Uncle Honglouyun

The recent ones are a bit watered down and the number of words is also decreasing. I suggest the author work harder.

It feels more and more ridiculous. Compared to the previous one, the plot at the back is a bit too watery.

I watched The Red Mansion just for Qin Keqing. Do you think you want to create an original heroine? Excuse me. Excuse me.

😰Why hasn't this been updated yet?

Why did you stop after the first update? It's too short.

I hope that the protagonist can take a step further outside the palace. Recently, so many chapters have been hanging around among the daughters in the palace every day. Apart from being favored by the emperor, I wonder where he can have such great influence.

How can I put it, the protagonist has just returned home to separate himself and establish his authority, but in the blink of an eye, a maid dares to talk back to you and be disrespectful to you, and then the protagonist doesn't care and treats her like a modern 12 or 3-year-old girl... Oh my God, was the suffering you suffered in feudal ancient times in vain? Why do you still look at it from a modern perspective! You just established your authority with Jia Mu and showed that you are not to be bullied, but then a maid can argue with you and talk back. What do you want to express, is everyone equal? Yuanyang is at least superficially respectful to you, but Qingwen directly criticizes you, and confronts you relentlessly. She is even more awesome than Lin Yutan! Oh my god, just ask him to quit.

This is a deliberately abusive description of the protagonist, haha, there is a reason why you are not popular.

Why do so many people who write about Red Mansions like to write about pathological filial piety in order to govern the country with filial piety? As a son, even if the father is unforgiving and beats his son and abuses him, it is okay, but the son cannot resist. Resistance is disobedience and unfilial, and he deserves to be beaten to death. The survival of this so-called country governed by filial piety is just a novel. I have no interest in reading this setting.

Starting from about chapter 60, it is "Jia Mu makes the protagonist unhappy - the protagonist tolerates it because he is a junior - the protagonist has a quarrel with Jia's family, Jia Mu is angry - Jia Mu wants to ease the relationship with the protagonist for the Jia family - the protagonist and Jia Mu reconcile", and this is an endless loop. I don't know if it is water or the outline is like this.

It's actually very uncomfortable to see this princess moving into the big room, because this princess has not been outstanding at all so far, and she has been forcibly assigned to the big room, squeezing the heroine of the Red Mansion into the fourth room. To be honest, it's a bit much. An original heroine can be used, but don't be so blunt, especially when the character is not likeable yet.

What I wrote above is okay, but this princess is really disgusting

It's the same routine as the book "Tiantianqingqing". He talks about his integrity and says he doesn't want it, but in the end he jumps into the cesspit again.

The princess is really superfluous. There are already many female characters in the Red Mansion, so I went to great lengths to make up one, which takes up space and is not flattering.

So what if the protagonist is loyal to the emperor, but the royal family treats him like a dog, and they even put such a ridiculous princess in his mouth to disgust the protagonist. The key point is that the protagonist can't refuse, and he has to respect her ancestors, so he might as well rebel.

I'm really speechless about the author's saucy manipulation. How much do you sweat and bleed while sitting on the battlefield? It turned out that he was a sixth-grade military general, and he suddenly took the protagonist to Gongyuan. What was he doing? Just keep walking after coming out of the park. It would be good if the relationship can be at least eight to nine levels.

This is too cowardly, let alone Mother Jia, how come Mrs. Wang and the big-faced treasure can also scorn the male protagonist, and the male protagonist, Count Chaopin, is also a close official of the emperor. After writing and writing, do you still give in after a few harsh words? He was disrespectful to the patriarch, and slandered the emperor's confidants by making unfounded remarks. So what if the male protagonist slapped Mrs. Wang twice on the spot. He was forced to open the ancestral hall, and Mrs. Wang was too talkative during the stay. It would be fine to shave Mrs. Wang out of the Jia family. What are you afraid of?

Several Red Mansions novels are often more in line with normal people's thinking at the beginning, but very morbid at the end. As an important minister of the imperial court, he seems to have no official duties and social interactions all day long. He spends the whole day in the garden with his daughters, just like Baoyu. He takes the favor he has earned with all his efforts and goes to a bunch of ignorant women in the Rongguo Mansion who have long been out of the fifth service. There are also enemies, Mrs. Wang, Baoyu and other enemies. Xue family and historian, the protagonist also has to work hard to manage. I feel that the protagonist's behavior is too stupid and bad, like a dog, barking and drinking, bleeding and working hard, but he has been complained by so many people, and few people remember him as a good person! I don't know why the author likes to lick Yuan Chun so much, and he doesn't hesitate to spend tens of thousands of wealth for this old palace maid. After reading The Red Mansion, you should know that Yuanchun is a trap. She comes home at night and doesn't even pay attention to her own brother Jia Huan. What's more, the protagonist is such a wild relative, and she may have died in the palace a long time ago. She suddenly gave birth to more than ten levels from a palace maid, became a noble concubine, and got the title of a dead person, which is very strange!

Jia Yuan, Jia Yan (this is the elder brother) of Rongguo Mansion and Ningguo Mansion, Jia Daishan, Jia Daihua, Jia She, Jia Jing, Jia Lian and Jia Zhen; up to the time of Jia Yun in this book, there have been five generations. He Rongguofu is just a clan member, and Jia Shi can't suppress Jia Yun with his filial piety, not to mention that he is still the clan leader. Officials won't care about you even if you are dismissed from the official position. According to Confucianism, even after the death of Mrs. Jia, the Ningguo Mansion does not have to observe filial piety for the ordinary people. It is polite to shout when they meet.

When I read Chapter 11, I saw that a nun was bullying her to the point of being bullied. What the protagonist did was simply to show the slaves how easy she was to bully... In the end, it was the little maid who was quarreling with her who took the lead. To be honest, we didn't realize at all that this was someone who had been on the battlefield for four years from the frontier... He was really a loser.

Unbelievable! At the beginning, he made a big fuss in the Rongxi Hall of the Rongguo Mansion and spent thousands of taels of gold to cut off the father-son relationship with Jia Zhen (later he asked Jia's mother to pay for him to practice archery and horse riding. Don't you know how to save some?). The protagonist was written so that anyone could step on him. When Wang Baoshan's family wanted to play the protagonist, the protagonist came up with another idea, saying that he wanted to tease Qingwen. , To see what would happen to Qingwen if he compromised, it was quite funny, although in the end he slapped the evil slave in the face, and then went to the Piao Jiaofang Division with Xue Pan, whom he met for the first time, and fell in love with a wrq old madam (I originally thought it was just for superficial work, and it was okay to get addicted to handcraft, but in the end, he actually fell asleep, which is really disgusting!)

That's it, I saw Princess Lily and gave up the book The Red Mansion is all about the Twelve Golden Hairpins. In the end, you can go to Haobaodai to give you an inexplicable original heroine. If the heroine you wrote is excellent, that's it. There is no sparkle at all. The talent makes me feel sick.

The princess I wrote about is so disgusting! Lily is so disgusting

Fortunately, I didn't see the back part. I didn't expect that there would be a princess after reading the comments. I mean, the princess in the foreshadowing is so long, can you handle it if you charge so much? She doesn't know how to describe women, so she can only "tear your mouth apart and look at your skin." You described Daiyu like a tool, and she was entrusted to Lin Ruhai for no reason. Would you entrust your daughter to a man you have only met once?

There is a key point that the author did not expect: the future heir of the Duke of Ningguo Mansion is his wife! How could it be possible to adopt an adopted daughter brought back by the Qin family? ? ? How is it possible? The Duke of the country is the greatest honorer besides the king with a different surname! Even marrying the daughter of a civil servant in the Qin family is impossible. She is not from the right family! Not to mention marrying an adopted daughter? ! Qin Keqing is a junior official in his father's civil service system! Definitely lower than level 4! Being a good match was the first consideration when getting married in ancient times!

It is suggested that the author change the name to "Red Mansion Pig". Originally, as the heroine, Lin Daiyu would be fine with a few more concubines, but if she had to create a new Lily Princess, she would have to suppress Lin Daiyu. Seeing Wang Xifeng's wild thoughts, Second Sister You and Third Sister also wanted it, and even Older Mother You also had ideas. There is also Xue Baochai as the companion of Princess Lily. According to the author's urinary nature, it is estimated that he will be included in the book in the end. Should we wait until Yuanchun comes out of the palace and get her too? Exploring the spring and welcoming the spring will follow? In the end, my aunt also did it? ——"My Days as a Breeding Pig in the Red Mansion".

Good guy, the unexpected eunuch

After reading Chapter 70, I didn't find that the male protagonist has any special skills. He can't be called trash, but he is no different from trash.

What the hell are you writing? It's so rambling and long-winded. There's no ups and downs throughout the whole process. It's like a military general who is timid in doing things. This writer should go home to Fanshu. He's not suitable for writing.

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