Mystery: the White Tower

The writing is okay, but there is almost no excitement. On the contrary, it is a bit inferior to Battle Force and The Riddler. Goldfinger has not written clearly for dozens of chapters. Those with good scores, such as Reader, Paradox, Black Emperor, Silver Key, and Gherroth, generally introduce a little bit about the origin and function of the cheat in the first few chapters, giving readers space to make up their minds, and then show some of the functions of the cheat to retain some readers. The effect of the cheat on the plot is one of the main sources of excitement. But you have been hiding it for dozens of chapters, and you don't know what you are hiding. You have to figure it out first. If you don't have a fan base, don't do the literary youth's trick of foreshadowing, because if you dig some big holes as the Riddler in the early stage and drive away the readers, you may not be able to write the rest at all, and the digging will be in vain. The first task is to write down the exciting points first, reveal some cheat functions, attract the readers' interest, and allow the readers to have space for brainstorming. First, retain the readers. Only with a certain foundation can you be qualified to dig into the literary and youth writing methods and bury the pen. But your current plot is too flat. I basically didn't remember it after reading dozens of chapters. The role of the protagonist's plug-in and the proportion of the plot are too low, so I just mentioned it. I don't think there is any space in my mind to make up for it, and I have no interest in reading it. If I write it in this way, I may be tempted.

The following is the full text of the guide for pit removal and lightning protection summarized by the author himself. It is recommended that new readers read it before reading the article. Considering that time is precious for new readers and the pace of this article is relatively slow, it would be uncomfortable to waste a lot of time reading works that are not to your liking, so the author took the initiative to conduct a wave of demining. First answer a few questions that may be of more concern. Q1:Is the protagonist dead? Why not show the essence and function of the plug-in early? A: Of course there is a problem. Everyone must have expected that the protagonist will become his old self in the end, and it is basically impossible for those who have not died to become his old self in the short term. The reason why cheats account for a very low proportion in the early and mid-term is as follows: 1) The cheats are related to the protagonist's personal line and are also related to some decryptions in the plot, which are not suitable for early disclosure. 2) My original intention in writing is to prevent the protagonist from inserting too abruptly into the plot of the original work. If the plug-in is too strong, it will be easy for me to overwhelm the protagonist. I still hope that the full text will be as close to the style of the original work as possible. Q2: What is the main line? A: The main plot will be revealed when the protagonist arrives in Backlund, and the hidden main plot (including plug-ins) will also be gradually revealed as the plot progresses (related to the protagonist's experience when he first time traveled). Q3: When will you enter the original timeline & tarot club? A: About 45 chapters Q4: Why do you try so hard to suppress your combat power? A: I don't think it's a battle power. . . Readers up to Sequence 7 are truly incompetent in combat and are at the bottom of the pile. The protagonist only lost a little bit in the early encounters, and soon started to win other Sequence 7s. I even felt that I had added too much combat power to the protagonist (scratching my head). When I was promoted to Sequence 6 and became a master of ability collection, I thought it would be difficult to suppress the combat power Next is the text of the poison test 1. Theme This article is a fan novel based on the original work of "Lord of Mysteries". I will try my best to take care of non-original readers and light original readers (for example, concisely retelling some important settings in the original work), but this article is indeed more suitable for readers who have a certain reading foundation of the original work and love the original story. If you are only interested in the potion system and have little interest in the plot and characters of the original work. When reading other works, you pay more attention to the fun and combat, and are relatively less concerned about the interaction and growth of the characters, then this article may have a hard time matching your brainwaves. The protagonist takes the Reader/White Tower path. There will be original scenes about the past and the path later on, but the main scenes are still on this path. 2. Plot direction The protagonist is the same gray fog roommate as Klein. He is a pseudo-traveler who has never read the original work. He does not have a significant information gap advantage. He is not a nanny and will not laugh at Klein's acting. I will join the Tarot Club when it is established. I will become friends with Klein but will not be bound for the whole process. I will gradually intervene in the original timeline as a friend. The protagonist will have an independent personal line and strongly related original supporting characters. The author will try his best to allocate the plot proportions so that the original characters can fully appear, and at the same time, the protagonist's related character stories can be fully unfolded. The reason why I chose this perspective Firstly, everyone must have read a lot of Cheliu fans. Due to the perspective of the original work, my room for development will be relatively limited, and many plots and characters will be difficult to develop. Secondly, every author who is willing to create a story probably has some ego in him. I really hope to tell an independent and complete story, rather than letting the protagonist purely become the camera and modifier of the original plot. The reason why I followed the original timeline without opening the game is because the original timeline is too tightly arranged, and it is difficult for me to have room to add more plots (can the squid give the fan author a way to survive) 3. Possible poisonous points 1) The protagonist of this article will not rely on plug-ins to kill everyone, there will be no bombing of cool points, and there will be no intensive high-energy laughs. You can probably tell from my writing style that I am not an author who is good at writing exciting, conflicting, and dramatic stories. There are too many authors who are good at this type of writing in the Mysterious Fandom alone, and I would never have written about them (laughing). 2) The perspective of other characters will be switched, but the protagonist does not have the high-information clairvoyance ability throughout the whole process. Occasionally he will be kept in the dark, and occasionally the villain will have the upper hand or win a game first. In the early and middle stages, the protagonist himself knows little about cheats. 3) There is no CP, no emotional line, and no harem in this article. There are original important supporting characters, and important characters from the original work will become the protagonist's friends. The author's original intention of writing is pure friendship. If you think of other emotions, it means that the author's definition of friendship has deviated. It is too heavy-handed. You can interpret it yourself. But from the plot itself, it does not involve falling in love or collecting. 4) The plot direction in the middle and later stages may change significantly from the original work. This part has not yet been completely determined (for example, the resurrection of Trunsoest, etc., But because it is related to Russell, I have not thought about it) 4. There may be a head-to-head confrontation with the author. Readers of Denpa 1) Readers who want to see fan fiction that is close to the style of the original work 2) Readers who want to see the world of the original work further expanded, with countries, forces and characters with less roles getting more opportunities to appear, important supporting characters in the original work becoming stronger faster, and more plots. 3) Readers who hope to see the original story become as complete as possible without destroying the logic. 4) Readers who hope to see the "Reader/White Tower" path. 5. The author's aesthetic orientation. The author believes that he has no taste for abuse, literary youth, or editorial output. If the final writing produced this impression, on the one hand, it may be that the author's understanding is biased, and he did not start lightly or heavily, and did a good job in balance. On the other hand, it may be that the writing power is not enough at the same time, and there are problems in character interaction, plot advancement and narrative rhythm. It fails to create a wonderful feeling and mobilize everyone's emotions without using plug-ins, slaps in the face, and a lot of fun. This is indeed the author's first work, and there must be many shortcomings. I hope you will understand. My personal fan reading tastes tend to be in the style of "The Pacifist Necromancer of Hogwarts" and "Mystery: The Good Witch", so the narrative style will be closer to this (just an example, not trying to reach high standards). As for original works, my favorite ones are "Lord of Mysteries", "Kingdom Bloodline" and "Saint". The above is the full text of the drug test and demining. I will slowly collect your feedback and fill it in later (but I also hope that everyone can show mercy and take care of the glass-hearted author...). I hope everyone can have a pleasant reading experience, thank you.

(As of Chapter 30, minor spoilers are involved!!) Summary: A weird novel with potential without being toxic. The writing is good. The protagonist is a senior police officer in Lundberg. The reader is in sequence seven. The plot starts from the protagonist picking up and chatting with the thief in the waiting room. It is quite interesting. Later, he encounters Daniz and solves the mysterious incident. The world view and the character's image are gradually unfolded smoothly. However, reading requires a certain threshold. At least you have to be gentle to read smoothly. So far, the plug-in has a weak sense of existence and a sense of mystery. The original characters can be restored to a good degree, and there is no sense of violation after a rough reading. It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding of occultism and has his own ingenuity. The plot is relatively bland and the pacing is a bit slow, which is not a problem. I will write better and better in the later stages, just to narrow down some audiences. Come on, author, but I personally hope to follow less of the original work and more of originality. At least half of the mysterious fanfic is based on traffic, which almost makes me vomit. Of course, my suggestions are for reference only, everything is based on the quality of the work.

I didn't want to comment at first, but now most of the fan fiction is all over the place, without the atmosphere of the original work at all, so it would be good if the protagonist's quirk is a little weaker, at least it's not that dramatic. The pace can indeed be faster, so hurry up and enter the original timeline. But so far it's pretty interesting.

What's the point of being so hung up, and what's the point of improving the sequence so high? Not every novel has to reach the old days. Xiaoke's hang-up is outrageous enough. If you still want to surpass him, can you still read the novel? Not every well-written protagonist has to be awesome. That's called pretending to be awesome. I have always believed that the role of a protagonist is to open up everyone's affairs step by step, pass by and meet them, open up the world view, no He can take care of everything. He is just an ordinary person. Let me emphasize again that the protagonist does not have to be awesome. It is meaningless. You can show things that have not been written before. It would be more interesting. There is nothing wrong with the author writing according to his own ideas. What he writes has his own ideas. The only thing I'm a little depressed about is that there are so few updates. All in all, I don't feel there's anything wrong with what the author wrote.

He was able to insist on writing more than 100,000 words before signing the contract, and even wrote a drug testing guide for himself. It can be seen that the author is really attentive. The narrative style is excellent and the setting information is detailed. When I failed to pass the cross, I saw that you signed the contract successfully, so I kept writing until it was signed. I will contribute and subscribe when it is released. Wish you success

To be honest, it's a bit aimless. The first few chapters are a bit promising, but it's okay. The further you go, the less mainline there is. The reader doesn't know what the protagonist is going to do. The protagonist doesn't know the background. The target doesn't know. The enemy doesn't know. I don't know what Goldfinger is. I have no desire to read on.

I finally found a reader with a starting sequence of 7. Could you please remove the eunuch and update it twice a day (the more the better)

I've also read some of the Mystery fandoms, and I quite like the perspective of this one. The protagonist is not forced to be Xiaoke's nanny, but interacts more with some supporting characters in the original work, which is quite vividly written. The first few chapters were a little dry, but I quite liked the character of the main character. It's just that it's not obvious yet that he is a classic time traveler, and he has no desire to go home—could this be a foreshadowing later?

The writing is good, there are no problems, and the character of the protagonist is also good For me, the part where Eliza quarreled with her sister and her sister quarreled with the protagonist was a little off-putting to me.

I think the current plot of this book is very good. I didn't expect the connections with various forces in the original book. There is also a certain connection with the progress of the events. I look forward to the progress of the plot. Some book reviews are a bit extreme, but I think this book still has the flavor of the original. But the main thing is keep writing Don't interrupt updates, don't be eunuchs😳

I saw the latest chapter. It's very interesting. I like the author's writing style very much. The fact that it's a little more group portrait also makes me happy. Come on, I will always support you. The works will definitely get better and better!

Look at the people in Jiyue The squid stood there like a Buddha Those who eat chicken blood are almost slapped to death by 🐔Tianzun Look again🦑, there are all people who paid the down payment with the help of their colleagues md squid is still too kind

It's well written, but it's too slow. I feel haggard waiting for it every day.

Afraid that Shennong's reply would be buried, I moved out from the building above the building and checked it out. The source is Chapter 24-25

Anyway, it's still 0.5🤓🤓

In fact, you can appropriately add some back-up plans and calculations prepared by the gods before the end of the world. This is a small suggestion, you can consider it.

I declare that among all the mysterious fanfics, including all completed and serialized ones, this one can be ranked in the top five for its narrative and rhythm! You may not be able to tell much about the plot for the time being, but judging from the writing skills, I would call it the most promising mystery fanfic in the past year or two.

Which Klein character card is suitable? What do you think?

Come on, come on, I hope it doesn't stop

I would like to emphasize again, before this plot, I think the author's writing is very good, the characters are well-shaped and there is no occ, it is very mysterious and the style of the original work, but here I stick to my point of view, the feelings of the author and the readers The feeling is misplaced, and I don't think deleting comments is a useful thing. I remember that another comment posted by a reader has also disappeared. The original sentence should be "What is the difference between the protagonist and the stinky area now?" Such comments should not be offensive enough to be deleted, right?

You write well, one of the rare mysterious fans with their own temperament. Come on, I hope the update will be faster.

The rhythm is relatively close to the parts without major plot points in the early and middle stages of the original work. As shown by the author's lightning protection, it is basically unexciting and slightly bland. It is more suitable for the anchor's plot and setting.

I said that I can wait until the protagonist's sequence 6 to kill Qilingos. I don't want to die, but I just want to see some fighting. The protagonist has never had a good fight except when he met Da Nizi at the beginning.

The setting where the protagonist suddenly falls into coma is very strange.

I just read the first dozen chapters. At present, it seems that the protagonist is a person who will suddenly fall into coma at any time, which is impossible to prevent and unpredictable. And the frequency of coma is not low, once in a day or two. Living in a familiar environment, you have to be careful to avoid falling or knocking yourself to death. How can such a person dare to go abroad to perform a mission alone? The risk of falling unconscious in front of strangers and losing your belongings is already the smallest, and the probability of never waking up again is not too small. If you become unconscious while tracking, escaping, or fighting, there is a great possibility of losing your freedom or life. The protagonist is always extraordinary and may have personal difficulties beyond common sense. He has to take this risk. This is a foreshadowing. But how could his boss and colleagues agree to this? Don't you care about his life or death, nor do you care about the mission being exposed? If he is used as an abandoned child to build a nest, and he is allowed to come into contact with the local people, is it because he is afraid that the bait is not good enough? Moreover, letting such a person with obvious flaws be used as bait is not something that anyone with normal thinking can do. Anyway, I can't imagine the logic that might exist in this matter. Maybe the author ignored logic for the sake of plot, maybe it was logic that was beyond my ability to imagine.

Will the protagonist switch paths in the future? If so, would you recommend the Demon of Knowledge or the Outer God path?

It's good to read, but there's so little. I finished it in one morning.

Why do pseudo-traveler fandoms have original paths? Is it God's will?

Am I the Crimson King? After reading Chapter 20, why do I only see an introduction to the protagonist's background in the introduction, and there is also a time traveler in the introduction? I laughed out loud when I met Leonard and guessed he had a secret. If you don't want to give the protagonist so much information, why don't you give him the identity of the time traveler?