Red Mansion Beijingwang

A modern person travels back in time and actually opens a brothel to make money. You can copy poems and novels, but he actually opens a brothel and works as a turtle man. The son of the Supreme Emperor was adopted into the Prince's Mansion and became the Turtle Gong. He was the kind who stood guard at the door to collect money and listen to the sound.

I disliked it very much from the beginning, and it was both pretentious and nonsensical. Since it was about the Red Mansion, it was definitely going to be a harem, a traitor, and a stallion. Then why did you insist on saying that you can't touch women at the age of fifteen? Is it fun to pretend to be innocent? If you like to pretend to be innocent, why should you write about Red Mansion?

Last time I watched a story about the son of the Emperor of the Red Chamber who traveled through time, and when I saw Xue Baochai, I couldn't walk 🤭🤭🤭

We all make salt or sugar, so why don't we make some soap or some wine! Only you are still running a brothel. Some things can be said but not done, and some things can be said but not said. No wonder you are stuck in a traffic jam~ You deserve it ... Bad grades... Forget the front, forget the middle, and in the end: Really screw up 🙂

It looks pretty good, but there are two issues I don't understand. The first one is if the Zhen family is arrogant and domineering in the local area with the support of the old concubine, why can't they find someone to inquire about it, and let the news come back to the concubine. No matter how much you like Zhen Hua, you still have to consider the Beijing Palace in the end. Isn't it better than struggling with it yourself now? The second problem is that Qin Keqing is indeed charming, but it is also a real problem that her family background does not match her. It would be embarrassing to become a princess. In the past, the protagonist repeatedly hoped to marry as his wife. At first, I thought it might be for self-protection, but after more times, I always felt a little unsane. However, these two questions are not harmful, and the writing is indeed quite interesting to read.

I just hope that the emotions can be written more delicately, and the protagonist must not be written as a brainless idiot who can't walk when he sees a woman.

Water soluble

It's not interesting. I want to be young and have no writing skills. I want to be wanton and have no character. I don't fight for power and gain, but I am being pressed every step of the way. Even a smiling kiln girl can control the prince. I want to ask her where she got the courage.

Poison point inventory: 1. A time traveler actually relies on brothels to make money, and brothels still account for a large part. There are more descriptions of a prostitute than the golden hairpin of the Red Mansion, and the character creation is disgusting. 2. The first time I met Liu Xianglian and Qin Zhong, they already revealed the Nantong atmosphere. When I met Xue Pan, it was even more Nantong. They are really disgusting.

Wherever there is thunder, you are really outrageous in giving a daughter to Jia Rong and his son.

I don't even understand why you spend so much ink describing a few girls. There are only sixty chapters in the content before it is released. You have seven or eight chapters writing about a few girls. How come there are so many golden hairpins in the Red Mansion that you can't write about them? You have to write about a few girls. They are disgusting.

It's a high-stakes, low-stakes story. The male protagonist is a prince. The writing is like a loser. He is so obsessed with a so-called ruined flower and a willow. The writing is also a bit indifferent. There are indeed criticisms, but it can also be read.

1. In the past, I was determined to be a eunuch, but I also took the initiative to tease others. As a result, I was neither good nor inferior. 2. There are no benefits brought by time traveling. As a result, I went to open a brothel and still relied on my identity. Whether to make money or not was all forced. 3. After traveling through time, he knew that his engagement was the second pit, and then he backed away, only to fall into the first pit. Looking at it this way, why is there no original version of Beijing Wang Shuang? After all, the advantage of time travel over the original version is that you survive the ending, but it seems that only the imperial party has this ending. It just feels weird. Anyway, I don't think it's as good as the original King of Beijing.

I just wanted to look good, but why did I come out of a brothel, someone who has been deceived and played with? It's hard to adapt to the span of my identity. Does it look good in the end? Has anyone tried poison? I'm afraid of poison

It's not an exaggeration to say it's rubbish. It was written entirely according to modern people's thinking. It's obvious that a dignitary from the founding dynasty wrote a modern DS. To put it bluntly, the author has little knowledge.

Why does a 🐔female have so many scenes? He also wrote a long paragraph about how he was not innocent in the past and was entrusted to other people. Why, the green-haired prince?

I can only say that there is a reason for the upper limit

Little Mom's Weddings + Picking Up Broken Shoes Still Serious and Standing

Disgusting, don't write original characters if you don't have the writing power, feed me a lot of shit, fuck, all the poison is coming to my face, there are no pitfalls that should be stepped on, he can write two million words despite being scolded, it shows that he is a fool.

You must know that this is a fool who can give away royal gifts to others and directly commit the crime of disrespect. I actually admire Jia Baoyu, whose IQ is comparable to that of the Minced Meat Emperor. This is really prepared for Caishikou.

It's very enjoyable to write emotional scenes 😍😍😍 I like the emotional scenes with the girl in the red building, I'm a bookworm for sure. If you write pretty well, your grades should be high.

The plan is good, but, 1: Where will the military spending come from? You closed your lips and closed your lips, but the Ministry of Revenue left it to you to approve? Two: How to solve the problem of killing good people and taking credit for merit? There are many things. The sky is high and the emperor is far away. Who knows how to massacre a village. Three: How to solve the corruption problems in military expenditures, food and grass, and pensions for "soldiers who died in battle"? As soon as the various military posts send out troops, they have to pay for ten days' worth of food and wages every day, and they also have to requisition civilians to transport the supplies. Don't you think that sending out troops is just a matter for the army? If one soldier dies, a hundred people will be repaid, and then the original soldiers' names will be changed afterwards. There is a lot of profit here. I can also list ten for you.

After reading 80% of the book, the author's writing is good, but I won't talk about running a brothel. Yuanchun was chosen as the main concubine. She didn't have any interesting scenes in the original work and became the main concubine. There were too many scenes, and the writing was not bad but nothing outstanding. It was very boring to watch. Another thing is that Yuanchun is the daughter of Mrs. Wang. The most exciting part of The Red Mansion is probably bullying Baoyu and suppressing Mrs. Wang. Man, marrying Yuan Chun made me unhappy from beginning to end. In terms of emotional drama, this garden drama accounts for most of it. It can be said that there is no main plot, but most of it is Yuan Chun. She almost disappears to welcome the spring. There are not many scenes to explore the spring. Xue Baochai actually disappears and appears from time to time. There are almost no emotional scenes with the protagonist. By the way, Qin Keqing, who appeared in the opening scene, did not stop until 70% in order to avoid giving birth to a child. She still had scenes in the early stage, but she disappeared in the middle and late stages. The second sister and the third sister did not know what they were written for, and they appeared two or three times. Several of the original female protagonists are also dirty and smelly, and they are being accepted, and the Twelve Hairpins are not clearly written. However, Lin Daiyu's writing is quite good, remarkable, has a little temper, and is quite interesting. This is the most outstanding part of this book. In general, Liancao+ Shuhuang can be read, and it is just right for driving. It is better to say that this book is essentially driving.

Idiot protagonist, mentally immature, not like a time traveler

How could Shui Rong take Qin Keqing's possession? Isn't it incest? The daughter of the late prince

The author has written several Red Mansions fan novels, but they are always not popular. The Final Eunuch, should the author reflect on it? My suggestions have already been mentioned in your new novel.

How about "The King of Red Mansions"? Are you writing about the prince?

I just saw it on Tomato and found the content very familiar. The plot is basically the same. Did the author himself or someone else transfer it?

Keep it tight, I'm worried that you will enter the palace.

I thought I would accept Princess Beijing. After all, the protagonist came from time travel, and the old Bentley is also a Bentley. If you don't believe it, look at Liu Yifei's mother.