The Prince of Red Mansion

The prince and the maid's father cooperate in business. The prince takes the third floor 666

The protagonist wants to make Yuanchun the crown prince

The logic doesn't make sense. Even if the emperor hates the prince, he can't agree to the Jia daughter who has a stain on her family to be the princess. In ancient times, the prince was a country that could not tolerate any stain. Jia He colluded with foreigners to sell salt and iron, and Wang Xifeng took over the litigation and usury. In these original works, the royal family was aware of it, and it was also the reason why the Jia family was ransacked.

Chapter 17, when Dai Quan appears, it is enough to describe what kind of person Dai Quan is based on what the protagonist has learned about Dai Quan after staying in the palace for so many years. Why draw the readers back to the world of the original work? 😅😅😅 Even though Qin Keqing is here, when writing fan fiction, you should reduce the connection with the original work, only borrow the settings of the original work, and make the world of this book an independent world, so that you can have a sense of immersion. Why must we use this kind of "original story about that person and that thing" to describe it? Although I have written fan fiction, I still have to bring the readers back to the original world, which makes the readers very confused 😒 and has no sense of immersion

This author doesn't have any serious novels 😡 The most hateful thing is that I am following every one of his books

From the first chapter, we can tell that it is full of female pornography and contains too much invalid information. When exercising, I wear loose and comfortable clothes. You describe wearing court clothes when exercising. Would you wear an evening dress to the gym? The evaluation is that it is flashy and the writing is too weak. The sea, you are all water

It is known that modern emperors want to overthrow the four major families. You, the crown prince, at least in name only, want a woman from the Jia family to be the crown prince? Are you serious? Besides, didn't she enter the palace? The woman who enters the palace is at least nominally your father's woman, so write that?

The good-for-nothing prince himself took the initiative to file a report and apply for the appointment of Yuanchun as the crown prince. No matter what you think in your heart, you, a prince with no real power, can't speak out. I'll poison you to death.

It's better to just write about the emperor. It's like the book about the rebellion where I realized it was the Red Mansion. I wrote about the garden opera and then mixed in some court affairs.

Can you please leave the original work alone? Do you know what perspective this narrative is based on? Let me tell you, this is a narration from the perspective of a red scholar. It's like writing a paper. I don't want to read the paper at all. I don't want to know what the original work is like. You borrow the settings of the original work yourself, but you don't express "what the original work is like". You want to express these original settings as "the perspective and content of the characters in the book you wrote." Instead of writing a paper from the perspective of a red scholar about "what is the original work like" It's too dramatic

Just wait for the eunuch. If the data is not good, just wait for the eunuch.

However, the logical connection between these detailed descriptions and action descriptions and the characters, environment, scenes, and even contexts is very far-fetched and not integrated with each other at all. It gives the impression that these detailed descriptions and action descriptions are simply unnecessary and simply redundant. The extra and meaningless words are really tiring to read 😒😒

Diaosi can't write historical articles, so go ahead and write YY articles.

Because the biggest reason is that all the golden hairpins in the Red Mansion are a constant problem in marriage. They are concubines, widowers, and businessmen. Just think about it, why do you convince your father to agree to marry them? The control of marriage is never in your hands. It is difficult to marry a concubine, let alone a main concubine?

You have written several Red Mansions books. Are you tired?

The Jia family and the Wang family, I feel unlucky to be attached to one of them. The author chose Jia Yuanchun very wisely and attached both the Jia family and the Wang family.

The author has written about Red Mansions before, but it is not suitable for writing about power politics and struggles, or even about the distribution of benefits from the upper class. It is really not possible.

Can you always end up anticlimactic? The first two books ended inexplicably😡😡😡

Come on, author, write according to your plan, don't be disturbed 🙂 I feel pretty good

It's boring to keep writing these love stories

This book is rated as a qualified harem drama. Because the protagonist's status is too high (the prince), the garden drama can only be shown in the imperial palace and the east palace. Logically speaking, these places should be better combined with political life, but so far I haven't seen much progress in the court career line. It depends on what the author writes later, but you can still take a look.

I like the author's writing style, keep working hard 😍 It's normal if the protagonist is a prince or a prince, but the funniest one is a concubine or an ordinary person 🤪 I really want to climb up step by step, I don't want to think about whether Jia's house can withstand when his house is ransacked 🤭

The writing is all about the lower body and the plot is not advanced at all?

The author doesn't need to be so detailed...

You really don't listen to advice! As the author, your advantage is your description of emotional scenes. If you don't know how to write plot development, you can learn from others or AI. Write less pornographic articles! You don't need to accept everyone when writing Red Mansions, as long as each character has the ending he deserves!

You are all a puppet prince Why did you take the initiative to make Yuanchun the crown prince?

Jia Yuanchun was the wife of the Supreme Emperor. Why did Jia Yuanchun disappear so early? It was because the Supreme Emperor was gone and she was buried. Do you understand? ?