Wait a Minute, Where Is My Master?

After reading it, you can read it. It's not poisonous, but it's not as crooked as the title and the beginning. This book is a copy of Li Chu from the beginning, and the character settings are very similar. It is indeed not a replica later. But it was a bit funny at the beginning, but in the middle it became serious and invincible. The process itself was no longer funny. Only small details such as Xiaobai eating, fish cooking, and fountains were interspersed to show the comedy, but after watching it so many times, I got tired of it without new tricks. The main problem with this book is that it has no climax. It is indeed not easy to write a climax in Invincible flow. After all, we all know that the protagonist can solve the problem with a wave of his hand, but it is impossible for readers to endure reading without a climax just because they know this. It's one thing for readers to understand, but it's another thing if there's really no climax. One solution is to let the villain create a big conspiracy and let the protagonist handle it when almost everything is ready. This is how "I Can't Be the Sword God" and "Ask the Young Master to Kill the Demon" are played. But in fact, "Ask the Young Master to Slay Demons" is also quite outrageous. In order to allow the villain to build a game, the villain will succeed in sneak attacks almost every time before he misses in the end. Being decent is the same as being undefended. However, this book is not originally an invincible style, but the way the villain builds the game is the same as his first invincible style, but the techniques are not as good as the first one. But at least the many funny plots kept readers interested. Therefore, many invincible articles are written in a funny style, just to counteract the boredom of not having a climax. But this novel started to stop being funny in the middle and then became bland. Another way of writing is the warm flow of "I Didn't Want to Become an Immortal". Although there is no climax and no comedy, the whole book has a healing and warm atmosphere, and the Three Flower Empress is so adorable that the reader is so cute. So in fact, regardless of whether it is funny or heart-warming, the main character, Invincible, cannot bring the atmosphere, so he has to rely on the supporting characters to create the atmosphere. For example, "The Counterattack System Only in the Mahayana Period" relies on the iron triangle of comedy to eliminate the boredom caused by invincibility. However, the supporting characters cannot take over the main role. There is too much foreshadowing and no role for the protagonist, making it uninteresting to read. It is easy for me to say this, but I certainly cannot write it myself. It is just my one-sided experience as a reader. This is a readable novel as a whole, which makes people doubt that they are new readers. There are ups and downs, foreshadowing and a main line. It is not a running account like some rubbish writers. But the main text volume is a bit watery at the beginning. According to the author, there is too much foreshadowing. Anyway, the pace is very slow. Later on, the pace picked up again, but from time to time there would be long stretches of dialogue that lasted for several chapters. For example, to wake up the willow tree, I wrote 6 chapters just for the preparation, and the final awakening took a total of more than ten chapters. Others have finished writing so many chapters in a battle, but they are just about waking up the willow tree in daily life. The content is basically dialogues. Many of the dialogues are not the kind of explaining things clearly. They are just misunderstandings by one person. To be honest, if you want to write a good book, write more about how to do it. Don't imitate some well-known authors in describing scenes and making dialogues. There is a very famous author who has many best-selling books. Every time he writes a chapter, he first writes three pages of weather and environment to symbolize it, then four pages of dialogue with passers-by (such as guards and farmers mowing grass) to heighten the atmosphere. Then, he writes three pages of off-topic conversations about the character's entrance fee. One chapter is thirteen pages, and ten pages have not yet reached the topic. In the last three pages, the dialogue finally enters the topic, and then breaks off. The next chapter has thirteen pages of dialogue on the theme of chariots. The next chapter has not yet finished, so I will write three chapters of dialogue, and then change the scene and do it all over again. I won't fall for this bad habit anyway. If the author himself could get the same 100,000 average subscription from this famous author with the same level of writing as this famous author (a novel with more than 6 million words feels like it will be over 1 million words after being squeezed out), I don't think I can say anything. Anyway, the author has made a lot of money.

In fact, it is best to set the protagonists of similar invincible genres as psychopaths. If the protagonist is too serious and rational. I usually finish the plot very quickly. I think this is the case for several invincible streams. It died violently as soon as it was released. Instead, the protagonist was either a fun person or a psychopath. I can write a little longer. And when encountering something unreasonable, they would say that the protagonist is mentally ill, but everything he does is reasonable. There is no need to worry about logic issues so much, and you can focus more on the excitement of the plot.

Family members, take a look

I haven't encountered such a well-written invincible novel in a long time. It is natural but not artificial, humorous but not vulgar. The use of allusions is just right, and the writing is extremely smooth. Even if it occasionally downgrades the characters, it can be easily accepted. It also conceals the anger very well. I highly recommend it.

Wait a minute, where is my husband, wait a minute🤭🤭🤭

There are fishermen everywhere, and you have to throw a fishing rod when you cross the Naihe Bridge, right?

Based on my nearly 20 years of reading experience, this is definitely a good book, but how come so few people have read it? Finding this book from the daily guide is basically the same as picking up a treasure in the trash can. I am not very capable, and I can only vote for a few monthly votes to encourage it.

Is there no heroine? I just saw a comment saying there is no heroine, and my interest was instantly halved. I just saw Xia Caught Up. Three women were caught by the protagonist, and two of them followed him. The previous descriptions of them clearly have a good impression of the protagonist, especially Yu Yaoer. I thought we would be together in the future, but the author made it clear that he was afraid of not being able to write well, so he didn't have a female protagonist. In fact, he just wrote daily stories about cultivating immortals. I feel that the current viewing experience is quite good. In the end, it will be natural for them to be together, and there is no need to write any impressive emotional plot. I am not satisfied with being just a tool from beginning to end. I have been cultivating immortals day and night for countless years and have been with you for a long time. As long as I am a human being, who can be ruthless? I am more emotional and don't like to force the novel to have no female protagonist. I hope that the author will not force the protagonist to be a eunuch. It would be better if the emotional affairs take place naturally. Fortunately, the author told me in advance that I should brake in time. Otherwise, if I was looking forward to it at the front but was disappointed at the back, I would probably die of discomfort.

Wait, where is my husband? ? ?

Isn't this book very interesting? Why are so few people reading it?

For this topic, I should save it first, read it slowly, and reminisce about my husband's music and videos later.

Can anyone tell me whether this book is serious or not? , Seriously I won't watch it.

Is there no heroine? Will there be a love line?

Good food and fodder, it is a pity that there are so few people. I hope the author perseveres and it will eventually pay off.

The protagonist's attack methods include thunder and fire. When will he get a sword again?

Is there a female protagonist? ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

I finished reading it in a week, great book

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I think the writing is quite good. Why do I still have 56 updates after I come back after two or three hours?

Don't start a fight, the Invincible flow basically follows this routine. I have read both books and the plots are different.

Additional refinement

Whose vest is the author? ? ? I just read the free chapter. The writing and plot are good. I haven't seen the paid chapter yet and I'm not sure whether it's watery or not. I hope I can order all of it.

It's really good. I really like this style. Good review.

Not much else to say, it looks good, just watch it and that's it. It's a pity that it wasn't recommended, otherwise I shouldn't have achieved this result.

I thought about keeping it for a while, but it turned out to be finished, and it doesn't seem to be unfinished, so I'm going to read it and enjoy it 🙂 The previous writing is quite exciting, please come on, author, I look forward to your next book

NB I've finished this book. Let me be healthy😃😃😃

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Why can't I join the group? The author should give it a try.