The Heirloom Simulator, the Princesses Are All Broken

So far the plot has developed at a good pace, transitions are smooth, and the foreshadowing is clever and the writing is remarkable. The theme is clear, the positioning of the book is clear, and the content is not deviated or the text is inconsistent with the topic. The characterization is very vivid and can leave a deep impression on the readers. Online simulators are also a relatively new development. The protagonist is neither stupid nor a virgin, and the intensity and scale of the interaction and confrontation between the heroines are also well grasped. The cause and effect of the development of the harem's relationships are clear and foreshadowed in advance. The plot of the dungeon is evenly distributed among the heroines and the main storyline of seizing the heir. At present, it is a high-quality online light novel with a relaxed and stress-free writing style and no poisonous points (maybe because of my high defense). The author is very strong. At the same time, I also hope that after the huge plot and world view are developed in the later stage, I can have the precise control of each plot and character now. Looking forward to the following stories, please come on, author✌️

I feel like the setting is pretty good, but it's too watery. I have to watch it twice every time. The protagonist does one thing twice.

To put it bluntly, this work is clearly based on the premise setting and core plot structure of the original large-scale intellectual game. It has the potential to be a masterpiece, but it is dominated by the harem element style of the main female and male characters who are obsessed with love in the female channel (or male channel), as well as the Xiaobai Shuangwen-style system plug-in reward feedback level, and the life-size protagonist of Marisu. Ruined by failed creation The genre elements of the two series are fundamentally difficult to coexist. The first chapter was still in the novice village and it was still in the first iteration. It was okay to say that, but later when characters such as King Yan appeared on the stage to carry out the original multi-player and multi-simulator battle of wits surrounding world politics and secrets, the styles became obviously separated. The previous light novel cool romance novels with clueless heroines and plot difficulties simply couldn't keep up. The protagonist either relied on the extravagantly set plug-in level reward feedback to immediately upgrade (basically guaranteed to crash), or he had to start passively breaking the game (not An Yi Xiaobai's cool novel writing method) - he wanted to woo the mainstream popular popular novel market but also wanted to try to develop and perform some very impressive genre routines. The result was that it was a thankless task to offend both sides. As a plot and wit-fighting object with a higher writing quality, the selling point of the harem light novel is the otaku writing style, which lowers the overall style and logical rigor. As a more vulgar and entertaining simulator-style male harem novel, it is not happy because of the basic multi-player online simulation game wit-fighting plot structure. As an old bookworm, I naturally hope that works with such potential can be written and explored in a more hard-core direction. However, the toxicity of the charming writing method that has to cater to the market, the author's creative intention, market positioning and lack of ideological refinement make this impossible. Being so ambiguous and wanting to take it all, using this kind of selling point ruined the underlying plot structure (and hurt the selling point), and the result is that the basic market positioning is not taken into account and the popularity is low Of course, first of all, the author's writing power displayed under this framework is fundamentally insufficient. He knew from the beginning that he would not go far. The ambition was too great, but there were too many settings and developments that were not well thought out from the beginning - many readers have long raised hidden dangers. Well, this is just easy to see. If you analyze it in the direction of a complex intellectual battle in a public knowledge game that intersperses reality and simulators, the troublesome flaws caused by the setting and some writable points that were wasted by the author's poor execution due to both setting and writing problems In fact, without even letting all the problems mentioned above really come into play, the plot has already developed into a dead end and gone wild

[Brief Review] A fictional historical article, a simulator flow, and an imaginary article. After obtaining the system, Luo Qing'an simulated the Nine Phoenixes to seize the heir, but unexpectedly it was an online mode, and the nine princesses competed for it... When Luo Qing'an learned about the connection, he had more room for manipulation of the remaining princesses... The author has a lot of imagination and used the simulator element to play new tricks. At the same time, the rhythm control is also very suitable, and the plot advancement is also in line with the characters. It is an excellent simulator novel. [Work Information] Book Title: Seizing the Inheritance Simulator, the Princesses Are Broken Author: Bai Shiyi, Type: Light Novel-Original Fantasy Tag: Love, Relaxation Status: Serialized (160,000 words) [Recommendation Index] ★★★★☆ [Reason for Recommendation] This is Daqing, which does not belong to any dynasty. The emperor is seriously ill, but he has no children, only nine daughters. The emperor named each of the nine of them kings, and the Nine Phoenixes began to fight for their heirs. Luo Qing'an became the first person in the Imperial Academy. After learning about the royal affairs, he was about to return to his hometown and stay away from the capital, a place of right and wrong. However, he was suddenly bound to the simulator and forced to become a minister of Congfeng. After understanding the personalities of the nine princesses in the simulator and simulating various situations, Luo Qingan was confident and ready to go out. I didn't expect that the simulator is actually in online mode! Luo Qing'an's performance in the simulator shocked the princesses, and they all fought for Luo Qing'an. Nine phoenixes seize the throne? (×) Nine Phoenixes capture Luo! (√) Similar Recommendation Fire Cave "I Really Don't Want to Be Empress Sims" {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

It's chapter fifty-two, and reality has not moved a step, and there is no development at all. Do you want the protagonist to simulate it in the room until the finale?

Guan Guan is a real person. When he talks about seedlings, they are indeed young.

Even if the writing is to your liking, it is recommended to block it directly. Yes, the author relies on his achievements to make a living, but the author who cuts everything from the beginning is not worthy of trust.

Those who voted for eunuchs, I will laugh at you forever.

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Damn it, I actually voted for the eunuch and lost money.

Newcomers and new books, please support Don't keep new books, this is about whether the book can see the sun of tomorrow, thank you all!

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Why is this book so familiar? There seems to be a book about the Six Kingdoms before.

A silent eunuch cannot give birth to a child of his own, and the one his wife actually gives birth to is not his own.

I'm here for Daily Poison. Anyone who has watched it can tell me if it's good to watch. The synopsis is similar to the one I've seen before. It seems like it's called "Don't Want to Be Empress Sims" or something?

I originally thought it was a new book with great potential, but it turned out to be a eunuch, and my monthly vote was in vain.

Because the previous writing is really good and I like it very much, I would like to complain a few words here. The character of King Yan is too out of place. It doesn't have the same style at all from the beginning. You wrote this King of Yan and the whole book went astray. How to write the other princes later? Are you going to continue this serious power struggle? Then it is estimated that all the people who read this book will be gone now. Doesn't the author know what the readers want to see? Now I feel like the character of King Yan is riding a tiger, and if I fail to write it, it will bring down the entire book. Once I finish writing it, it will block the road ahead. My opinion is that King Yan should not have appeared at this stage. It will be easier to control and more reasonable when the story is unfolded in the later stages. What's more, for now, the author's portrayal of the character of King Yan is obviously not very good, as can be seen from the evaluation of King Yan in the comment area. The author should think about it for himself

I wrote it as a clown for the King of Qin. He can step on anyone. He is a pure clown.

It would be much easier to write without being online, as being online can affect the whole body, and there are too many things to consider. There are nine queens plus one hidden one, which makes it ten now. Especially writing about the dual personality of King Yan makes it even more difficult. It would probably be better if I didn't write one by one online, decrypt the puzzles one by one, and take the initiative to attack the male protagonist one by one according to the changes in reality, and the protagonist has to simulate everything in order to do it.

No, as I said before, the online thing is novel, but there is no way to write about it later, and if one person starts the game, everyone will passively participate in the plot. What's more, everyone knows that the opponent has a simulator, and they will write themselves to death.

Son of a bitch. I subscribed to Real Eunuch in vain

It's almost finished, and although the protagonist is awesome in the simulation, he's useless in reality.

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