, has it ever been used later?

Evaluated as Blue Sword + Ridiculous Management Power The first book has "Under the demigods, all are ants", but in this book, with the currently powerful undead archmage and the undead heroine who can restore combat power, he returns to the family to play pig and eat tiger. ? What does it mean? So far in the novel, I can think of the only two useful functions of power: 1. Strong people are useless, they can only fight one by one, and they will be beaten to their knees by a large number of soldiers. 2 Heroine: Wow! He made me cry, he was so kind to the common people, and I fell in love with him.

Do you want to be Chen Guanshui for the rest of your life, or do you want to be Asike! Even if it's just for a few minutes. What you need is not just courage, but a cry from the bottom of your heart, just to wake up a few people. If there is such an opportunity, I will choose to be Cheng Jinyang. 😌

It's strange. The author's writing style should be pretty good, and he can write a masterpiece like Cang Qing. The first few hundred chapters are all very interesting, sweet love, and make people feel warm after reading them. Why is it that the following chapters are more awkward than the other ones? If you just polish the writing style, don't you want the opportunity to make a lot of money on your own track? 😭😭😭 Come back, my Cang Qing, the proudest faith 🙂🙂🙂

The Year of the Bull Demon has passed 840,000 words. You guys are really terrible and lazy.

I put it bluntly that all problems can be attributed to one problem, the number of updates. With the author's writing skills, no matter how bad the plot is, more updates will surely achieve far better results than this.

Brother, why don't you cut it off and take a good rest before updating normally? I really can't wait for the update. Or you can take a break for half a year and then update this book. Niu Mo's is too hard to wait for.

All AI articles have been killed by the law of heaven. Please, author, stop writing messy harem articles. Just follow the example of Cangqing Sword, change the template, change the name, and many people will give you popcorn Make Cangqing Sword great again! ! ! 😭😭😭

Warthog, I won't wait for you forever.