First of All, I Don't Have Cyberpsychosis

I was looking forward to seeing Cthulhu➕Cyberpunk, and the writing is also good. However, after reading a few pages, the system and tasks... Were too homogeneous and boring. Cthulhu and Cyberpunk are originally negative worldviews. They like to see the protagonists struggling in a hopeless world, so if they are made into cool articles, they are not very interesting. You can have cheats, but don't mess with the system. In this world view, powerful abilities must have powerful side effects to be worthwhile.

Please recommend novels with similar characters whose protagonists are mentally ill.

It's okay from the beginning (like the first hundred chapters), the plot is quite tight and logical, and the protagonist's character is not broken, which is interesting. At the end, the plot is stretched, trying to involve a big event and a shocking truth from the small events. Unfortunately, the author is not good at writing, there is no foreshadowing, and the climax speed is not well controlled. The reason for the creation of the protagonist's character has led to his madness being more highlighted. His humanity is too weak and his voice is too little. The reader cannot empathize with the protagonist, which indirectly makes it cumbersome and repetitive when interrogating others or telling the story himself. Because it is all pure dialogue. There are only other people's voices, and your desire to shape them into others is the protagonist's unconscious fear and disorienting thoughts. But the author did not strengthen the contrast between the protagonist's thoughts and those of others. New stories are constantly unfolding, but there is no careful use of words to shape the protagonist and the people or stories around him. The whole book seemed too rushed, and the main character acted like a repetitive, mechanical behavior. It's really annoying to watch. In the later stage, you continue to add new characters, but you don't carefully add text and ink to them. It is really uncomfortable to watch. I understand that you want to develop a big plot and a big conspiracy. It's you who wrote it, so I really can't stand to be complimented. It's okay for the protagonist to be crazy, but this kind of madness would be more detailed if it were shaped in small details. You keep adding new stories without looking at the logic and rationality. Let's just talk about the shark plan. Is it coherent? Don't you think it's involved? It feels like a story is being forced for the sake of a story. There is no sense of naturalness. In the final analysis, it is still too stiff and the plot development is not detailed enough, which is why you lack foreshadowing. There are too many blank spaces and too many meaningless shapes. I hope you can work hard, the author, this setting is actually quite novel. But what you created later was really too bad, a cyberpunk kind of consciousness-uploading clone. You should speak slowly, you are speaking too hastily. In the final analysis, it is due to character creation.

It's a very interesting book. I have some suggestions. Can the author stop writing the main character laughing all the time? It's really embarrassing 😭

Damn it, it's not from the game world. I'm a bad gamer, so it's hard to find someone who can write about stand-alone games.

Damn it, why isn't it popular? ! What a book