This Is What Villains Are Like

(Possible spoilers) It felt good at the beginning, but it felt less and less good at the end. Most of what the author wrote was how the protagonist laid out his plot, and slowly advanced the plot through a long-term narrative (as opposed to a simple pretentious slap in the face). The cool thing is that when the net is finally closed, the final gain is the most important. The initial layout of Su Qinghan killing Lin Fan was pretty good. Killing the protagonist of the original work and the first woman who took over the protagonist were okay in terms of creating a refreshing scene. The subsequent Zixia Mountain chapter is barely passable, including collecting Ling Zhuyun, obtaining the Immortal Birth Dew, and letting Ye Ming take the blame. It spent a lot of space emphasizing how powerful this Dew is, so I can get the excitement when I get it. Describing the strength of the enemy to a certain extent can enhance the sense of satisfaction when defeating the enemy, but describing the enemy too much will suppress the performance of the protagonist. In the part of Zixia Mountain, it feels that Ye Ming is described a bit too much. It makes people feel that the protagonist is always overwhelmed by the supporting characters, and it is not satisfying enough when he comes back after the liquidation. The feeling of closing the net in this part is obviously not as good as the first part. On the one hand, the female character was not recommended, and on the other hand, Ye Ming was not miserable enough. Compared to Lin Fan who was directly killed, although Ye Ming was said to be able to be manipulated casually, always talking about how lucky he was was a bit overwhelming, which made people feel that the protagonist was not good enough. Then comes the Imperial City chapter, and the feeling of excitement is even worse. It can be said that Ling Zhuyun is basically enamored of the protagonist. Whether to recommend or not is a matter of one sentence. But Xia Huang is different. When he gets married, he feels that he and the protagonist are not of the same mind. Marriage is a good place to highlight the excitement. But in the end, he did not recommend it and argued with the protagonist in various ways. It felt very uncomfortable. Such a good plot was wasted. Another thing is to get the Jade Seal, but it turns out that it can't be used. It's like giving back the feeling of being happy for a long time. It makes people feel that the protagonist has laid out the layout for so long, and what did he get in the end? No one pushed it, and the things were useless. After doing it for so long, it seemed like I had gained a lot of things, but it seemed like I had gained nothing. It could be said that the sense of satisfaction gives way to the rationality of the plot, but the plot is not very reasonable either. It feels like the author wanted to write something different from others, but he couldn't write it well due to lack of skills, so in the end he could only write something nondescript. Finally, as a harem party member, I was really unhappy when female characters were left alone.

The author does not need to pay attention to what some people say in the book review section. I have been reading villain novels for a long time. Your novel is considered a masterpiece in terms of character setting and writing style. It can be seen that the plot is also written with care. Come on! ! !

After three or four chapters of foreshadowing, he started singing and dancing. As expected, he is also a eunuch villain. This is it in the golden three chapters, tsk tsk.

Cleverly conceived and well written. It's a pity that the women who really love the protagonist are written as vases that are only taken care of occasionally, without even a chance to turn over the brand. Those who have impure thoughts or are just for dependence are used for close-ups... Although the harem is just for fun, if the writing is not strong enough, I can write a few less. The following is about forcing me to see what I want, which is scattered and ruined. Writing too much and being unable to control it leads to more and more vase and pitfalls... The first and middle stages are very attractive, but in the later stages, I skip chapters and then just rush through the ending.

This book review, my friend from Qidian is a bit too violent 🤐

Say one sentence or think about a dozen sentences in your mind, but the Pacific Ocean is not that watery.

Super water, the wheels of the car are slowly stained. Writing a mindless fantasy fantasy novel in which the protagonist goes against the routine, and the result is that it feels more routine and mindless.

The first 50 chapters of this book were okay, but by chapter 65 I found something wrong. Why can't Yuan Yuan start a harem again? Two women and one man is acceptable, but how to round it out later, and whether the plot will rely on women to develop the plot in the future. I feel that it has lost the feeling of a cool novel and is a bit eunuch. I hope this is my illusion, and I hope it will surprise me later.

I read it based on the invincible flow in the introduction, and found that the author's writing style is quite good, and each chapter is large and full. On the other hand, there are many invincible articles that are not well written. The text in each chapter is too white and loose, and the flow is 😁 I hope the follow-up combat power will not collapse.

The plot is okay but a bit toxic. The protagonist can't practice. This and this. When he can practice, the day lily will be cold. His peers can't keep up. It also takes time to practice the techniques, so the protagonist is just a waste.

This is a villain novel, and I think it's okay. Some of the villain novels I read before repeated the routine, and after solving one protagonist, another protagonist emerged. This one is not bad. It is written around some events and opportunities in the previous life of one protagonist, which caused the subsequent timeline to be messed up! Later, the protagonist doubts himself whether he has passed through the book! Let's talk about rebirth! The protagonist's sister was a powerful person in her previous life. She came back against the long river of time and wanted to make up for some mistakes. In her previous life, she killed Jiang Lan without asking for the reason! In addition, the writing style of the protagonist's return to the capital is a bit like the dragon talisman of Meng Ruishenji. The dynasty is stronger than the sect, and there are immortal-killing arrows and the like! So far, it looks pretty good. A villain should look like a villain. The protagonist spends most of his time hiding behind the scenes and planning everything.

The chatter in the car is too procrastinating. I personally don't recommend it.

Ah, brain, brain is running away!

It was set up earlier, but in the third chapter the author started to slap himself in the face. . 😅In Chapter 9, I was slapped in the face by myself again. . 🤤

First, it can be felt that the simulation was not planned very much, or that it was only simulated for a certain thing, without any thought of maximizing benefits. Second, the problem of simulator charging is basically a common problem, but this one is even more outrageous. The charging increases directly and exponentially, zzz, and then I wrote an opposite setting. For example, it is like you can upgrade if you run, but you cannot run. Third, due to charging issues, the author made a new setting, but it is even more outrageous. Basically, it can be said that a top monk can be simulated with only 2000. Turtle, if you spend 2000 once, I think you may be invincible. I saw this and felt that the author has changed it, but the change is even more outrageous, so if you can accept it, continue reading.

Cool article, don't read it with your brain, you will suffer if you do.

Book at home and play at Lion Peak? :,, Um, I uh uh uh llbu

I read Chapter 33 and I really can't stand it anymore. Let me tell you about the plot that I can't stand anymore. The protagonist's parents found a fairy fetus from ancient ruins, hatched a little girl, and adopted her as their adopted daughter, who is also the protagonist's adopted sister. The protagonist's talent is at the genius level, and the protagonist's step sister's talent is at the level of the monster. The protagonist and the step sister have a good relationship. They said that they would marry the protagonist when they grow up. When the protagonist was a child, he was a little frustrated because he couldn't keep up with his elder sister in cultivation. The protagonist's mother didn't want her son to be disheartened, so she dug out the adopted daughter's delicate heart and pressed it into the protagonist's body. Then she failed to press it properly, which led to the loss of the protagonist's cultivation. What an outrageous mother. She opened the door for outrageous things. It was so outrageous.

The early reading seems okay. The plot writing is much better than other villain stories. The only drawback is that someone in the comment area said that the author was coerced by the Qidian father-in-law group to reduce the harem scenes. Maybe the author has not realized that this group of people will always be loud and small. The more demanding people are, the more picky they will be and the lower their willingness to pay. If there is an unsatisfactory plot, they will abandon the book. However, those of us who come for the harem can accept it as long as there are no special poisonous points.

It's okay to be a villain, but the heroine advises not to take too many roles. Most of the female protagonists in tmd villain novels started in the dozen or so ✊ aesthetic fatigue

Now the sixth realm can't keep the protagonist? Then if you let him go, aren't you looking for trouble for yourself? And you are involved in the protagonist's luck here. Do you think God will not compensate him for other opportunities if his luck robs him of his opportunity? If something goes wrong, someone will come to the rescue in advance of the plot. It is obvious that you are not following the plot you are familiar with, and you still want to intercept the opportunity based on the plot you know? As a non-cultivator, even if you get the opportunity in advance, you won't be able to practice faster than the protagonist. I feel like the more I write, the more stupid I become. I can't even keep my most powerful sixth-level person, so I have to let him go again. Now, you can't deal with someone from the seventh level, and you still want to deal with him later? Isn't this starting to lower your wits again? Don't mention how you plan to deal with it later. You can't deal with it now. How can you ensure that this person's luck will not develop even more in the future? The more people you know, the harder it is to deal with them. If this attack doesn't directly crush you to death, is it easier to deal with them in the later stages than in the early stages? Do you think you can win if you know the plot? The direction of the plot has obviously changed. Isn't it really stupid to still think so? I thought it was good and wanted to follow it, but now it feels no different from a mindless novel.

It looks pretty cool, why are there so many trolls? . .

This kind of white writing can actually be a high-quality product? Is there no author for the article?

At the beginning, she was persuaded by her strength to retreat. The woman in front of her dared to force her way into the prime minister's palace. She was afraid of this and that after you said a few words. The protagonist even took the initiative to lean on her sword, which really treated the readers as fools 🙂🙂

It's really strange that so many people read the Xiaobai article about Jiangzhi with gusto.

Let's put this novel on a female channel. It's just like some novels written by female channels. A villain is written in a high-sounding way. When does the villain have the obligation to explain things clearly before taking action? ? ?

So aren't most of the female protagonists nowadays actually the wives of the original male protagonists, and all of them liked the original male protagonists? Doesn't this mean that others are playing the leftovers and have enough understanding to deal with it? It's like there is no lightning protection at all😓

After taking a look, I think it's probably the author from Tomato. Judging by his writing style, he should be a female author. The authors from Tomato all have a problem. They have no outline and no theme. In the middle, they start to draw maps without thinking. They want to write about the grand background, but they can't handle the characters and plots in the front. To put it bluntly, they tend to care about the beginning and not the end.

A short article that ridiculed the mentally retarded son-in-law, but ended up writing the same thing himself, super smart, 666

Why do you put a female-channeled novel in a male-channeled novel? It's so annoying I've never seen a villain who is so thought-provoking that he's so ruthless and decisive that you can't even see it. The content of the novel smells like a puppet, which makes me feel hopeless.