One Piece: The Seventh Hokage, Naruto Uzumaki, Has Arrived!

Too much preaching, the entire pirate style has changed

Too much preaching indeed. A lot of stuff.

The biggest problem with this book is that it preaches too much, which is not necessary at all. It is wrong to say so many Chinese-style practice concepts. Sometimes it can be understood if it is not right. If you go to the United States to promote the Chinese model of security management, it can raise the security of the United States by ten levels. But is it useful? It is useless. Every nation, country, culture, and world has its own characteristics. Who do you write so many theories for? For the readers, wouldn't it be better for us to read the Book of Changes? The world of pirates They are some illiterate people. There are not many who can write and read. Human life is really worthless. This is their value and the value of that era. You said that so many ideas are like teaching migrant workers to do scientific research. It is awkward no matter how you look at it. What the protagonist needs is a companion with great wisdom and then show his own practice philosophy. There are many great wisdom in Pirates. I am afraid that only one is the doctor who is five hundred years ahead of the world, and half is the dragon. There is no protagonist who practices the wealth couple.

I started serializing this Pirates fanfic a few days ago, and the current update number is 20,000 words... The number of saved manuscripts is zero!

Is the Seventh Generation still following the pirate ship? Idiot Naruto is pretty much the same. The Seventh Generation can defeat the Yonko plus three generals and all kinds of miscellaneous fish with one hand. Two Yonkos can't sink an island even if they fight for a long time. Naruto is just a tailed beast.

Ever since the Nikka fruit came out, I've been feeling disgusted by Luffy.

To avoid the pitfalls of not liking this type, state the type in advance. And... Because it is a retro genre, the reader base is inherently smaller than other genres. If there are still people who are willing to watch the flow of boats, I hope that some data can be supported. If the collection is low and the support rate is also low, the book may be completely out of date. The above, I hope it can be explained clearly.

Come on, author, the article is beautiful!

What's going on? It's getting boring. If I had known it would be so disgusting after it was released, I wouldn't have ordered it. Wow!

Brother author, you have to change. In the beginning, your monthly ticket scores were good not because of your good writing but because of your good subject matter. Aren't you looking for death by following the boat? Readers pay to watch you and the boat? Who cares about the lives of Luffy and others? It's to see how your Uzumaki Naruto made waves among the pirates.