Immortal Immortality, I Can Travel to the Next 30,000 Years

How does a poor protagonist who has no Qi training get so many people's attention? Childish.

The details of character creation in this book are really poor. Take the two devils who hang around in front of the male protagonist all day long and don't even know that he has become an immortal. Secondly, the heroine Su Mumu is simply nonsense. In a world where the jungle is strong and the jungle is strong, a chivalrous woman who fights against injustice appears? It's like looking for a lantern in the toilet and looking for death. The most ridiculous thing is that he treats the male protagonist inexplicably and gives him spiritual stones. In fact, this book can be taken slowly...

Shennong tested poison. Another book that sells dog meat in sheep's clothing under the guise of stability. For example, before, the protagonist knew that a big crisis was about to happen in the Moon Worshiping Sect, but the protagonist refused to run away, and insisted on escaping under the eyes of more than a dozen foundation builders. The reason given was also ridiculous, saying that there were pirates on the way and the protagonist did not dare to run. Since Wang Wu and Zhang Wancheng, who were weaker than the protagonist, both ran away, why couldn't the protagonist escape? Also, the protagonist knows that everyone in the Three Kingdoms will die in a few months, so why doesn't he think of a way to give Liu Yu the talisman that conceals Qi and blood? The protagonist ran over and actively provoked the Wu family, and even disguised himself to kill the young master of the Wu family. The most interesting thing is that the masters sent by the Wu family did not go after the Liu family, nor did they go after the protagonist's identity after the disguise. Instead, they went after the protagonist who just said congratulations to the Liu family. Emotions were used to promote the plot, and no logic was needed. It feels like reading retro literature. Nowadays, readers like to read novels with protagonists who are obscenely developed, instead of the protagonists who are obviously very weak, but act like they are brainless, provoking powerful enemies everywhere, hiding when being hunted, and then fighting back at the extreme limit.

It puts too much pressure on the protagonist, making it too frustrating to watch, and it doesn't reflect the excitement of traveling through time and changing the course of the world. Don't say that the protagonist is weak, but his skills are not weak. The protagonist has traveled through time, but the people in his original timeline are still there. As long as the protagonist is not too unlucky, the first time he travels through time can greatly affect the course of the world. However, after traveling through time many times, it has no impact at all. Moreover, in extremely dangerous situations, he has the ability to just leave without leaving, and he acts like a tortoise, which is insane.

The heroine's impression plummeted as soon as she appeared The heroine is willing to spend money on the protagonist. The protagonist must show off that he is rich. Is this abnormal? I still feel like a piece of spiritual stone is sprinkled with water No wonder so many people in the comment area say that the protagonist is suppressed for no reason and is stupid and hopeless.

Gou? Where to go? I knew the Forgetting Moon Sect was gone, but I had to watch it, just for fun, the protagonist was looking for trouble, 6666

It's a bit poisonous. Traveling for 30,000 years is not a big deal, but you can directly pretend to be the ancestor. So in your original world where the weak and the strong preyed on the strong, shouldn't you just get up and grow quickly?

There's a reason no one is watching. The writing is indeed not good. I suggest you read more good writing by others. I have read all similar novels and this one is the worst. Similar novels no longer have the aura of being mentally retarded. What age is this? Aura of mental retardation? Can such a mentally retarded person live to be 18 years old? There is a limit to mental retardation, right?

I didn't see where it was going, Xiaobai's article… it didn't make sense.

I suggest you cut it and reopen it, right? Polish some of the plots. In particular, don't show up where someone saw this person or the protagonist. He exclaimed: "It's amazing. What's going on and so on? It's so stupid, really."

The author may be very young and may have some logic problems. Please encourage me. I didn't spend a penny, so don't push me. I wish the author will write better and better.

Overall it's pretty good, but some details aren't very good, and the settings are pretty good too. In short, it's barely good enough.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter

The first few chapters are a bit interesting, but in chapters 6-7 some dialogues that forcibly subdue one's wits begin to appear, leaving the reader speechless.

It was fine in the front, but now I see that there is no clue at all in the back, it's a mess

The author's diploma is not high, he probably only graduated from elementary school, and his writing skills are very poor. Mentally immature, like a child who will never grow up, summing up the mentally immature greasy and decadent youth who dropped out of school to work at a young age.

The idea is good, but it makes people read it.