I’m Naruto Uzumaki, and My Golden Finger Is Talk No Jutsu. That Makes Sense, Right?

I can accept the Third Hokage's issue about Naruto being isolated. At most, he knows but does nothing. Or is it because he was persuaded by Danzo, or is it because of his compromising nature to a certain extent, or some other reason? I can't accept it and say he didn't know about it. It is not a puppet Hokage, he is a real powerful Hokage, and the Jinchuuriki is the top priority. After such a long time, you say he doesn't know? The original setting of Sarutobi Hiruzen is a good man, a man who loves the village, but there are many unreasonable things, so many people like to use conspiracy theories, which darkens Sarutobi Hiruzen to a certain extent. I am not the kind of person who only accepts conspiracy theories. But I can't agree that the Third Hokage is a White Lotus. In other words, in the original work, Hiruzen Sarutobi is a good man and a man who loves the village. So, the most white level I can accept is that he is a dark person who loves the village but has little political ability.

It took almost twenty chapters to write about Uchiha Shisui's death and Uchiha Itachi's separation from his family. The key is that it is no different from the original plot. Because the protagonist Naruto is not strong enough, it affects Sasuke, and Sasuke cannot influence Uchiha Fugaku, so 20 chapters are written to write an original plot, with the protagonist inventing tennis in another world. Brother, you are too slow to warm up, right?

In the future, the protagonist's enemies will be impossible to fight and defeat, and then they still think that what the protagonist says makes sense.

Naruto has only feelings left. It's disgusting to think about the plot. Naruto started to say that Neji broke fate, and later told others that I was the child of destiny and believed me. He couldn't solve Neji's problem, so he was solved directly. Er Zhuzhu killed people from other villages. He shouted to forgive him, because he was bound by my friend, and others died in vain. The most disgusting thing is that Obito was cleared in the end. The disgusting thoughts of a typical small life.

In one sentence, it's rubbish. I want to change it, but nothing has changed. I don't know what the writing is like.

It's really a waste of time, so many chapters have been laid out, and the protagonist has done so many things, but what's the result? What has changed? Danzo is not dead, the third generation is still in peace, and Uchiha Itachi still defected. Nausea

Uchiha: We want legitimate rights, although it may require some force Shisui: Uchiha wants a coup Itachi: Selfish Uchiha Uchiha: We want other families not to be hostile to Uchiha, although it may be It takes some force Shisui: Uchiha wants a coup Itachi: Arrogant Uchiha Uchiha: The Uchiha clan wants Shisui and Itachi to go higher, so they have to get rid of Danzo, who is brainless and hostile to Uchiha. Shisui: Uchiha wants a coup Itachi: Stupid Uchiha In this book, it would be better for Shisui to copy the exact words of the clan members to the Third Generation or Itachi than to directly judge that Uchiha wants a coup 😥. Although they are planning to get together to demand rights, which in the eyes of the Third Generation is a coup, but can you, Shisui, a spy, say so directly? 😐, I think he is getting angry.

Spending so much time and chapters to write about the Uchiha genocide is wrong. It's understandable that the protagonist is involved. What's the point of writing this without any involvement? It's better to write too much in one stroke. If you really want to write group portraits, your update should be fierce (20 chapters per day), otherwise readers will only think you are a loser.

This book should not only have the mouth to escape Naruto, but also the intelligence of Jiraiya, the healthy Itachi, the simple Raikage, the determined Obito, the hand control of Nagato, twisting Kakashi's head, kicking Kai's head, controlling the mosquito Hidan, and stopping the water with all his strength. Quietly walk to Heijue, go home to Shuimen, and take an experience class. Tenshou changes head to Sasuke

I would like to make a suggestion, the most fundamental thing in writing a novel is the story. This novel is a bit self-explanatory and tells relatively few stories. Most of it is about the psychological construction of Naruto's growth. A moderate amount of psychological construction mixed in the story will make it more vivid, but a large amount of psychological construction and growth planning seems too much. Being plain doesn't mean that conflicts should be strengthened, and growth can also be explosive and exciting. All in all, the overall writing style seems too bland. It may be that the author is writing about materials that the author has pondered over. How to grow, I suggest that the story should be the main one, rather than long settings and personal opinions.