I’m Naruto Uzumaki, and My Golden Finger Is Talk No Jutsu. That Makes Sense, Right?

I can accept the Third Hokage's handling of Naruto's isolation. At most, he knew about it but did nothing. Perhaps he was persuaded by Danzo, or perhaps he compromised to some extent, or maybe there was another reason? I can't accept that he didn't know about this. He wasn't a puppet Hokage; he was a Hokage with real power, and the Jinchuriki were of paramount importance.

Nearly twenty chapters were spent on the death of Uchiha Shisui and the parting of ways between Uchiha Itachi and his clan. The key point is that it is not much different from the original plot. Because the protagonist Naruto is not strong enough, he affects Sasuke, and Sasuke cannot affect Uchiha Fugaku. So, 20 chapters are written to cover the original plot, with the protagonist inventing tennis in another world in between. Dude, you're way too slow to warm up!

From now on, the protagonist's enemies will be impossible to reason with or fight, and they'll even find the protagonist's arguments reasonable.

Naruto is only good for nostalgia now; the plot itself is disgusting upon closer inspection. Naruto starts by saying Neji broke fate, then later tells others he's the chosen one, believe me. He can't solve Neji's problem; he just gets killed. Erzhuzi killed someone from another village, and I cried out for forgiveness because he was my friend and I felt the other person had died in vain.

In short, it's garbage. They tried to change things, but ended up changing nothing. It's a complete mess.

What a waste of time! So many chapters of buildup, so much action by the protagonist, and what was the result? What changed? Danzo didn't die, the Third Hokage is still trying to smooth things over, and Itachi Uchiha still defected. Disgusting.

Uchiha: We demand our rightful rights, even if it may require some force. Shisui: The Uchiha clan is planning a coup. Itachi: The Selfish Uchiha Uchiha: We want other clans to stop being hostile towards the Uchiha, even if it might require some force. Shisui: The Uchiha clan is planning a coup. Itachi: The Arrogant Uchiha

Spending so much time writing chapters about the Uchiha clan massacre is misdirected. It's understandable if the protagonist is involved, but what's the point of writing about it if the protagonist isn't involved at all? It would be better to gloss over it. If you really want to write about an ensemble cast, you need to update more frequently (20 chapters a day), otherwise readers will just think you're padding your posts.

This book should include more than just Naruto's talk-no-jutsu; it should also include Jiraiya with information, a healthy Itachi, a Raikage with a doujinshi, a determined Obito, Nagato with his bare hands, Kakashi with his head-twisting ability, Guy with his head-kicking ability, Hidan with his mosquito-like abilities, and Shisui at full power.

Here's a suggestion: the most fundamental element of writing a novel is the story. This novel feels a bit self-indulgent, with relatively little actual storytelling. It focuses mostly on Naruto's psychological development during his growth. A moderate amount of psychological development interspersed within the story would make it more engaging, but the excessive focus on psychological development…