Secret: the Story Hidden Under Fate

I don't know that the setting of the plot is superfluous. Later, I have to deal with the original plot and the word count of reading the diary. The protagonist himself doesn't have much of a plot, and it feels like he can't do anything new except to gain popularity, common sense, and reactions from the original character. If you follow the original work everywhere, then you don't know what the meaning of the plot is?

Audience, can you do anything better than Adam? Adam must recycle his characteristics when he becomes a god. He will definitely recycle them in Sequence Two. Without a backer, he will be a demigod. Even if he has a backer, it will not be easy for the audience to become an angel.

It is written that the audience will end up in the palace.

The writing is so boring. Even if you don't know what you are doing, it would be good to invest in some industry to make more money. Why should you write psychological descriptions every day? Xiaoke doesn't have as many inner dramas as you do. It's pretentious.

The author has more than 140 chapters that have not yet been released. The problem should be that it is too protagonist-centered. In order to allow the protagonist to psychologically integrate into the world, there is an anchor, which completely stops the plot and writes a lot of side plots, but this is putting the cart before the horse. This is a fan community. You don't need to talk about the world view anymore. The plot is more important. Don't write too much about psychology.

The relationship with Audrey is quite inexplicable. We can't see each other more than three or four times a month and they become mutual⚓

After reading Chapter 80, I didn't accomplish anything I really wanted to do, and then I lived in guilt and self-blame? You wouldn't dare to write such a cruel article, right?

This book has very little plot and a lot of psychological descriptions, and these psychological descriptions are repeated many times with slightly different vocabulary. To put it simply, it is as empty as a middle school essay. If you use a mature online writer, the number of words can be reduced by 1/3, and if you use a physical writer, the number of words can be 1/10. It can be written clearly and even more cruelly. If it were not written by AI, there should be improvements in the more than 100 chapters, but I haven't seen it yet. I hope the author can jump out and slap me in the face, because it's really tiring to watch this. Last like is free

It's pretty good, but it's not time to make money, otherwise you won't be able to afford potion ingredients.

Why doesn't the author write original works? Basically, it can be read later as a mystery 😅

I skipped the movie because I didn't know the plot, because it reminded me of the mystery of the original novel and I didn't want to watch it anymore.

You can't avoid Adam when writing about the audience. People's layout for centuries can make it easy for you to pick peaches.

Another novel about wanting to return to reality and screw in screws

Sometimes it's Grayling, and sometimes it's Grayling. The name of the protagonist can be wrong, and it slips away.

The main character has no shining point, and no one will read the main story about abuse.

The author is a bit active, it must be said.

I don't know the plot and it's hard to handle the plot.